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MC have no common ethics and senses. This is what happened when an ordinary fool karen chinese MC get transmigrated. This MC is even more disgusting than Danzo...for real
tried up to chapter 20. pace ridiculously slow, focusing on very stupid nonsense
chinese authors need to stay away from fanfics. this MC ruined the whole novel within the first 5-10 chapters. he is a hateful, pathetic, and sociopathic MC. dont waste your time on this garbage.
great story, great grasp on what makes the characters unique. updates every single day, which is great. Kanpu does have a golden finger, but it's very balanced. he's not invincible, but he's still very competent. A Chinese MC who tries to use his head. 5/5
This is one of the best Naruto fanfictions I've ever read. The MC's cheat is quite interesting. As the story progresses, I felt it lost its direction a bit, but it remains enjoyable to read. The only thing I missed was a bit of romance.
Reallly good fan fiction and translation the author make a good job making kanpu smart but not too strong.No harem
I read 113 chapters and I must say it's very boring, The MC's cheat isn't as good as it seems, the pace of the story is very slow, In 113 chapters the guy is still a genin.
don't read because MC is too stupid and lazy and even after getting such cheat can't become good enough 🤬🤬
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Truly terrible, bad grammar, awkward phrasing and conversations and the mc is an idiot of the highest order. I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.
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I rated this higher earlier, but I have to drop some scores from Story development and character design. It's more of an MC problem, I just got tired of the "clone" BS. The clones ruined this fic for me, they have so much screentime and doesn't make sense. They also rant the same diatribe towards the MC. Oh yeah, MC's clones have different personalities btw for whatever reason author never explained and simply left with "just because."
Una historia interesante, es realmente entretenido y la escritura no está mal, es largo pero los capítulos no son muy largos, por lo que se puede leer en su totalidad en unos pocos días, si se quieren más capítulos el autor tiene una cuenta de patreon donde tiene más capítulos, esta cuenta tiene el mismo nombre que su cuenta en esta plataforma, también disponible en otras plataformas, el autor siempre se encuentra con el mismo nombre. Apoyo a esta historia, muy buena. (Soltando pedo arcoiris ya que no sabía que escribir jajaja)
I didn't sleep just to finish reading this. ➡️ Writing Quality: 4/5 *Not bad just few minor mistakes but I'm not a perfectionist and as long as I can read the tex just fine then it's totally fine with me.➡️ Story Development and Character Design: 4/5 * I enjoy how he wasn't op immediately at the beginning and so far there's no major time skip where the characters jump from age 10 to 16 so I'm happy with that cause I can read how he struggles with obtaining his techniques and it's so hilarious for me how he has this villainous mindset and keep complaining about shi**y things he encountered.➡️ Updating Stability: 4/5➡️World Background: 5/5* Well it's Naruto World so ❤️
probably the better one of Chinese fic/tl here on WN. The Writing(3*) was okay for a translation, but it doesn't feel seamless in some parts. The Story Development (5*) was on point, it's a Self Insert OC of Hayate's cousin. Not Overpowered but have cheats, I almost dropped it at ch 1 due to the devour cheat, but it's overnerfed and has lots of limitations. The characters' (4*) personality somehow stick to the original source and wasn't dumb down to make MC standout. MC do have some certain CN cliche mannerisms, but idk if it's the translator's efforts or the OG Author, but he/she/they made it work. MC is funny and witty. Updates (5*) are consistent so far. World Background (5) It's detailed enough for the Narutoverse to be more expounded compared to the original, but also not written in a verbose manner so it's easy to read.
love the novel an equal mix of fun, serious, thrilling experience.... one of the bes naruto fanfics i have read
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Just returning a favour dont mind me .......(for wasting my time)(read the novel a bit you will understand) ............................................ ........................... ..............................
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Recommend 💯👍😁 *Naruto event?? on point. *Story flow?? on point. *Weaktostrong?? on point. *System not to OP?? on point. *Update everyday?? on point. this one of my number one favorite Naruto ff, so I recommend that you give it a try. I assure you, you won't be disappointed.
Es una agradable novela para pasar el rato, sin duda es recomendable, aunque a veces el MC es nerfeado por el bien de la trama. Si estás aburrido y buscas algo que leer, sin complicarte más, esta es tu novela.
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if you like novels that are kinda chill then this one is for you. although its a bit dragging and kinda leaning more to a slice of life novel type. also really slow paced.
