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Chapitre 3: Chap 3 : And Story Begins ??

Somewhere In the East of the Mount Coronet range, The Sinnoh region.

In the thick green forest in the front of the waterfall black-haired 10-year-old kid is standing while looking around.

[Kid's POV]

Ohh! Fuck, It's Not a dream?

I've literally been awake less than ten seconds and already my mood turned into Awestruck. For one, I freaking woke up in front of a beautiful waterfall and a small pond. Thankfully I think it was not a dream as I have the egg incubator in my hand?

Secondly, My body feels weak, and some weird feelings I have?

"Uh, it's somewhat cold here, so where am I ? "the kid said while hugging the egg incubator.

Taking a look around me all I can see is a waterfall that creates a stream, well alongside a wide expanse of grassy terrain and a ton of trees. long dirt road littered with small puddles here and there with rough terrain. I think that is a way out of here.

"Ahh, my mind fills dizzy?" I wondered out loud. I walked up to the pond to wash my face with water.

It ain't my looks for sure. Thank god that I did not transmigrate as some fatty pig.

I'm at the best average looking with a normal body with some fat from not doing exercise, a five out of ten if there ever was one done review for my look. Maybe a six if I brought some people with money for it which I am not going to do for it.

Speaking of looks though, what the hell? dark black hair with radiant blue eyes.

Maybe it's the anime world why colorful eyes are needed with messy hair which I have no complaints about as I look handsome but if I looked down and grimaced, maybe I should not have asked to become a kid?

It's pokemon worlds as everyone starts their journey around the age of 10, which is weird and somewhat irresponsible for a parent to do this to their kid.

And I asked thinking this but maybe I should have asked to become pokemon champion or master from start.

...Well, anyway it is already in the past. but am really shorter than before. I've always been tall among people around my age at 19.

I'm wearing a white t-shirt with a black jacket and matching loose black pants. A pair of boots and gloves as it is cold here. the t-shirt has a Pokeball design on the front.

After washing my face, I hear sweet voices.

"Shellos.. Shellos..Shellos "

Near the pond, I can see blue and green slug-like pokemon.

"It's Real pokemon! Wow, which is it? "

I worked close to it with still some distance to it.

It has slug-like bodies. Like a real sea slug, it has mantles covering the top halves of its body. also have black oval-shaped eyes, tiny noses, wide yellow lips, and yellow outlines around his eyes and mantles.

the underside is green and the mantle is blue. The shell has two flap-like protrusions, resembling cerata. These protrusions are lined with yellow. On its head are two white-tipped tentacles resembling rhinophores that extend away from its face.

It looked in my direction and smiled at me I think.

"Shallos... Sha..Llos"

It surprises me by extending his neck to incredible lengths. out of surprise, I walked back but I fell into the pond while hugging the egg.

"Ahh! I am half wet now." thank god it was shallow here and did not happen anything to the egg.

"Wooperrr... W..Wooperr "

A laughing voice of armless blue axolotl type pokemon comes from behind. Its head is large compared to its body, and it has small, round, black eyes.

"Yeah, laugh all you want but you miss a chance to join me by laughing at me", I said with irritation.

Ahh!, I sound like a team rocket clown. Let's get out of here.

After coming out of the pond, and looking at the dirt road I Still have no idea which way should i go.

Should I go west or east?

"Okey, let's go to the west first look around to find a city or town"

A half-hour later.

"Ahh! When will I be out of this forest, my boots and socks are wet from earlier!"

*bushes shaking*

"Rhydon! "

Pokémon with a large, gray, bipedal with features similar to both dinosaurs and rhinoceroses appear.

"I know who is it, It's Rhydon!"

Rhydon was the first Pokémon ever created or designed. It did not see in my direction and continued walking on its path.

" It should be safe if I have pokemon to fight other threats, Maybe if I have Pokeball I should catch it."

Riffling through my pockets, I come to find some small round things. Is it Pokeball?

As Rhydon was leaving, without looking what it is. like the game, I curve throw it on its back.

"Rhydon ?"

"???"

Both of over eyes met in confusion. I quickly looked in my pocket to see what it was.

"It's candy !!!"

"R..Rhydon"

" Oh NO it's attacking"

Annoyed Rhydon First Used Rock Slide. Some Big Rock Come out of Nowhere above me.

I quickly backed away. but for his next attack, I had no time to see and react to it as the dust that was created from the previous move is blocking my view.

"Rhydonnn!" he uses Rock Blast.

