2Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It has only 2 chapters but it looks good. please post more!⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️😔😔😔😔😔😔😩😩😩😩⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚.....
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Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor
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It has only 2 chapters but it looks good. please post more!⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️😔😔😔😔😔😔😩😩😩😩⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚.....
Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor