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super novel, original novel subject, clever mc, sensible mc..........................................................................................................
A great story without typical cliches. You’ll enjoy the story progression and realism. I hope the author won’t stop publishing!……………………………………………………
it is one of my favourite in this app but author have you really dropped it . I was hoping to see any update for a long long time . Now I think it has become hopeless to see any new chapter here . a very sad to see such a great all-round settings untimely ending. any way wish you good luck and continue another story although I believe the world settings will never be as great as it
Well, seeing how everyone is just blasting the novel, I'm even a little afraid of posting how I feel just so I don't get blasted, Lol. But in my opinion, this novel is really great. Having read all the chapters, I have to say, this novel is really really really good. Everyone have their opinion Right?, that's mine.Author Typhlix, you were the one who inspired me to start writing and you can check out the novel I started in my profile.Just to let you know, I owe whatever that success is to you. Please pick this masterpiece back up, even if the world is saying it's a copied piece of trash, because It was that piece of trash, that helped develop the so-called 'master' author of today.SO PLEASE, PICK THIS BACK UP.
This is made from "You're courting death!"..............................................................................................................
well the whole story is just like other Chinese master stories, poor weak guy gets backstabbing by his "love" and the gets told his courting death. it's both a rebirth into another world through another's body while using attack on titan theme. Author tends to mix up his own information along or even not giving the information at all only to use a term never explained (been told the MC.is top of the first years but wait his not his top of the lowest class of first years that were never explained to exist)(or he has 100 ex then uses 10000 but still has 100). Also feels like a lot of content was cut or not written such a fight scenes ending suddenly with no detail how the enemy was defeated (plot holes anyone).I'll admit I like reading it but it's also hard to ignore these issues.
what is with all of the repeating chapters? I've heard of authors padding their stories before but this is just ridiculous. you have eyes I'm pretty sure you can see these are being repeated but instead refused to fix them or remove them. until they start being removed I'm going to keep my review at one star and I urge others to do the same. why be rewarded for being lazy
The story was good except the author consistently puts repeat chapters so you spend coins to unlock the exact same content. He evens changes the title of the chapter so you unlock it only to find out it’s a repeat of what you just read. Don’t waste money on this scammer
such a good concept really I love it,buttt it is wasted on a common stupid trope about arrogant that,pretty girl that basically those trashy cultivation novels again I do love the concept tho
While the story is fantastic and we could also ignore the fact that the beginning is similar to 40000 of cultivationYou need to read this novel and rewrite it and make a clear grading systemAnd stop copying paragraphI guarantee if you rewrite this novel you will toplle the rankingNo criticism just an advice
The translator is straight up garbage. The story itself is decent, it’s a direct rip off of attack on titan, but that doesn’t take away from the fact that it’s a good story. But the translator is entirely killing the vibe of the whole book, I have to drop the story, because it’s impossible to follow. Literally 4 copy pasted stories in a row, then it directly jumps ahead by like 3 chapters. If Webnovel assigned a different translator to fix this mess, I’d pick it up again, but this translator is, without a doubt, the laziest translator I’ve come across on this platform
Mehn, I tried. I really did. I managed to get past 150 chapters. I tried holding on but man, this book could do way better. The writing quality is terrible, repeating chapters, mixed chapters, wrong character names, terrible explanation of events. It feels more like the author is trying to fill up chapters and repeats a lot of already known info. The current 206 chaps can literally be fit int 80 chaps. The story line is great but the author had ruined it. I hope you revise your work or pls pay someone to do that for you. Thanks
I tried, I really did. but their are many wrong things with this novel. I enjoyed the author's previous novel multi gene, although I had to read it with my mind closed that only lasted for around 40 chaps. But this novel, it's wrong in many ways. For just some random nobody girl who was the previous body's gf he decided to attend military school with the probability of him surviving 10:100. Don't get me wrong, mc wasn't a simp not till 150 chapters that I read. but man just for some revenge. He could have gone to normal university and become a Titan and then slowly gathered his knowledge and become op. I am not telling him to hide and level up, but the way the mc is portrayed is like a little child doing some silly things thinking he is being some evil God. now obviously that's not the case but you get what I mean, he is just super naive. The writing quality is alright, even good if compared to most of the novels out there. The update is regular as of now. It's pretty good for someone who is new to webnovel and all, but to experienced people it's just meh!
