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Author's here, the sequel of this novel is out and you can search for the novel called "Destroying My Own World" on Webnovel. Those who have finished reading this book can check it out, thank you.
Melvin started out pretty good. Y’all had pretty good concept on a strong OP main character and then he just turned into a trash fire the main character all of a sudden it becomes weak because of course with these people on WebNovel they have to be some looming big bad the ultimate big, bad brother characters, all powerless turn to be trash, and then betrayal, and all that fun stuff that you know cliché after cliché it was so goodcharacter was good supporting characters are good and then I don’t know but I guess they switched authors cause it turned into trash so you can read about I don’t know 50-ish 100 chapters after that put it down because it turns garbage so don’t spin your money for sure
Honest reviews are here.. Hmmm... It is really hard to say if it is good or bad because I LOVE OP MC, but the problem is, the author nerf the MC.. As you read the synopsis, the MC is transmigrated into his own novel.. MC creates the plot, the drama, the character for each one, including the God in his novel world, but unfortunately, MC is weaker than the God that he created in his own novel.. MC is OP compared to other humans, but he almost dies fighting with one God.. Well, it is understandable that the author nerf MC.. The author can make MC seem more OP by not making him fight against God, but the author still does it to make MC seem weak.. MC also pretends to be nice, but actually, he harbours deep hate toward his own novel Protagonist, which becomes his rival instead of his allies.. MC also becomes a coward when he learns from the prophecy that his novel Protagonist will kill him even though he is a lot stronger than his novel Protagonist.. MC is Lv100 (max level), and all other top character are like around Lv20, and MC doesn't seem as OP as we imagine if we compare their level.. MC seems strong due to his max level, not due to his skill.. MC strongest skill and his 2nd strongest skill also come from the strongest God, which also threatens MC to not go overboard that will disturb the balance of the world.. The author gave the MC power, but he also limited MC action.. So, this is why I said it hard to judge if this novel is good or bad because the author wants to make OP MC novel, but the author also nerf the MC a lot of time which kinda pointless if make OP MC and at the same time, the author nerf MC.. It is like cancelling each other.. Or maybe the author tries to attract a reader who loves OP MC, and at the same time, he wants to attract readers who like weak to strong MC..
This novel is a hidden gem and heavily underrated 💎✨ i loved this author eagerly looking forward towards your next venture 👀
I liked the main character, the side characters were original The ending of the book made sense thank you for wrote this book I liked the main character, the side characters were original The ending of the book made sense
...i do not know what to comment everything is going fast and the mc is soo inconsistent in character it is afoul to read
Thank you ❤️ the Author For presenting such wonderful Novel 🤩 that I ever Read in my life ✨️. The Novel is really the Masterpiece 👊 That I ever thought It has all Genes 🎭 that one needed to Read. I Greatly 😍 Recommending To You All To Must Read 📑 it Out. I hope The Author Can 😚 Bring Again A Novel Which is much more😉 Equivalent To It...🦊
Great story, good plot, properly written characters. MC seems to be speed running lung cancer.
Finally I Have Completed This Novel,When I have started this novel i thought it would be like same as other novel but what I got is something different and i enjoyed it , the ending is also good but it would be better if author start Volume 2 as 2.0 Version of New Game With All Other God & Goddess and Something Out Of Universe Just Like Multiverse Or Cultivation World or Maybe Something Intresting. Because it's Ending Like MCU Movies Where We Can Expect New Sequel or Something Like That. I Genuinely Feel That Volume 1st is just the Foundation of A Bigger Plot of Endgame Which is Started By Mykel. Overall For Me It is Right Know Better than those novel with the concept of Reincarnation Inside their Novel , Maybe For Some People it is not the best but For Me it Is a Balance One Which I Like it. Request to Author - I hope You Will Continue this Series Dear Author and Next Series You Will Answer The Region Behind Reincarnation and Mysteries Behind Sasha Death From Real World etc. Waiting For Positive Response 😊
This story was lit asf. Great world building, interpretation of mythology, characters building, and development. 100% would recommend it. For people who enjoy cold heartless MC that actually use his head more than his fist even though he has the biggest fist. There are still typo here and there but much better than those Chinese MTL novels.
It was so good. There were a few spelling mistakes and casual writing errors, but they were ignorable really. The novel is already finished. I loved the story, it went way different than I had expected when I started reading it, and I really liked it. The only thing I can remember having any problem with is the ending. I‘d have loved it if Nasha was still alive and Mykel and her met again and got together at the end. The characters were absolutely great, and I loved how they interacted with each other. I skipped chapters 390-550 and I’ll go read them in a while, but in the chapters I read, I’m surprised that Lillith didn’t end up with Mykel. The background for the world is really well thought out, and it goes into a lot of detail, I can’t think of any issues other than the beginning and that Mykel got a lot of hate for his novel that seems like it would have been really good other than Asmond, but it might’ve gone into detail in the chapters I skipped. it was really good, I definitely recommend it to be read.
