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I am really enjoying reading this book. I truly like that you have to constantly be looking for hidden clues about different characters that come to light later in the story. I like the mystery, and I look forward to reading about the development of characters between the ML and FL. I really recommend this book it has a little bit of everything that makes you want to keep reading. Mystery, betrayal, love, loyalty and spicy scenes that leave you wanting more....
If you’re looking for an interesting book to read Then this is it I haven’t read much but i can saY that its epic
One of the Best Novels I read so far🤩 This one's gonna be my entertainment from now on yaay!!☺
I haven't read the story yet, but I know it's gonna be a good one. I like the synopsis, so i guess I'll be trying it out.
If you are still wondering if you should read this book, maybe this will make you make a decision. The Story-line is great with great characters.If you love solving mysteries then this book should be in your library. If you love reading about romance, please add this book. The book is has almost every theme one may like and I'm sure each one of you future readers will find something they'll love about it. I've started reading it and now i can't stop. I recommend this book.It's a great one
The story is great.I've just begun reading it and iI'm really looking forward to unfolding the mysteries in the story. Sometimes i feel like the deaths are connected to Victoria and the Pharaoh🙈 but that's just my thoughts .As i said I'm a new fan who's looking forward to unveiling some mysteries in the book. ❤❤❤ to the author. 🥰❤ to the fans
The grammar does suffer a bit, but gets better as the chapters go on. The pacing is excellent. The sentence flow is near flawless. I’ll probably come back and study it a bit myself. The story is captivating and charming. It has the feeling of a fantasy novel while being grounded in a modern setting. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the novel.
I just wanted to reach out to my readers and anybody else checking out my novel. There was a mistake with the spelling of the ML name is supposed to be Kai. I did not realize his name was being spelled like Kia which is a typo. In vol 1 I will be taking the time to edit this small error with ML Kai's name. I do apologize for not catching it sooner. Then I also want to say. This story isn't your typical love triangle it's actually on the darker side. Then lastly as a warning, the FL Victoria will be going through a lot of traumatizing experiences. It's written on the darker gore side and it might be sensitive or creepy to some viewers. But it depends on the reader since we all have different options. As for me personally writing these darker chapters, (That will be coming soon within 50s chapters.) I was a bit creeped out myself. Anyways, please give a review to help my ratings and I always appreciate power stones. Tell me your kind thoughts. I am always interested to know who supports my novels.
nice, I love the synopsis. Brilliant, this is already giving me the vampire vibes. great work author!🥰
I am really enjoying reading this book. I truly like that you have to constantly be looking for hidden clues about different characters that come to light later in the story. I like the mystery, and I look forward to reading about the development of characters between the ML and FL. I really recommend this book it has a little bit of everything that makes you want to keep reading. Mystery, betrayal, love, loyalty and spicy scenes that leave you wanting more....
If you’re looking for an interesting book to read Then this is it I haven’t read much but i can saY that its epic
One of the Best Novels I read so far🤩 This one's gonna be my entertainment from now on yaay!!☺
I haven't read the story yet, but I know it's gonna be a good one. I like the synopsis, so i guess I'll be trying it out.
If you are still wondering if you should read this book, maybe this will make you make a decision. The Story-line is great with great characters.If you love solving mysteries then this book should be in your library. If you love reading about romance, please add this book. The book is has almost every theme one may like and I'm sure each one of you future readers will find something they'll love about it. I've started reading it and now i can't stop. I recommend this book.It's a great one
The story is great.I've just begun reading it and iI'm really looking forward to unfolding the mysteries in the story. Sometimes i feel like the deaths are connected to Victoria and the Pharaoh🙈 but that's just my thoughts .As i said I'm a new fan who's looking forward to unveiling some mysteries in the book. ❤❤❤ to the author. 🥰❤ to the fans
The grammar does suffer a bit, but gets better as the chapters go on. The pacing is excellent. The sentence flow is near flawless. I’ll probably come back and study it a bit myself. The story is captivating and charming. It has the feeling of a fantasy novel while being grounded in a modern setting. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the novel.
I just wanted to reach out to my readers and anybody else checking out my novel. There was a mistake with the spelling of the ML name is supposed to be Kai. I did not realize his name was being spelled like Kia which is a typo. In vol 1 I will be taking the time to edit this small error with ML Kai's name. I do apologize for not catching it sooner. Then I also want to say. This story isn't your typical love triangle it's actually on the darker side. Then lastly as a warning, the FL Victoria will be going through a lot of traumatizing experiences. It's written on the darker gore side and it might be sensitive or creepy to some viewers. But it depends on the reader since we all have different options. As for me personally writing these darker chapters, (That will be coming soon within 50s chapters.) I was a bit creeped out myself. Anyways, please give a review to help my ratings and I always appreciate power stones. Tell me your kind thoughts. I am always interested to know who supports my novels.
nice, I love the synopsis. Brilliant, this is already giving me the vampire vibes. great work author!🥰