System vs Rebirth

LV 14

DaoShadow

Very good novel, imo even with the best potential among the novels from the author. Stable update like always, excellent grammar with very rare and minor errors. The Setting is also very unique imo, story will live or die depending on the dynamic of the 2 mc‘s and their character growth, which is very good at the moment. At the start u might dislike Anna‘s character but after chapter 85 or so she will start changing for the better. Definitely give it a try, it might become the authors best novel imo Newest chapter is 128 as of writing this review.

LV 4

Ashborn1609

this is one of my favorite novel right now. if you, like me , are too used to villain protagonist or dark fantasy like botds , this one is the light you're looking for. good world background, good character development and good story? WHAT MORE COULD I ASK?

LV 13

Ryukurou

I am the EXP of my sword... EXP is my blood... and EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless reviews... Unknown to death, nor know to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so I pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

LV 15

MrNewbie

There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest ", the two met after the girl came back from the future to steal all the opportunities from the mc, and like in the arc of days since they've the mc goes from killing from sight, to her food is really good and she smells nice, i should do what she says and help her. This is bullshi* his family was killed recently yet he somehow is fine with helping the killer. I don't care if in the future we find that she wasn't completely at fault (we even have a memory of the girl where she begs her father to kill all of them and to not leg go of the mc) how can a normal human being do such a thing? if it was my family i wold have no problems in killing entire cities just to harm their killer, yet he helps her? why he dosen't try to stab her in the back while they fight enemies? why he helps her in stealing his opportunities? How can he be such a beta? And at last why does this novel have more than a million views yet only 29 reviews, all of which good?

LV 1

ShamelessGengar

It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because... In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughts At around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially acting Now when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaning I'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)

LV 1

XLucifer_AceX

Will it have romance?? I hope they become allies and then they develop feelings for each other 《》《》《》《》《》《》《》《》《》《》《》《《》》 《《《《《《《》》》》》》》 ?????????????? ////////////////.............../////////................../////////............///////////..............//////// ////////////////............./////////////////...........

LV 4

SUJAL_Thakur

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LV 15

Syphilitis

Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph

LV 4

TheDaoOfStupidity

Its alright tbh i didn't like the start so much but after a while it gets good

LV 3

kartik_agarwal

The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase

LV 15

Aceion

Just caught up to the story at chapter 458, and it has yet to disappoint me. It's difficult to find novels of this quality at WebNovel. Grammer can still .r slightly improved, but the story itself is top notch. Keep up the good work author, and don't rush the story. The gradual character development of Noel and Anna, along with the improvement in their relationship is definitely a big part of why this novel is so good.

LV 13

Night_Walker001

This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel. 1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is "I know it's you who did this" written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience. 2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great. 3. Update stability - Too good to be true. 4. Characteristics - Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML. Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.

LV 3

The_dark_knight

I love this novel. The story progresses is very well. I hope that the relationship between the hero and heroine will improve..........................

LV 4

Leric

I have read until chapter 55 and here is my review -Basically perfect grammar -Unique plot -Good storytelling -The Mc Is not completely blinded by revenge like the first time he met her.

LV 12

Yuri_is_Life

Wasted potential. Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5. Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5. In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work

LV 4

haru_senpai_5384

My favorite character here is Anna Stargaze😍 I really like her character growth, and I hope that she will continuously grow stronger, so Noel wouldn’t be able to surpass her hahahah. And I think the system is really a cheat😤 Cuz it gives power boost with missions while reincarnation gives you knowledge about the future in your previous life that might change with your actions in the current world. And please don’t let Anna fall for Noel easily. It would be better if Noel will fall for her first😏 I’d like to see how Noel and Anna’s relationship progress further in the future.

LV 12

Lordofkings12

First thing First , this novel author is the best one , in writing words , phrases making character development etc .. also it's not that i am being biased over here just read his another novel you will understand why imma telling that , just read and you will consider it's part of you 🤭

LV 15

DuckLord

Very good, praying that Noel gets his menories later in the story when he’s the same strength as before. For the sake of the romance I like both character but I don’t like that she knows this whole other side of him.

LV 13

I_Bleed_For_You

hmm yeah, I also expect the romance between those two. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. vDon't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it.