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Please! please ! Support this book. It's really a story about the 21st century Rapunzel.
Just a few words. If you need a starter to romance, this is it. The plot is lovely, and I'm honestly loving Bai a lot. Everything about this book makes me want to read it over and over again; it's too good! All in All, love it!
That's quite the interesting take on two lead characters, as someone who specializes in writing several characters at a time I know how much work it takes to keep the pace of the story going and this is done in a very keen way. Well done.
wow~ this novel is a very engaging read with a brewing plot that keeps readers on their toes! I personally enjoyed the way the author narrates and how everything flows so well without a break. the characters as they are introduced immediately give off their own persona and feelings that differentiates them! best of luck writing Duchess pear!
The writer continues to amaze, I'm all caught up now to chapter 34 and still riveted by all the drama and the feuding in the family, I can't wait to see what the writer has in store next!
I’m pretty much a sucker for ‘Oppersites Attract’ couple dynamics. So if thats what your looking for, I whole heartedly recommend. The author excels ‘showing’ instead of telling a new spin of this beloved genre. The ML and FL are devoped as oppersites that are *spoilers* most definitely attracted.
The imagination of the story and the details are so vivid. Even having different personalities, background the ML and FL expects to be loved. Everyone isn't lucky to have caring family and their fate-- Maybe they could be each other support. I feel as if the flow is a bit slow. But except that a wonderful story. Waiting for more updates.
Wow! Honestly I'm truly impress by how each character attracts the attention of the reader. Just by reading the inception of the novel, one will that this novel is in line to be a generational WN masterpiece. I'm looking forward to more great chapters. keep it up author.
Two very unique and interesting characters with a story to tell. With an interesting mystery. Make me want to sit by a fire and enjoy a good read.
I’ve only read up to chapter 21 but so far I like the writer’s flow and unique writing style. From the start her characters, especially Bai, are engaging and if you like lots of drama, angst and tension then this novel has it all. I think I need to read some more from this writer to see how the story develops over time.
The synopsis is amazingly gripping which attracts the attain of readers. However, after going through the chapters, I can assure you that the world-building and character development are very high. In conclusion I loved the story and adding it to my reading list.Good work author :)
A great book to begin with... the quote "opposites attract each other" literally came runnjng to my mind... a FL who hasn't witnessed much of the owrld while a ML who never stayed home, what more do we want... curious to know how their relationship would be going... good job author.. more power to you!!
Wow...❤️ It's super awesome dear author 💕 I love the improvement. All the best with the future updates 🤠 looking forward for the updates with pretty much excitement ☺️
a beautiful masterpiece! I love the story, from the beguiling characters to the exciting plot! I am addinf the book tomy library now asap! please continue to add more chapters
The premise seems interesting. I'd say baring a few things whic could be easily fixed the novel is worth a shot. Keep it up author and keep pumping more chapters. peace;
giving this 5 stars. i really liked the book. the characters are amazing and I love where the story is going. I am hooked, line and sinker and I cant wait to binge read more.
the way the story started with tension caught me. Two different personalities, two different prospective were met by the actions of fate. This is the story shows how well the author planned.
Good novel with great potential. The novel has two unique lead characters and I am looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. [img=recommend]
When I first read the book, I felt like it was contemporary romance but it's actually fantasy romance. Apart from that, the author has made the wonderful use of imageries to describe the scenes by mentioning tiniest of the details. What I like most about the book is that both the main leads [ML and FL] have been wounded in the past and they come together to heal each other. It's sweet and perfectly written. if you like books of such genre, then do give it a read. You won't be disappointed, trust me.
An excellently written book with an amazing plot. The characters are well described and although it's still a bit early, it is already clear that this book has great potential. Good luck in WSA!
Immaculate beginning, great novel overall. I am not dissapointed of finding this novel, it's honestly a great read, and it gives you that compelling feeling, you know? Highly recommend this story to anyone!
the best line I find in the 2nd chapter is" is your girlfriend pregnant??? " lol... like the start of the novel..two different personalities fall in love with each other such a good concept ..will like to see the growth of the characters...love it.. 🥤🥤
Hi Pearl! The story tells about two families : the Qian and the Bai family. The first 10 chapters mostly talk about the Bai family. I find the drama and interaction in both families engaging, but the constant switch between the stories should be avoided IMHO. Maybe start with the Qian family because the opening chapter was amazing, but then make one switch to the Bai family up until Qian Jin appears on TV. I hope things are improving for Qian Mu. Poor boy born to yet another despicable father. Please pay more attention to the capitalization and structure, do not rush with the plot. Otherwise you are doing very well. Good job!
I love everything about this book and look forward in reading more chapters. I added it to my shelf so I'll get updated when ever u upload a new chapter
clrealy the author knows were she is headed , the plot is great and the writing style is magnigicient, loved the characters and i can't wait for further chap
Bai and Qian's relationship and dynamic is very interesting to me. The way they connect and full sprout together hasn't been fully shown yet but I already love it. Thank you author and keep up the great work!
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It's rare to read good novels these days, and yours is a gem! I'm looking forward to reading more chapters! Please, author, continue writing more!
This book is really interesting! The premise, the plot and the characters are quite compelling, and honestly I'm interested to see where this book goes! Keep up the good work!
A good start. Nice introduction and a good description I always say the start is the most important aspect that attracts readers and this novel nailed it. The novel is good [ only some few typos that is] But It is overall good
Another good novel with a strong female lead from the same author. The author did a wonderful job narrating and designing the characters.