MC have no common ethics and senses. This is what happened when an ordinary fool karen chinese MC get transmigrated. This MC is even more disgusting than Danzo...for real
tried up to chapter 20. pace ridiculously slow, focusing on very stupid nonsense
chinese authors need to stay away from fanfics. this MC ruined the whole novel within the first 5-10 chapters. he is a hateful, pathetic, and sociopathic MC. dont waste your time on this garbage.
great story, great grasp on what makes the characters unique. updates every single day, which is great. Kanpu does have a golden finger, but it's very balanced. he's not invincible, but he's still very competent. A Chinese MC who tries to use his head. 5/5
This is one of the best Naruto fanfictions I've ever read. The MC's cheat is quite interesting. As the story progresses, I felt it lost its direction a bit, but it remains enjoyable to read. The only thing I missed was a bit of romance.
Reallly good fan fiction and translation the author make a good job making kanpu smart but not too strong.No harem
I read 113 chapters and I must say it's very boring, The MC's cheat isn't as good as it seems, the pace of the story is very slow, In 113 chapters the guy is still a genin.
don't read because MC is too stupid and lazy and even after getting such cheat can't become good enough 🤬🤬
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
Truly terrible, bad grammar, awkward phrasing and conversations and the mc is an idiot of the highest order. I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.I don't care enough to make this longer.
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I rated this higher earlier, but I have to drop some scores from Story development and character design. It's more of an MC problem, I just got tired of the "clone" BS. The clones ruined this fic for me, they have so much screentime and doesn't make sense. They also rant the same diatribe towards the MC. Oh yeah, MC's clones have different personalities btw for whatever reason author never explained and simply left with "just because."
Una historia interesante, es realmente entretenido y la escritura no está mal, es largo pero los capítulos no son muy largos, por lo que se puede leer en su totalidad en unos pocos días, si se quieren más capítulos el autor tiene una cuenta de patreon donde tiene más capítulos, esta cuenta tiene el mismo nombre que su cuenta en esta plataforma, también disponible en otras plataformas, el autor siempre se encuentra con el mismo nombre. Apoyo a esta historia, muy buena. (Soltando pedo arcoiris ya que no sabía que escribir jajaja)
I didn't sleep just to finish reading this. ➡️ Writing Quality: 4/5 *Not bad just few minor mistakes but I'm not a perfectionist and as long as I can read the tex just fine then it's totally fine with me.➡️ Story Development and Character Design: 4/5 * I enjoy how he wasn't op immediately at the beginning and so far there's no major time skip where the characters jump from age 10 to 16 so I'm happy with that cause I can read how he struggles with obtaining his techniques and it's so hilarious for me how he has this villainous mindset and keep complaining about shi**y things he encountered.➡️ Updating Stability: 4/5➡️World Background: 5/5* Well it's Naruto World so ❤️
probably the better one of Chinese fic/tl here on WN. The Writing(3*) was okay for a translation, but it doesn't feel seamless in some parts. The Story Development (5*) was on point, it's a Self Insert OC of Hayate's cousin. Not Overpowered but have cheats, I almost dropped it at ch 1 due to the devour cheat, but it's overnerfed and has lots of limitations. The characters' (4*) personality somehow stick to the original source and wasn't dumb down to make MC standout. MC do have some certain CN cliche mannerisms, but idk if it's the translator's efforts or the OG Author, but he/she/they made it work. MC is funny and witty. Updates (5*) are consistent so far. World Background (5) It's detailed enough for the Narutoverse to be more expounded compared to the original, but also not written in a verbose manner so it's easy to read.
love the novel an equal mix of fun, serious, thrilling experience.... one of the bes naruto fanfics i have read
It's good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Just returning a favour dont mind me .......(for wasting my time)(read the novel a bit you will understand) ............................................ ........................... ..............................
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Just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome just awesome.
Recommend 💯👍😁 *Naruto event?? on point. *Story flow?? on point. *Weaktostrong?? on point. *System not to OP?? on point. *Update everyday?? on point. this one of my number one favorite Naruto ff, so I recommend that you give it a try. I assure you, you won't be disappointed.
Es una agradable novela para pasar el rato, sin duda es recomendable, aunque a veces el MC es nerfeado por el bien de la trama. Si estás aburrido y buscas algo que leer, sin complicarte más, esta es tu novela.
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if you like novels that are kinda chill then this one is for you. although its a bit dragging and kinda leaning more to a slice of life novel type. also really slow paced.