As I had the feeling that something is coming in front. I quickly hug the egg incubator tightly and turn my back on it.

"Ahh!"

Laying on the ground, I passed out.

.....

Some time ago, pokemon center in snowpoint city.

"Why did you call me? anyway, I want to tell you that I beat the gym leader here at snowpoint city gym and got an Icicle Badge, grandmother!" blond teen and her pokemon can be seen talking to her grandmother at the phone booth.

She showed her all seven gym badges to her.

"Whoo! That's excellent, you are only one badge away from Collecting all, Cynthia, my dear I am really Proud of you. Do your best !" a proud voice comes from another side of the call.

"It's Nothing, Just Wait and we will win the Sinnoh League and Become New Champion! right Gible. ", the blond devil said excitedly.

"Gible!" her pokemon also said excitedly while extending her up.

A small primarily blue-colored pokemon look like a dragon and shark as it has sharp teeth, on top of its head is a dorsal fin and two horns that are like jet engines.

Gible is in her hug so can see the screen. she is her first partner from start.

"Oh, Gible! How are you? Is she taking good care of her and all of you ?" her grandmother asked knowing her granddaughter well.

"Gible gib.."

"Of course, I took care of them and they are all good pokemon ! also why did you call me at this time? "Cynthia did not what to hear that now.

"Right, do you know your uncle, Carson? The one who works at Mount Coronet on pokemon there" caroline, her grandmother said in a gloomy voice.

"Yeah, So What happened?" Cynthia also can see sad expressions.

"There was an earthquake near the mountain tunnels they were working and they are missing since then. the whole team of 10 people that working under Carson.it happened two days ago, I get to know this now."

"I hope nothing bad happens to them and that quiet kid also must be worried," Cynthia remembers his uncle's family when they come to meet them.

"Yeah, That why I call you. we need to go there, I am busy with some work so I will be late. can you go there as it is not good for a 10-year-old kid alone without relatives? "

"Okey, I am at snowpoint city so I need to go to lilypad Town First, from there where should I go?"

"yes, Correct. from there you should go to the crystal pokemon research facility that is in the south on way to lucario kingdom."

"Okey, bye. Take care of yourself grandmother." Cynthia said to caroline.

"Gible... Gible!"

"Goodbye. Cynthia and Gible, take care of yourself too."

both said goodbye and ended the call.

"Let's go we will find uncle and look after cousin. Gible !"

"Gible!"

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author -

Well, everyone thanks for your support!

I am finishing the final year of my college and starting my job...huh.

Anyway, I will try to make two Chapters a week.

So please Stick together with me.

...

Here are The Questions For Story.

How Should Story Go First,

1. MC joins School

-> School romance, First Shinnoh Than Alola, School Battle League Like Soul Land

2. MC Start Journey

-> Like Anime

also, again tell me which pokemon should be good for mc and its harem.

have some good ideas about the story. tell me.

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Chapitre 4: Chap 4 : unexpectedly meeting(part I)

the Universe and Pokémon world was created by a single Pokémon, Arceus. Void of nothingness, a single egg came into existence. which then hatched into Arceus.don't know if Arceus was doing his duty or feeling lonely or just on a whim.

Arceus creates Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina. gives Dialga and Palkia the ability to control time and space.

Well, it was not perfect, and maybe things did not go as Arceus thought. Giratina is banished into another dimension for its behavior.

It is said in many Sinnoh legends that during the very early formation of the world, possibly sooner, Arceus creates Azelf, Uxie, and Mesprit to create willpower, knowledge, and emotion. attributes that are in all modern humans and Pokémon.

They were given the ability to calm and control Dialga and Palkia whenever they were enraged.

After the formation of the Sinnoh region, they dive to the bottom of present-day Lake Valor, Lake Acuity, and Lake Verity, respectively, dubbing the term "the lake guardians" that guard the world.

Also in these early times, Mew appeared on the planet, containing the DNA of every Pokémon. Many scientists believe that Mew was the ancestor of all Pokémon.

For several passing years, many legendary pokemon roamed the world and still are, each with their legend and mark over a particular region.

Now, many years have passed, and this world come to what it is.

However, how will the world change, when a new existence plan to shake things up?

*****

In the center part of the Sinnoh region. Mount Coronet stands in the middle of Sinnoh, extending from the northern wilderness to the southern tip of the region, splitting it into two halves.

It is truly best defined as a mountain range, with the highest peak shrouded in legend.

This place was a paradise for many people because they could find strong pokemon to catch. But this place now for some time had forever slept in this very forest because of their low strength.