Amazing read but the writer doesn’ proof read so expect multiple duplicate chapters
So many cliches .. if this was harem then every character would be under him but as this is a villain novel .. every new character is enemy .. dropped ch75
The writing quality is peak though time to time some words are misspelled the development is great as well, I always think, man he use to be so weak look at him now, I could go on but to save ur eyes the trouble I will end this with 5 words. This Is A Masterpiece
Repeating the same chapter over and over again. Don't post if you haven't written. And don't say it's a glitch and I don't know what's wrong. I know very well how inkstone works. Shame on you author. And don't you dare delete this review. Let others know before they start how you scam readers who are spending their coins.
sometimes the writing becomes harder to read but overall the story is well written and developed at neither too fast nor too slow a pace the characters are on a survival of the fittest mentality which makes sense given the world background and has a few interesting characters that appear later the update stability is good but was on a hiatus for a while earlier on overall everything about the story is good and I recommend reading it the only thing that could be improved are the fighting scenes although they are very good especially using sound effects examples(boom bang crash ect) adding immersion they seem a bit to slow paced but are still good just could get better.
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The only thing that attracted me here is the pic. The story, however, was quite odd. Forget how a chip fused with the MC's soul, this supposed titan story seemingly based on genetic composition suddenly turned into a cultivation novel.
the story itself is good...but the author is not😐😐😐STOP REPEATING CHAPTERS!!!AND STOP PUTTING IN RANDOM CHAPTERS FROM ANOTHER NOVEL!!!!😡😠🤬🤬🤬🤬
The 1st few chapters of the book is cliche ,buh after the book just gets better and better , buh update is not consistent
Author there are a lot of mistakes in novel, not only grammatical errors, but there are wrong words written in several sentences, not only that there are also repeat chapters multiple times. Why do you do that? It's eating up our fast passes to unlock chapters we already read.
Everything is inconsistent. It feels like he doesn’t know what they want to write.
a typical xianxia plot with an aot twist chinese novels go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
The writing is all over the place and there is a lot of copy pasting going on to inflate chapters, do yourself a favour and ignore this one.
my favourite novel on webnovel the only novel i watch on webnovel rn idk the author but judging by his old books reviews he seems great in my opinion the best novel on webnovel
super novel, original novel subject, clever mc, sensible mc..........................................................................................................
A great story without typical cliches. You’ll enjoy the story progression and realism. I hope the author won’t stop publishing!……………………………………………………
it is one of my favourite in this app but author have you really dropped it . I was hoping to see any update for a long long time . Now I think it has become hopeless to see any new chapter here . a very sad to see such a great all-round settings untimely ending. any way wish you good luck and continue another story although I believe the world settings will never be as great as it
Well, seeing how everyone is just blasting the novel, I'm even a little afraid of posting how I feel just so I don't get blasted, Lol. But in my opinion, this novel is really great. Having read all the chapters, I have to say, this novel is really really really good. Everyone have their opinion Right?, that's mine.Author Typhlix, you were the one who inspired me to start writing and you can check out the novel I started in my profile.Just to let you know, I owe whatever that success is to you. Please pick this masterpiece back up, even if the world is saying it's a copied piece of trash, because It was that piece of trash, that helped develop the so-called 'master' author of today.SO PLEASE, PICK THIS BACK UP.
This is made from "You're courting death!"..............................................................................................................
well the whole story is just like other Chinese master stories, poor weak guy gets backstabbing by his "love" and the gets told his courting death. it's both a rebirth into another world through another's body while using attack on titan theme. Author tends to mix up his own information along or even not giving the information at all only to use a term never explained (been told the MC.is top of the first years but wait his not his top of the lowest class of first years that were never explained to exist)(or he has 100 ex then uses 10000 but still has 100). Also feels like a lot of content was cut or not written such a fight scenes ending suddenly with no detail how the enemy was defeated (plot holes anyone).I'll admit I like reading it but it's also hard to ignore these issues.
