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You in all of my years reading fanfictIon, never have I seen a future trunks reincarnator before, keep up the good work and I will Be watching you
Loving this story so far, hope you do use more of trunks being like gojo in how he fights and him being enlightened while conscious. Keep up the updates please!
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Love how Trunks isn't OP/Super Saiyan from the get go just because his reincarnated, . . . . . . . . .
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This is pretty good. Trunks insert into the original timeline in which everyone dies. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......
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Está entretenido aunque espero que aparezcan más androides mmm21 y se mantenga al ritmo del extenso multiverso de dragón ball Y que creo algo similar alos nanobots de la novela Nano Mashin para los humanos es casi como un sistema
You in all of my years reading fanfictIon, never have I seen a future trunks reincarnator before, keep up the good work and I will Be watching you
Loving this story so far, hope you do use more of trunks being like gojo in how he fights and him being enlightened while conscious. Keep up the updates please!
😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊👊😊😄😊😄👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Love how Trunks isn't OP/Super Saiyan from the get go just because his reincarnated, . . . . . . . . .
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This is pretty good. Trunks insert into the original timeline in which everyone dies. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......
who doesn't like dbz [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Está entretenido aunque espero que aparezcan más androides mmm21 y se mantenga al ritmo del extenso multiverso de dragón ball Y que creo algo similar alos nanobots de la novela Nano Mashin para los humanos es casi como un sistema