Please! please ! Support this book. It's really a story about the 21st century Rapunzel.
Just a few words. If you need a starter to romance, this is it. The plot is lovely, and I'm honestly loving Bai a lot. Everything about this book makes me want to read it over and over again; it's too good! All in All, love it!
That's quite the interesting take on two lead characters, as someone who specializes in writing several characters at a time I know how much work it takes to keep the pace of the story going and this is done in a very keen way. Well done.
wow~ this novel is a very engaging read with a brewing plot that keeps readers on their toes! I personally enjoyed the way the author narrates and how everything flows so well without a break. the characters as they are introduced immediately give off their own persona and feelings that differentiates them! best of luck writing Duchess pear!
The writer continues to amaze, I'm all caught up now to chapter 34 and still riveted by all the drama and the feuding in the family, I can't wait to see what the writer has in store next!
I’m pretty much a sucker for ‘Oppersites Attract’ couple dynamics. So if thats what your looking for, I whole heartedly recommend. The author excels ‘showing’ instead of telling a new spin of this beloved genre. The ML and FL are devoped as oppersites that are *spoilers* most definitely attracted.
The imagination of the story and the details are so vivid. Even having different personalities, background the ML and FL expects to be loved. Everyone isn't lucky to have caring family and their fate-- Maybe they could be each other support. I feel as if the flow is a bit slow. But except that a wonderful story. Waiting for more updates.
Wow! Honestly I'm truly impress by how each character attracts the attention of the reader. Just by reading the inception of the novel, one will that this novel is in line to be a generational WN masterpiece. I'm looking forward to more great chapters. keep it up author.
Two very unique and interesting characters with a story to tell. With an interesting mystery. Make me want to sit by a fire and enjoy a good read.
I’ve only read up to chapter 21 but so far I like the writer’s flow and unique writing style. From the start her characters, especially Bai, are engaging and if you like lots of drama, angst and tension then this novel has it all. I think I need to read some more from this writer to see how the story develops over time.
The synopsis is amazingly gripping which attracts the attain of readers. However, after going through the chapters, I can assure you that the world-building and character development are very high. In conclusion I loved the story and adding it to my reading list.Good work author :)
A great book to begin with... the quote "opposites attract each other" literally came runnjng to my mind... a FL who hasn't witnessed much of the owrld while a ML who never stayed home, what more do we want... curious to know how their relationship would be going... good job author.. more power to you!!
Wow...❤️ It's super awesome dear author 💕 I love the improvement. All the best with the future updates 🤠 looking forward for the updates with pretty much excitement ☺️
a beautiful masterpiece! I love the story, from the beguiling characters to the exciting plot! I am addinf the book tomy library now asap! please continue to add more chapters
The premise seems interesting. I'd say baring a few things whic could be easily fixed the novel is worth a shot. Keep it up author and keep pumping more chapters. peace;
giving this 5 stars. i really liked the book. the characters are amazing and I love where the story is going. I am hooked, line and sinker and I cant wait to binge read more.
the way the story started with tension caught me. Two different personalities, two different prospective were met by the actions of fate. This is the story shows how well the author planned.
Good novel with great potential. The novel has two unique lead characters and I am looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. [img=recommend]
When I first read the book, I felt like it was contemporary romance but it's actually fantasy romance. Apart from that, the author has made the wonderful use of imageries to describe the scenes by mentioning tiniest of the details. What I like most about the book is that both the main leads [ML and FL] have been wounded in the past and they come together to heal each other. It's sweet and perfectly written. if you like books of such genre, then do give it a read. You won't be disappointed, trust me.
An excellently written book with an amazing plot. The characters are well described and although it's still a bit early, it is already clear that this book has great potential. Good luck in WSA!
Immaculate beginning, great novel overall. I am not dissapointed of finding this novel, it's honestly a great read, and it gives you that compelling feeling, you know? Highly recommend this story to anyone!
the best line I find in the 2nd chapter is" is your girlfriend pregnant??? " lol... like the start of the novel..two different personalities fall in love with each other such a good concept ..will like to see the growth of the characters...love it.. 🥤🥤
Hi Pearl! The story tells about two families : the Qian and the Bai family. The first 10 chapters mostly talk about the Bai family. I find the drama and interaction in both families engaging, but the constant switch between the stories should be avoided IMHO. Maybe start with the Qian family because the opening chapter was amazing, but then make one switch to the Bai family up until Qian Jin appears on TV. I hope things are improving for Qian Mu. Poor boy born to yet another despicable father. Please pay more attention to the capitalization and structure, do not rush with the plot. Otherwise you are doing very well. Good job!
I love everything about this book and look forward in reading more chapters. I added it to my shelf so I'll get updated when ever u upload a new chapter
clrealy the author knows were she is headed , the plot is great and the writing style is magnigicient, loved the characters and i can't wait for further chap
Bai and Qian's relationship and dynamic is very interesting to me. The way they connect and full sprout together hasn't been fully shown yet but I already love it. Thank you author and keep up the great work!
Spoiler de révélation It's rare to read good novels these days, and yours is a gem! I'm looking forward to reading more chapters! Please, author, continue writing more!
This book is really interesting! The premise, the plot and the characters are quite compelling, and honestly I'm interested to see where this book goes! Keep up the good work!
A good start. Nice introduction and a good description I always say the start is the most important aspect that attracts readers and this novel nailed it. The novel is good [ only some few typos that is] But It is overall good
Another good novel with a strong female lead from the same author. The author did a wonderful job narrating and designing the characters.