what is with all of the repeating chapters? I've heard of authors padding their stories before but this is just ridiculous. you have eyes I'm pretty sure you can see these are being repeated but instead refused to fix them or remove them. until they start being removed I'm going to keep my review at one star and I urge others to do the same. why be rewarded for being lazy
The story was good except the author consistently puts repeat chapters so you spend coins to unlock the exact same content. He evens changes the title of the chapter so you unlock it only to find out it’s a repeat of what you just read. Don’t waste money on this scammer
such a good concept really I love it,buttt it is wasted on a common stupid trope about arrogant that,pretty girl that basically those trashy cultivation novels again I do love the concept tho
While the story is fantastic and we could also ignore the fact that the beginning is similar to 40000 of cultivationYou need to read this novel and rewrite it and make a clear grading systemAnd stop copying paragraphI guarantee if you rewrite this novel you will toplle the rankingNo criticism just an advice
The translator is straight up garbage. The story itself is decent, it’s a direct rip off of attack on titan, but that doesn’t take away from the fact that it’s a good story. But the translator is entirely killing the vibe of the whole book, I have to drop the story, because it’s impossible to follow. Literally 4 copy pasted stories in a row, then it directly jumps ahead by like 3 chapters. If Webnovel assigned a different translator to fix this mess, I’d pick it up again, but this translator is, without a doubt, the laziest translator I’ve come across on this platform
Mehn, I tried. I really did. I managed to get past 150 chapters. I tried holding on but man, this book could do way better. The writing quality is terrible, repeating chapters, mixed chapters, wrong character names, terrible explanation of events. It feels more like the author is trying to fill up chapters and repeats a lot of already known info. The current 206 chaps can literally be fit int 80 chaps. The story line is great but the author had ruined it. I hope you revise your work or pls pay someone to do that for you. Thanks
I tried, I really did. but their are many wrong things with this novel. I enjoyed the author's previous novel multi gene, although I had to read it with my mind closed that only lasted for around 40 chaps. But this novel, it's wrong in many ways. For just some random nobody girl who was the previous body's gf he decided to attend military school with the probability of him surviving 10:100. Don't get me wrong, mc wasn't a simp not till 150 chapters that I read. but man just for some revenge. He could have gone to normal university and become a Titan and then slowly gathered his knowledge and become op. I am not telling him to hide and level up, but the way the mc is portrayed is like a little child doing some silly things thinking he is being some evil God. now obviously that's not the case but you get what I mean, he is just super naive. The writing quality is alright, even good if compared to most of the novels out there. The update is regular as of now. It's pretty good for someone who is new to webnovel and all, but to experienced people it's just meh!
Amazing read but the writer doesn’ proof read so expect multiple duplicate chapters
So many cliches .. if this was harem then every character would be under him but as this is a villain novel .. every new character is enemy .. dropped ch75
The writing quality is peak though time to time some words are misspelled the development is great as well, I always think, man he use to be so weak look at him now, I could go on but to save ur eyes the trouble I will end this with 5 words. This Is A Masterpiece
Repeating the same chapter over and over again. Don't post if you haven't written. And don't say it's a glitch and I don't know what's wrong. I know very well how inkstone works. Shame on you author. And don't you dare delete this review. Let others know before they start how you scam readers who are spending their coins.
sometimes the writing becomes harder to read but overall the story is well written and developed at neither too fast nor too slow a pace the characters are on a survival of the fittest mentality which makes sense given the world background and has a few interesting characters that appear later the update stability is good but was on a hiatus for a while earlier on overall everything about the story is good and I recommend reading it the only thing that could be improved are the fighting scenes although they are very good especially using sound effects examples(boom bang crash ect) adding immersion they seem a bit to slow paced but are still good just could get better.
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Spoiler de révélation The only thing that attracted me here is the pic. The story, however, was quite odd. Forget how a chip fused with the MC's soul, this supposed titan story seemingly based on genetic composition suddenly turned into a cultivation novel.
the story itself is good...but the author is not😐😐😐STOP REPEATING CHAPTERS!!!AND STOP PUTTING IN RANDOM CHAPTERS FROM ANOTHER NOVEL!!!!😡😠🤬🤬🤬🤬
The 1st few chapters of the book is cliche ,buh after the book just gets better and better , buh update is not consistent
Author there are a lot of mistakes in novel, not only grammatical errors, but there are wrong words written in several sentences, not only that there are also repeat chapters multiple times. Why do you do that? It's eating up our fast passes to unlock chapters we already read.
Everything is inconsistent. It feels like he doesn’t know what they want to write.
a typical xianxia plot with an aot twist chinese novels go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
The writing is all over the place and there is a lot of copy pasting going on to inflate chapters, do yourself a favour and ignore this one.
my favourite novel on webnovel the only novel i watch on webnovel rn idk the author but judging by his old books reviews he seems great in my opinion the best novel on webnovel