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this story is amazing weird and disturbing but amazing I recommend it if you want to be disturbed for a while I would like them to write more chapters to continue with the story
Push the main character of the book wasn’t brain dead afterwards because he kind of forgets Messages rewards and it hasn’t been updated for a while
I wish is updated mar so I can read it The whol thin is a good novel to read but I wish the character wasn’t broken is the mentor sens soooooooooooooo playyyyyyyyy uppppppppp update
I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing.
okay this is just amazing very nice to read it needs more chapters LOL there's this one and there's two Naruto books and a Harley Quinn book that all has roughly the same theme girls reincarnating and going like that and this one is probably better than all the others in my opinion I really hope you come back and write more for it love the idea the genre needs more books like this anyway I'm a fan please come back soon!!!!!!!!!
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basically, part of the legs in the air and an obsolete system this is far from a cultivation story... just disgusting please stop that and redone with a guy who wants to get stronger, it's wasted, there's potential
I love it 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Hey Listen I truly understand you don't like fresh meal but you like dirty meal. I hope you never say this line your life when you have children
this story is amazing weird and disturbing but amazing I recommend it if you want to be disturbed for a while I would like them to write more chapters to continue with the story
Push the main character of the book wasn’t brain dead afterwards because he kind of forgets Messages rewards and it hasn’t been updated for a while
I wish is updated mar so I can read it The whol thin is a good novel to read but I wish the character wasn’t broken is the mentor sens soooooooooooooo playyyyyyyyy uppppppppp update
I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing. I look forward to continuing.
okay this is just amazing very nice to read it needs more chapters LOL there's this one and there's two Naruto books and a Harley Quinn book that all has roughly the same theme girls reincarnating and going like that and this one is probably better than all the others in my opinion I really hope you come back and write more for it love the idea the genre needs more books like this anyway I'm a fan please come back soon!!!!!!!!!
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basically, part of the legs in the air and an obsolete system this is far from a cultivation story... just disgusting please stop that and redone with a guy who wants to get stronger, it's wasted, there's potential
I love it 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Hey Listen I truly understand you don't like fresh meal but you like dirty meal. I hope you never say this line your life when you have children
Can be better with better character development