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Good story but mc is a complete idiot. Dies, goes back in time with knowledge to prevent a horrible future. Does very little to stop it. Has amazing powers but uses them like a tool. Has soooo many chances to fix the future but like an idiot, only does the bare minimum to save his own family. But does a horrible job at it
I dont get it he dies goes back to past but in another similar world and just dousn't even remember, care, or question the well being of his original parents and keeps thinking about on revenge against people who killed him but those people are not them this is not the same world
this one is very very Bad and No Point in me telling you why exatly because Author will delete the comment Like the Others that pointed it out.
Of course I love harem novels, well, when the author makes a strong ms nayvny, it's boring (it's strange that a person has gone back to the past and is thinking about a sub-job, it already makes you wonder if it's worth reading)it's like Japanese nubo novels full of cliches. Little has been read , only 10 chapters , well , I already see the cliche of the feeble - minded ms .
suspension of disbelief shattered repeatedly and beyond redemption MC too rtarded to be a doornob let alone a scholarship student his mom and little sister are fked in every sense of the word while he wonders why he can't stop freakin time for MORE then 5 min...in another world do yourself a favor and stay away
Spoiler de révélation
"Take revenge to those who wronged me!" Dont tell me he will take revenge im the goverment for dying in a experiment even when he joined it himself? Everyone knows there is a risk of dying in experiment. Aigoo human nature is always selfish and greedy
Good book. I especially like author notes at the end of chapters. Unfortunately there is one big problem and it's that author often use 'him' on wrong gender same with 'her', which is quite annoying.
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I have been reading this for days already (Currently at chapter 57). It's pretty good considering the fact that this is a harem novel. Well, we all know that some harem novels focus on 'the' scenes without considering the plot. Here are just the first few things that I wanted to point out. 1. The MC may seem dense, but it's given since in his past life he was just focused on his studies without caring about the world. I just hope that he will be smart enough to fight Julius in the future. 2. The MC's power still has limitations so don't expect a very OP MC in the early chapters or else you'll get disappointed. 3. The Apocalypse that is mentioned in the story is still far since our MC went back 3 months before it. I can say that the grammar of the story is good. It was just in the early chapters where there are minimal typos and mixed pronouns. The MC is great and the girls too (I really love Abigail and Lilianne). His powers are interesting, although there were still left that are not revealed.
How fast can you guess these words? 1. BOO_S 2. _ _NDOM 3.F_ _ K 4. P_N_S 5. PU_S_ 6.S_X Answers: 1. BOOKS 2. RANDOM 3. FORK 4. PANTS 5. PULSE 6. SIX You got it all wrong didn't you? You dirty minded person! NOW GO AND READ THE STORY TO CLEANSE YOUR SOUL!!!
Hats off to the author san for writing such an engaging read! the descriptions and narrations are simple but well-written and enjoyable! we see our MC's character first hand when he is willing to sacrifice anything for his family! But oh no! what happens at chapter 3? Is this the fate of our MC? READ TO FIND OUT. Highly recommend this novel that shifts from small moments of affection to seriousness. Best of luck sis!
I am the EXP of my sword... EXP is my blood... and EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless reviews... Unknown to death, nor know to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so I pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
I'm leaving this review for the author to have something to check the notification for. Hehe. I don't know what to say but this, this work got me hook just from reading the initial chapters. I can't spoil the rest of the awesome things you'd find and read. You have to check that out yourselves. ENJOY :>
Spoiler de révélation
Hello, Author here. I do now know why I am here. I must be possessed. However, If you have any questions, you can ask them below and I will try my best to answer them (without any spoilers).
Good story but mc is a complete idiot. Dies, goes back in time with knowledge to prevent a horrible future. Does very little to stop it. Has amazing powers but uses them like a tool. Has soooo many chances to fix the future but like an idiot, only does the bare minimum to save his own family. But does a horrible job at it
I dont get it he dies goes back to past but in another similar world and just dousn't even remember, care, or question the well being of his original parents and keeps thinking about on revenge against people who killed him but those people are not them this is not the same world
this one is very very Bad and No Point in me telling you why exatly because Author will delete the comment Like the Others that pointed it out.
Of course I love harem novels, well, when the author makes a strong ms nayvny, it's boring (it's strange that a person has gone back to the past and is thinking about a sub-job, it already makes you wonder if it's worth reading)it's like Japanese nubo novels full of cliches. Little has been read , only 10 chapters , well , I already see the cliche of the feeble - minded ms .
suspension of disbelief shattered repeatedly and beyond redemption MC too rtarded to be a doornob let alone a scholarship student his mom and little sister are fked in every sense of the word while he wonders why he can't stop freakin time for MORE then 5 min...in another world do yourself a favor and stay away
Spoiler de révélation "Take revenge to those who wronged me!" Dont tell me he will take revenge im the goverment for dying in a experiment even when he joined it himself? Everyone knows there is a risk of dying in experiment. Aigoo human nature is always selfish and greedy
Good book. I especially like author notes at the end of chapters. Unfortunately there is one big problem and it's that author often use 'him' on wrong gender same with 'her', which is quite annoying.
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I have been reading this for days already (Currently at chapter 57). It's pretty good considering the fact that this is a harem novel. Well, we all know that some harem novels focus on 'the' scenes without considering the plot. Here are just the first few things that I wanted to point out. 1. The MC may seem dense, but it's given since in his past life he was just focused on his studies without caring about the world. I just hope that he will be smart enough to fight Julius in the future. 2. The MC's power still has limitations so don't expect a very OP MC in the early chapters or else you'll get disappointed. 3. The Apocalypse that is mentioned in the story is still far since our MC went back 3 months before it. I can say that the grammar of the story is good. It was just in the early chapters where there are minimal typos and mixed pronouns. The MC is great and the girls too (I really love Abigail and Lilianne). His powers are interesting, although there were still left that are not revealed.
How fast can you guess these words? 1. BOO_S 2. _ _NDOM 3.F_ _ K 4. P_N_S 5. PU_S_ 6.S_X Answers: 1. BOOKS 2. RANDOM 3. FORK 4. PANTS 5. PULSE 6. SIX You got it all wrong didn't you? You dirty minded person! NOW GO AND READ THE STORY TO CLEANSE YOUR SOUL!!!
Hats off to the author san for writing such an engaging read! the descriptions and narrations are simple but well-written and enjoyable! we see our MC's character first hand when he is willing to sacrifice anything for his family! But oh no! what happens at chapter 3? Is this the fate of our MC? READ TO FIND OUT. Highly recommend this novel that shifts from small moments of affection to seriousness. Best of luck sis!
I am the EXP of my sword... EXP is my blood... and EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless reviews... Unknown to death, nor know to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so I pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
I'm leaving this review for the author to have something to check the notification for. Hehe. I don't know what to say but this, this work got me hook just from reading the initial chapters. I can't spoil the rest of the awesome things you'd find and read. You have to check that out yourselves. ENJOY :>
Spoiler de révélation
Hello, Author here. I do now know why I am here. I must be possessed. However, If you have any questions, you can ask them below and I will try my best to answer them (without any spoilers).