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The author writes competently and the idea is good, but he couldn’t cope with the execution; there is very little logic and frankly childish actions of the main character everywhere, and I generally keep silent about the system and its creator; in short, it’s horror and not fan fiction; the author needs to work on the story itself and then everything will be fine; good luck him in this 🤔
good for rn. but the update is not here for a very long time. Hopefully an update will be here so that we see how the story progresses. so till then we need to wait
At first i was quite dissatisfied with the systems behavior but its author choice. So i left it at around 8 or 9th chapter. But i saw some improvements in the story. But one downgrade is upgrade is not consistent. Otherwise i enjoyed it now.
Really annoying and disgusting system, honestly I don't know how the autor though it would be a good idea to make its attitude like that.. but if you can handle that you might like it.
1. annoying system 2. this fic feel like Chinese fic 3. annoying mc ......................................................................
Probably the most "creative" fic i have ever read. I feel like "special" people like u require a special review so that i dont offend u accidentally. Ps- keep the crazy with u and not on the internet
I saw tags no romance is there no romantic relationship in this fic?? if there is then how about kushina and mc[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the concept could be good but the system personally ruin the reading experience completely. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
if anyone can deal with the annoying system this is will be a good read for you but I can't Good luck auther Why are u still reading this
New STORY and its going great after looking first few chapter . hope this will continue and this story will grow into good direction..but one problems is length of each chapter is short
Although the idea of using naruto world as a fanfic location is not new, i tried this and like the first few chapter as i like the story till now. but what can be happen in future will depend
The author writes competently and the idea is good, but he couldn’t cope with the execution; there is very little logic and frankly childish actions of the main character everywhere, and I generally keep silent about the system and its creator; in short, it’s horror and not fan fiction; the author needs to work on the story itself and then everything will be fine; good luck him in this 🤔
good for rn. but the update is not here for a very long time. Hopefully an update will be here so that we see how the story progresses. so till then we need to wait
At first i was quite dissatisfied with the systems behavior but its author choice. So i left it at around 8 or 9th chapter. But i saw some improvements in the story. But one downgrade is upgrade is not consistent. Otherwise i enjoyed it now.
Really annoying and disgusting system, honestly I don't know how the autor though it would be a good idea to make its attitude like that.. but if you can handle that you might like it.
1. annoying system 2. this fic feel like Chinese fic 3. annoying mc ......................................................................
Probably the most "creative" fic i have ever read. I feel like "special" people like u require a special review so that i dont offend u accidentally. Ps- keep the crazy with u and not on the internet
I saw tags no romance is there no romantic relationship in this fic?? if there is then how about kushina and mc[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the concept could be good but the system personally ruin the reading experience completely. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
if anyone can deal with the annoying system this is will be a good read for you but I can't Good luck auther Why are u still reading this
New STORY and its going great after looking first few chapter . hope this will continue and this story will grow into good direction..but one problems is length of each chapter is short
Although the idea of using naruto world as a fanfic location is not new, i tried this and like the first few chapter as i like the story till now. but what can be happen in future will depend