Gamer in Naruto

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Rikelme_Silva_3873

It started well, I see a lot of potential, these days it's hard to find something good of this genre here on the webnovel. congratulations author if you can send about 50 chapters thank you hahaha but if you can't, it can be about 49 too😂👍

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Aizen_81

I don't understand why all writers hate Hiruzen so much, even if he didn't try hard to protect the Uchiha or prevent Danzo from committing crimes, yet he did his duty perfectly and died protecting Konoha. But if the problem is that he did not take care of Naruto, it is because he is busy like Naruto in the era of peace, he could not see his family at all, so how do you expect Hiruzen and Hua Hokage to do in the era of the Cold War

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CruelReality

Couldn’t get past the initial premise. MC is overloaded with more than enough power but then author throws in a gamer system. I woild be fine with this if he only had a gamer system, but no he has plenty enough in terms of advantages AND a gamer system. On top of that he gives the MC a combat suit which also ruins immersion. Lastly, he forced a reincarnation where the MC did not regain memories until 12. This is likely because the author was too lazy to write that time. And also because with how overloaded the MC is if he didn’t have 12+ wasted years the MC would be super op. I hate this kind of lazy writing. Also, even with the 12 year setback with the powers the MC has he will become OP way too fast and thus I suspect the author will keep forcing nerfs. Anyway, maybe it gets better later, but I cannot read past such a garbage initial setup without getting frustrated.

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ara_k

Imma be the honest guy here, I got an Idea, I wrote it randomly, idk how will it go and I will completely yolo it. You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned You have been warned

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4kp

The truth is I expected less at the beginning, but I get over myself a lot since you improve too much and the conversations don't feel rough and there isn't so much time skip, and it develops quite well and you act coherently, and you explain things that are unnecessary but thank you, I would appreciate a little more "padding" since I feel that at times it advances too quickly.

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Joshua_Welsh

I enjoy this very much and like how the author takes time to actually read the comments and correct things if needed. Very good and well written fanfiction 👍

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Zaelum

Not bad. Has a lot of potential. The story is slow but nice to read, just perfect for a long fanfic. Good job!~[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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BonBon1

what can I say, I Love this book it stands out at first I didn't want to read it because of the title, it usually have a history mof being bad or dropped but this is a great story and I am looking forward to more. The MC👌 perfect, story perfect, love the story can't wait for more unless you take that time to make a great master piece as you are take your time and give me the master piece

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Mad8Ham

I see a lot of potential this is very noice and it also has stabe updates, and it one of the fan fics that is not doing every thing in the same way, i also like the developments of the mc(powers) Recommended

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Hello_there12

This is excellent fanfiction. I recommend that you read this if you like naruto fanfiction or gamer fanfiction or both or if you just have time on your hands and cant find anything else to read.

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finalgetsuga

Truly a gamer system it's basically just speed running of the Naruto series and it's really annoying and not good at all like he just skipped through everything and you know doesn't talk about important key things that happen in the series and decides to gloss over important events

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MAYANK_KUMAR_4300

It's really good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Celectra

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Raging_Waves

This book is a very cool and nice book you should probably read it cuz the book is pretty crazy, whacky, and of course zaney very cool👍👍👍

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CG292

This is going good so far hope u dont add other animes stuff in this well also make him chunin before original 12 take exam cuz he did amount of mission or whatever other criteria

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Onion_CG

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Gd_Sys

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SAURON_

Author get back to your marvel fan-fic do this after you get to fifty chapters in that novel then you can come back to this one I believe your marvel fan-fic will be more popular compared to this one.