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please update next chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
This is worth to read if you can bear with author cringe seriously, it's so cringe but if you ignore it it's readable even though the author using his language (Turkish?) and explain the meaning again on English
this book is worth more than 5 ⭐ it has great story.and it really makes me very sad 😭 because there have not been processed since chapter 189.So i request and beg for more chapter please upload more
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
First of all, I would like to thank the author for his consideration in giving the warnings beforehand, since not everyone has the same tastes. Finally, before trying to read it I saw that apparently the BI and Ali separation parts never occurred, could you confirm this for me author? Because if so, it would give the story a chance, other than that, if so, could you update the auxiliary chapter. Hug and good luck
Thanks for the warning this is not my cup of tea so I've already given it 4 stars just for the warning_________________________________________
Great story and good romance but sadly its not really my cup of tea cuz of the bi additions so ima have to drop, will give the part that i read (96chaps) a 5/5 stars tho. Keep up the good work author and good luck!
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I just wanted to thank the author for the advance notices in the auxiliary volume. I have read too many fics which suddenly bring unlikeable traits(PERSONAL PREFERENCE of me or people with similar mindset to me), and it ruins the entire story for me. So this 5 star is to thank the author for saving my time. 🙂🙂🙂
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This is not about the ratings. I have noyhing against anyone. But just for my straight bros reading this novel, a word caution. It's bi vibed story. Again no offence to anyone but some of us don't have such tastebuds.
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Best Douluo Dalu Work. PLEASE MORE CHAPTER 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍
I really like this fanfic fat I just don't like that the MC split into two that's why you get four star and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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i like this story... i just want more chapters...........................................................................................................................
The story is really intriguing and funny at the same time. I like Op characters. Also don't forget to add the Sea God Priestess in the harem
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It's a good story, bibi is the best in my opinion, I just hope it's not too big the harem A story is often ruined by the same thing, too many women. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is great but the chapters are short with a stretch so if your work speed up please ....................................................................................................................................
I made it not five stars just because I don’t like the names of the mc (otherwise I’d give it five stars just that I dislike the names, Tang Ali sounds weird to me and the names of the other forms don’t really fit with the names of the original story but otherwise it’s been good so far and I’m curious to see his interaction with tang hao which I assume will be soon)
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I like ur fanfic v.much just keep updating chapter plzzzzzzzzzzzzz🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I really like this. When is the next chapter? It has already been one year since the last update of this novel and the other majesty journey.
please update next chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
This is worth to read if you can bear with author cringe seriously, it's so cringe but if you ignore it it's readable even though the author using his language (Turkish?) and explain the meaning again on English
this book is worth more than 5 ⭐ it has great story.and it really makes me very sad 😭 because there have not been processed since chapter 189.So i request and beg for more chapter please upload more
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
First of all, I would like to thank the author for his consideration in giving the warnings beforehand, since not everyone has the same tastes. Finally, before trying to read it I saw that apparently the BI and Ali separation parts never occurred, could you confirm this for me author? Because if so, it would give the story a chance, other than that, if so, could you update the auxiliary chapter. Hug and good luck
Thanks for the warning this is not my cup of tea so I've already given it 4 stars just for the warning_________________________________________
Great story and good romance but sadly its not really my cup of tea cuz of the bi additions so ima have to drop, will give the part that i read (96chaps) a 5/5 stars tho. Keep up the good work author and good luck!
10/10 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I just wanted to thank the author for the advance notices in the auxiliary volume. I have read too many fics which suddenly bring unlikeable traits(PERSONAL PREFERENCE of me or people with similar mindset to me), and it ruins the entire story for me. So this 5 star is to thank the author for saving my time. 🙂🙂🙂
can you add Ning Rongrong too? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This is not about the ratings. I have noyhing against anyone. But just for my straight bros reading this novel, a word caution. It's bi vibed story. Again no offence to anyone but some of us don't have such tastebuds.
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Best Douluo Dalu Work. PLEASE MORE CHAPTER 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏🙏🏾🙏🏽🙏🏻🙏👍
I really like this fanfic fat I just don't like that the MC split into two that's why you get four star and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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i like this story... i just want more chapters...........................................................................................................................
The story is really intriguing and funny at the same time. I like Op characters. Also don't forget to add the Sea God Priestess in the harem
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It's a good story, bibi is the best in my opinion, I just hope it's not too big the harem A story is often ruined by the same thing, too many women. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is great but the chapters are short with a stretch so if your work speed up please ....................................................................................................................................
I made it not five stars just because I don’t like the names of the mc (otherwise I’d give it five stars just that I dislike the names, Tang Ali sounds weird to me and the names of the other forms don’t really fit with the names of the original story but otherwise it’s been good so far and I’m curious to see his interaction with tang hao which I assume will be soon)
Spoiler de révélation I like ur fanfic v.much just keep updating chapter plzzzzzzzzzzzzz🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I really like this. When is the next chapter? It has already been one year since the last update of this novel and the other majesty journey.