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Great FF even though, I haven’t even read it. But Batman still solos😹🙏😭💀💯[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I like the main characters personality enough to get over the slightly annoying grammatical problems, but the story fundamentally suffers from the main character starting as OP and actually get more OP as the story continues. When the character is already unbeatable why add more OP powers?
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It's fine, although the change of the MC of chapter 19 is unpleasant... .............................................................................
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There can be slight improvement in plot and the mc character. Currently she looks indecisive in her dealing of JL. Hiding that she can surbstomp whole league doesn't make sense.
usually I don't like the strong acting weak fan fictions but I'm glad I gave this one a chance I'm glad I followed my gut feeling this fan fiction is very captivating I love it. Honestly the author is using the fan fiction's potential very well I like that there are some parts to improve but so far they are being smoothed out.
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I love the writing style and the world that this book is set in. I have been looking for a good yuri book to read. The fact that it is DC makes it more attractive to read. With regards to the story development, it would be beneficial if there were some chapters on the MC's daily life, character development, relationship development with family, school stuff and love interest development/fluff. This would give the novel a more natural feel and be better overall as it will paint the MC as a more real character and allow the readers to enjoy relating with the MC.
Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section?
Only at 15+ chapters and I'm loving it! Aside from missing words and letters, wrong pronouns, its really good. Also this is my personal opinion of the MC and I love her! She's amazing and really funny. I love that she chose to be a vigilante instead of a superhero. And I especially love her relationship with her family, it kinda makes me jealous. I also like that she's not into the "just imprison the villains maybe they will change they're mind" which I really REALLY love. So good job to the Author for making such an amazing character.
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i would love to more slice of life part of this..... her using brains, money to become combination of both batman & supe..... also a good name is required .... . furthermore anticipation for her partner ..
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I loved how you made the protagonist, I want to see the reactions of the family when they find out what she does.---------------------------
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i cant wait for more, I like how you added ninja art for her to give her more then just superhuman fighting ability. you look down her why this is for word count
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love it. hope you continue to write more. ¡!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!???!!!
decent writing, decent but rushed story. I recommend that you take things slowly, not go to direct action. write about the quiet life of your protagonist, his family and his day to day life and every 3 or 4 chapters put up a fight, just don't force it.
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keep up the good work author the story is good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Great FF even though, I haven’t even read it. But Batman still solos😹🙏😭💀💯[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I like the main characters personality enough to get over the slightly annoying grammatical problems, but the story fundamentally suffers from the main character starting as OP and actually get more OP as the story continues. When the character is already unbeatable why add more OP powers?
I love it Jhgmjgfmhgfkhfdmjgxnvcxnhfsktrdhnxnvfxkhfdkhrdnhgxhfnzjhfsutesjhfshreajgfckhgxkhgzjgfxmbgckhfxkbvxjhgdutrdykgdiyrsu35quteahfsajgdsutewkhgfkjgxkhgcljhvkhvkjlbpiujñlugouyte
It's fine, although the change of the MC of chapter 19 is unpleasant... .............................................................................
Spoiler de révélation There can be slight improvement in plot and the mc character. Currently she looks indecisive in her dealing of JL. Hiding that she can surbstomp whole league doesn't make sense.
usually I don't like the strong acting weak fan fictions but I'm glad I gave this one a chance I'm glad I followed my gut feeling this fan fiction is very captivating I love it. Honestly the author is using the fan fiction's potential very well I like that there are some parts to improve but so far they are being smoothed out.
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I love the writing style and the world that this book is set in. I have been looking for a good yuri book to read. The fact that it is DC makes it more attractive to read. With regards to the story development, it would be beneficial if there were some chapters on the MC's daily life, character development, relationship development with family, school stuff and love interest development/fluff. This would give the novel a more natural feel and be better overall as it will paint the MC as a more real character and allow the readers to enjoy relating with the MC.
Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section?
Only at 15+ chapters and I'm loving it! Aside from missing words and letters, wrong pronouns, its really good. Also this is my personal opinion of the MC and I love her! She's amazing and really funny. I love that she chose to be a vigilante instead of a superhero. And I especially love her relationship with her family, it kinda makes me jealous. I also like that she's not into the "just imprison the villains maybe they will change they're mind" which I really REALLY love. So good job to the Author for making such an amazing character.
Spoiler de révélation i would love to more slice of life part of this..... her using brains, money to become combination of both batman & supe..... also a good name is required .... . furthermore anticipation for her partner ..
Spoiler de révélation I loved how you made the protagonist, I want to see the reactions of the family when they find out what she does.---------------------------
Spoiler de révélation i cant wait for more, I like how you added ninja art for her to give her more then just superhuman fighting ability. you look down her why this is for word count
Spoiler de révélation love it. hope you continue to write more. ¡!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!???!!!
decent writing, decent but rushed story. I recommend that you take things slowly, not go to direct action. write about the quiet life of your protagonist, his family and his day to day life and every 3 or 4 chapters put up a fight, just don't force it.
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keep up the good work author the story is good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]