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i thought I'm never going to see this novel again 🥲 but author decide make a sequel😃. hello author when is your the sequel comes out and what the novel name?
Very good .................................................................................................................................................
Binged it all in less than 4 days. I regret nothing. What an amazing ride. Thank you author.
Really great story.I love this novel, it includes all the things which i need. It has harem which is great but it really delivers it really well. World building is something which is very interesting, it has many world plus details. OVERALL BEST NOVEL FOR ME CURRENTLY
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One of the few novels with overpowered tags I'm okay reading because MC is someone who uses his powers to play tricks on the protagonist, it's satisfying
everthing is good about this novel, i specially like the MC but bro if you have the guts to be hated like Mykel in the beggenning of this novel, just try to make the end of this novel just a dream, i will found you !!
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All I gotta say is please do not drop this novel. It completely blew my expectations and has great originality. Grammar needs work but it is slowly improving and the pacing/direction of the story is intriguing.
hello there I found this novel and I have to say it's the perfection I like about this novel author
Just gave a golden ticket.. didn't even read the synopsis BUT I believe its gonna be a masterpiece cuz this author doesn't disappoint and I can tell its gonna be a banger I pray hopefully........JK
I love it I didn't had much expectations but unexpected things happens and so did in this case
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Overall a good noveL, BUT i'm not here to talk about the good things, i'm here to talk about the 2 big bad things: First of all, MARA. Yes, Mara, every single chapter and I MEAN EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER that she appears = a bad chapter, she is literally a walking 'forced plot'. 2: some W/W betwen the demon girls and mc girls (not a fan of that) P:S: Please just erase Mara or something similar
One of the best, better than most novels out there, Unique and New but is very welcomed. Higly recommended!
Really great novel! The author is doing an amazing job with the world building and story development, I'm really loving this series. 10/10 I recommend reading this, I don't want to spoil anything 🤭
The story is nice, and if it weren't for the harem, many people would like read this book
So many have been asking if this novel has a harem, and the simple answer is yes there is. The harem has not started yet as I wrote this review and up to 60 chapters. It's not like any harem where you immediately get surrounded by girls and they are fine to be his woman. I made the relationship with each woman from nothing and up to becoming his woman like how a real womanizer does. Some are slow and steady some are immediate because he knows how to treat the woman and how to approach them. Sorry for the self-review in my own book which I have never done before but I want to clarify this question with this review.
Author's here, the sequel of this novel is out and you can search for the novel called "Destroying My Own World" on Webnovel. Those who have finished reading this book can check it out, thank you.
Melvin started out pretty good. Y’all had pretty good concept on a strong OP main character and then he just turned into a trash fire the main character all of a sudden it becomes weak because of course with these people on WebNovel they have to be some looming big bad the ultimate big, bad brother characters, all powerless turn to be trash, and then betrayal, and all that fun stuff that you know cliché after cliché it was so goodcharacter was good supporting characters are good and then I don’t know but I guess they switched authors cause it turned into trash so you can read about I don’t know 50-ish 100 chapters after that put it down because it turns garbage so don’t spin your money for sure
Honest reviews are here.. Hmmm... It is really hard to say if it is good or bad because I LOVE OP MC, but the problem is, the author nerf the MC.. As you read the synopsis, the MC is transmigrated into his own novel.. MC creates the plot, the drama, the character for each one, including the God in his novel world, but unfortunately, MC is weaker than the God that he created in his own novel.. MC is OP compared to other humans, but he almost dies fighting with one God.. Well, it is understandable that the author nerf MC.. The author can make MC seem more OP by not making him fight against God, but the author still does it to make MC seem weak.. MC also pretends to be nice, but actually, he harbours deep hate toward his own novel Protagonist, which becomes his rival instead of his allies.. MC also becomes a coward when he learns from the prophecy that his novel Protagonist will kill him even though he is a lot stronger than his novel Protagonist.. MC is Lv100 (max level), and all other top character are like around Lv20, and MC doesn't seem as OP as we imagine if we compare their level.. MC seems strong due to his max level, not due to his skill.. MC strongest skill and his 2nd strongest skill also come from the strongest God, which also threatens MC to not go overboard that will disturb the balance of the world.. The author gave the MC power, but he also limited MC action.. So, this is why I said it hard to judge if this novel is good or bad because the author wants to make OP MC novel, but the author also nerf the MC a lot of time which kinda pointless if make OP MC and at the same time, the author nerf MC.. It is like cancelling each other.. Or maybe the author tries to attract a reader who loves OP MC, and at the same time, he wants to attract readers who like weak to strong MC..