The East of the Mount Coronet range, The Sinnoh region.

At this time, the said youth slowly moved a few times, as he slowly opened his eyes. The first thing he saw was the moon, shining on a beautiful stary night.

With his ears, he picked up the sound of birds or flying-type pokemon chirping in the distance.

He looked around him with a puzzled and pained expression.

He was studying the damage to his body taken from a hit, after which he made a wry smile in his heart as his pokemon egg had nothing happened. He had never thought that one day he would lose his life by truck-kun only to get reincarnated to the pokemon world just like those fanfics but still doing silly mistakes.

"... haha!"

His body hurt but he is feeling alive. It is amazing. His life was boring, yet he found his salvation in manga and anime.

But now, his life was no longer going to be boring. After all, he became one of them. One of the transmigrated characters that he always dreamed of and read about in the books.

Looking back at his life, he had no anchors weighing him down. His adopted family have passed away years ago, he never had a sibling as they adopted him as they never had a child, and he could care less about his wannabe friends.

"Ahh, it's still hurt...The first thing I should do is..."

He felt extremely thirsty and having seen the stream near him, he does not think that he can walk because of his injury to the back. He did take a rock blast in the back.

He does not know which world is this similar to a game or anime. as in-game moves have fixed damage but In the anime, moves don't seem to have a set power and can be effected through various factors, such as the Pokémon having received a power boost of some sort, or even through conscious choice.

Anyway, it hurt like hell, okay!

He struggled to get up but after taking out his all willpower, he managed to do it. After that, supporting his weak body, he started to walk towards it.

When he looked at the water stream near the pathway, a male with dark hair and a pair of blue eyes appeared in the reflection.

"I still can't get around my new look...That's completely different from what my appearance was before the death...But I am much more handsome than I was before, with still in a child body."

"Well... it's hard to tell what's the general beauty standard in this pokemon world, but I sure am satisfied with what I got."

He pulled up his shirt and observed his upper body. His new body was very fit and looked good if not for all dirt and some bruises here and there.

"Well, that god did say it's going to be different around these parts…I need to train my skill in the aura and psychic ability. "

He reached his hand towards the water stream to take a quick sip as his thirst was still not satisfied, but then he realized, that he shouldn't drink that, and should instead find a different source of water.

Water streams support the entire ecosystems of living things. Bacteria are likely to thrive in such an environment. Drinking stream water would expose him to these bacteria. It's especially dangerous when he had no idea what kind of bacteria there were in this new world.

"...I don't have any good filtering device or anything I could use to filter out the water...I should go with the safe route and scout out the area first, after that meeting with Rhydon, I don't want to meet similar pokemon."

Can't find a wallet or phone though. Well, guess I need to forget my phone now.

I still had to arc an eyebrow though when I remember my phone. For one, mine is a latex model, bought it just a weak ago. A nice-looking, easy-to-use. Not a blemish on it, in fact, I brought it with all my savings.

"It seems there are just trees all around me. I need to look for a place where the water flows the fastest. If it is a good distance away from the source, it means there are fewer chances of me drinking unsafe water."

He looked on and noticed the stream was endless. It would take him forever to find that specific location.

"Damn, it's only the first day, and yet things are getting complicated already. But ey, it's still better than drinking water filled with pokemon and animal piss and bacteria of all kinds. And it's night already."

He was about to head out when he heard someone sound like a sweet voice in the distance.

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author -

Well, everyone thanks for your support!

I am finishing the final year of my college and starting my job...huh.

Anyway, I will try to make two Chapters a week.

So please Stick together with me.

...

Here MC will Start Journey Like Anime.it will be similar to cannon.

today's question for the story.

what should be the fate of ash ketchup down the road? this is my point right now. tell me which should be there and if you have any good ideas you have or some change in current points??

->mc's friendly rival and nothing else.

-> ash has some romance(not feeling like just writing after he did leave many girls behind)

->*throat clear* romance with Gary, Barry(why I feel like typing gay with both names), Kiawe, Gladion, Sawyer, paul, Alain, Leon... (I am telling you he is somewhat gay. even for rivals he got all kind childhood love not right it friend, tsundere, energetic, rich, king, school lo..friend). why I am living this main Goh(best buddy).

wow, ash can easily make a harem for him here. anyway, I am doing this for comedy not gonna write in detail.

->just be done and stay him out of the story.

and any of your suggestion for it.

also, again tell me which pokemon should be good for mc and its harem.

have some good ideas about the story. tell me.

Comment Here


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