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I liked the pacing and the character development in it, and even though first volume has some raunchy grammar, it really improves alot in 2 and so on, so kudos to the author san for that🫶🫶.
I liked reading this book. the love of weiwei and zheng is so adorable to read. understanding, care and a desire for each other. it was amazing. the only thing i didn't understand is that the real story ends at chapter 244 and the chapters after are a alternate reality with same characters. I really don't understand why author will make that part of same book. it's very confusing
i cant read why is that? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaíaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Hi author, it's sillexa. I want to thank you for the amazing story first and foremost. I truly want to encourage everyone to read this story since failing to do so will make you regret it. Since English isn't the author's first language, I am aware that the initial half of the story is a little difficult to follow. However, as the author becomes better, you will eventually understand it. Please read this because I want to express to everyone what a lovely narrative it is and how it makes you eager for more. And I appreciate the author for always responding to my comments; I really enjoy our little interactions. Please keep in mind that there will always be people that LOVE your work just as much as I do, hehe.
I like the build up of the story and the characters. I'm so glad I came across it, It's so wholesome and touching. Very mwah mwah and mwah mwah.
oh I th thought you purposely put that image as the cover of the story because you knew who these animated characters were based off from, if you don't I would love to tell you who the two women that you see on there are, there Jennie and Lisa from blackpink 🤍🌷you should check out their latest song shut down on YouTube.
I'm just addicted to this story! It's a sweet omegaverse, I also find it interesting how there is an attempt not to summarize the characters in omega or alpha, characters have multiple layers, they are not limited to instinct and the need for the pheromone of other alphas and omegas. It's that great story for those who aren't used to the omegaverse and are interested in knowing. I like everything about this story, my favorite right now.
i really liked this story, its very rare one couple with two omegas together but i liked is strong e cute.. the english is ok, i apreciate your effort good job.
Hello people, it is now 1 year of The Princess Fall In Love With The Omega Queen, this is so exciting that it makes me very happy and scared... Have I been writing this story for a year? This is crazy. This story talks about the journey of a queen and a princess, both omegas and with different ages and views of life, love is strong and sweet, but even the greatest sweets have difficulties. I'm Brazilian and in that 1 year writing I had a lot of mistakes in relation to writing (I'm not fluent in English), so I ask for patience, the story arrived in a number of chapters that it's really difficult to review the older ones hahah. I hope you can see my improvement and especially enjoy what is to come, many ask me who is male lead and female lead, we can say that Liu Wei is the male. But we have two omega women, so this differentiation doesn't make sense, does it?! I really do not know. Also, I want you to think that it's a long journey with many steps, so some volumes have a greater focus on one thing than the other, but there is a purpose. Without further ado, I hope you enjoy reading and if you've been with me all this year, thank you <3, but if you're new here, thank you so much for taking an interest in starting this journey!
I liked the pacing and the character development in it, and even though first volume has some raunchy grammar, it really improves alot in 2 and so on, so kudos to the author san for that🫶🫶.
I liked reading this book. the love of weiwei and zheng is so adorable to read. understanding, care and a desire for each other. it was amazing. the only thing i didn't understand is that the real story ends at chapter 244 and the chapters after are a alternate reality with same characters. I really don't understand why author will make that part of same book. it's very confusing
i cant read why is that? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaíaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Hi author, it's sillexa. I want to thank you for the amazing story first and foremost. I truly want to encourage everyone to read this story since failing to do so will make you regret it. Since English isn't the author's first language, I am aware that the initial half of the story is a little difficult to follow. However, as the author becomes better, you will eventually understand it. Please read this because I want to express to everyone what a lovely narrative it is and how it makes you eager for more. And I appreciate the author for always responding to my comments; I really enjoy our little interactions. Please keep in mind that there will always be people that LOVE your work just as much as I do, hehe.
I like the build up of the story and the characters. I'm so glad I came across it, It's so wholesome and touching. Very mwah mwah and mwah mwah.
oh I th thought you purposely put that image as the cover of the story because you knew who these animated characters were based off from, if you don't I would love to tell you who the two women that you see on there are, there Jennie and Lisa from blackpink 🤍🌷you should check out their latest song shut down on YouTube.
I'm just addicted to this story! It's a sweet omegaverse, I also find it interesting how there is an attempt not to summarize the characters in omega or alpha, characters have multiple layers, they are not limited to instinct and the need for the pheromone of other alphas and omegas. It's that great story for those who aren't used to the omegaverse and are interested in knowing. I like everything about this story, my favorite right now.
i really liked this story, its very rare one couple with two omegas together but i liked is strong e cute.. the english is ok, i apreciate your effort good job.
Hello people, it is now 1 year of The Princess Fall In Love With The Omega Queen, this is so exciting that it makes me very happy and scared... Have I been writing this story for a year? This is crazy. This story talks about the journey of a queen and a princess, both omegas and with different ages and views of life, love is strong and sweet, but even the greatest sweets have difficulties. I'm Brazilian and in that 1 year writing I had a lot of mistakes in relation to writing (I'm not fluent in English), so I ask for patience, the story arrived in a number of chapters that it's really difficult to review the older ones hahah. I hope you can see my improvement and especially enjoy what is to come, many ask me who is male lead and female lead, we can say that Liu Wei is the male. But we have two omega women, so this differentiation doesn't make sense, does it?! I really do not know. Also, I want you to think that it's a long journey with many steps, so some volumes have a greater focus on one thing than the other, but there is a purpose. Without further ado, I hope you enjoy reading and if you've been with me all this year, thank you <3, but if you're new here, thank you so much for taking an interest in starting this journey!