This novel is a hidden gem and heavily underrated 💎✨ i loved this author eagerly looking forward towards your next venture 👀
I liked the main character, the side characters were original The ending of the book made sense thank you for wrote this book I liked the main character, the side characters were original The ending of the book made sense
...i do not know what to comment everything is going fast and the mc is soo inconsistent in character it is afoul to read
Thank you ❤️ the Author For presenting such wonderful Novel 🤩 that I ever Read in my life ✨️. The Novel is really the Masterpiece 👊 That I ever thought It has all Genes 🎭 that one needed to Read. I Greatly 😍 Recommending To You All To Must Read 📑 it Out. I hope The Author Can 😚 Bring Again A Novel Which is much more😉 Equivalent To It...🦊
Great story, good plot, properly written characters. MC seems to be speed running lung cancer.
Finally I Have Completed This Novel,When I have started this novel i thought it would be like same as other novel but what I got is something different and i enjoyed it , the ending is also good but it would be better if author start Volume 2 as 2.0 Version of New Game With All Other God & Goddess and Something Out Of Universe Just Like Multiverse Or Cultivation World or Maybe Something Intresting. Because it's Ending Like MCU Movies Where We Can Expect New Sequel or Something Like That. I Genuinely Feel That Volume 1st is just the Foundation of A Bigger Plot of Endgame Which is Started By Mykel. Overall For Me It is Right Know Better than those novel with the concept of Reincarnation Inside their Novel , Maybe For Some People it is not the best but For Me it Is a Balance One Which I Like it. Request to Author - I hope You Will Continue this Series Dear Author and Next Series You Will Answer The Region Behind Reincarnation and Mysteries Behind Sasha Death From Real World etc. Waiting For Positive Response 😊
This story was lit asf. Great world building, interpretation of mythology, characters building, and development. 100% would recommend it. For people who enjoy cold heartless MC that actually use his head more than his fist even though he has the biggest fist. There are still typo here and there but much better than those Chinese MTL novels.
It was so good. There were a few spelling mistakes and casual writing errors, but they were ignorable really. The novel is already finished. I loved the story, it went way different than I had expected when I started reading it, and I really liked it. The only thing I can remember having any problem with is the ending. I‘d have loved it if Nasha was still alive and Mykel and her met again and got together at the end. The characters were absolutely great, and I loved how they interacted with each other. I skipped chapters 390-550 and I’ll go read them in a while, but in the chapters I read, I’m surprised that Lillith didn’t end up with Mykel. The background for the world is really well thought out, and it goes into a lot of detail, I can’t think of any issues other than the beginning and that Mykel got a lot of hate for his novel that seems like it would have been really good other than Asmond, but it might’ve gone into detail in the chapters I skipped. it was really good, I definitely recommend it to be read.
Spoiler de révélation i thought I'm never going to see this novel again 🥲 but author decide make a sequel😃. hello author when is your the sequel comes out and what the novel name?
Very good .................................................................................................................................................
Binged it all in less than 4 days. I regret nothing. What an amazing ride. Thank you author.
Really great story.I love this novel, it includes all the things which i need. It has harem which is great but it really delivers it really well. World building is something which is very interesting, it has many world plus details. OVERALL BEST NOVEL FOR ME CURRENTLY
Spoiler de révélation One of the few novels with overpowered tags I'm okay reading because MC is someone who uses his powers to play tricks on the protagonist, it's satisfying
everthing is good about this novel, i specially like the MC but bro if you have the guts to be hated like Mykel in the beggenning of this novel, just try to make the end of this novel just a dream, i will found you !!
Spoiler de révélation All I gotta say is please do not drop this novel. It completely blew my expectations and has great originality. Grammar needs work but it is slowly improving and the pacing/direction of the story is intriguing.
hello there I found this novel and I have to say it's the perfection I like about this novel author
Just gave a golden ticket.. didn't even read the synopsis BUT I believe its gonna be a masterpiece cuz this author doesn't disappoint and I can tell its gonna be a banger I pray hopefully........JK
I love it I didn't had much expectations but unexpected things happens and so did in this case
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Overall a good noveL, BUT i'm not here to talk about the good things, i'm here to talk about the 2 big bad things: First of all, MARA. Yes, Mara, every single chapter and I MEAN EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER that she appears = a bad chapter, she is literally a walking 'forced plot'. 2: some W/W betwen the demon girls and mc girls (not a fan of that) P:S: Please just erase Mara or something similar
One of the best, better than most novels out there, Unique and New but is very welcomed. Higly recommended!
Really great novel! The author is doing an amazing job with the world building and story development, I'm really loving this series. 10/10 I recommend reading this, I don't want to spoil anything 🤭
The story is nice, and if it weren't for the harem, many people would like read this book
So many have been asking if this novel has a harem, and the simple answer is yes there is. The harem has not started yet as I wrote this review and up to 60 chapters. It's not like any harem where you immediately get surrounded by girls and they are fine to be his woman. I made the relationship with each woman from nothing and up to becoming his woman like how a real womanizer does. Some are slow and steady some are immediate because he knows how to treat the woman and how to approach them. Sorry for the self-review in my own book which I have never done before but I want to clarify this question with this review.