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It was the potential to be one of the best twilight Fan Fictions out there. If it were me I would have left the ability to continue dungeon dive and allow companions to dungeon dive with him, so he doesn't get bored with immortality. But I can't wait to read more of your novel.
Eu amo FF de Twilight, e Sung Jin Woo é um dos meus personagens favoritos, preciso adicionar ainda mais coisas? Já fui conquistado, só espero que ela tenha um bom desenvolvimento, postagens e sem harém.
author i like your story so far though, i have a question, how long does a break mean for you? is it 2 years or maybe 10??
It was the potential to be one of the best twilight Fan Fictions out there. If it were me I would have left the ability to continue dungeon dive and allow companions to dungeon dive with him, so he doesn't get bored with immortality. But I can't wait to read more of your novel.
Eu amo FF de Twilight, e Sung Jin Woo é um dos meus personagens favoritos, preciso adicionar ainda mais coisas? Já fui conquistado, só espero que ela tenha um bom desenvolvimento, postagens e sem harém.
author i like your story so far though, i have a question, how long does a break mean for you? is it 2 years or maybe 10??