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trash, there's not even a world background explanation the author just dictate there's a game everyone will need to play and that's that. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
Novel synopsis is a lie and following on that the mc gets his counter to 100% reflect but keeps taking full damage and the author keeps changing or adding random nonsense that makes me think he is high while writing this overall not a great novel
The setting is full of blanks. I mean, there's an interstellar civilization! The 'game' is extradimensional and mysterious! But instead of telling us how all that works and/or why the game is even important in the first place, the author prefers to describe the virtual setting within the game instead. We don't even know what the MC uses to play the game! A headset? A coffin? A laptop? The author tells us NOTHING!
How tf mage become less favored class, trash look like a force plot very generic. ................ .............. ............... ..............
It has potential but translator please proofread your work before posting or get an editor.
well it did start off as a good novel but the first 5 chapters have soooooooooo much information missing and the characters arent even introduced good.. things just happen in a blink of an eye💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
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trash, there's not even a world background explanation the author just dictate there's a game everyone will need to play and that's that. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
Novel synopsis is a lie and following on that the mc gets his counter to 100% reflect but keeps taking full damage and the author keeps changing or adding random nonsense that makes me think he is high while writing this overall not a great novel
The setting is full of blanks. I mean, there's an interstellar civilization! The 'game' is extradimensional and mysterious! But instead of telling us how all that works and/or why the game is even important in the first place, the author prefers to describe the virtual setting within the game instead. We don't even know what the MC uses to play the game! A headset? A coffin? A laptop? The author tells us NOTHING!
How tf mage become less favored class, trash look like a force plot very generic. ................ .............. ............... ..............
It has potential but translator please proofread your work before posting or get an editor.
well it did start off as a good novel but the first 5 chapters have soooooooooo much information missing and the characters arent even introduced good.. things just happen in a blink of an eye💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
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wow ...great story dear writer ...looking forward to more ...