Synopsis
Vishnu’s parents died when he was just a teenager. For revenge and the sake of his only family remaining, he got stronger. But in the end, his sister was taken away from him. He killed his parent's murderer and also those who harmed his sister. But now all alone.
A portal opens in front of him. As thousands of soldiers are running toward him to kill him, he vanishes.
Appears in a different world but also the same, with a ring he found in the portal. What mysteries the Ring holds and what would he do from now on in this new world all alone?
But he, who thought he has reached the pinnacle in his previous world is but a tiny ant here so the power to grow stronger ignites within him.
He’ll reach the peak to have enough power this time to protect his future loved ones.
Would he be able to do it? Follow Vishnu through his Journey across the universe.
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Give it a chance as I try to do better with each chapter.
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Écrire un avisInteresting introduction and well-built world, even the blurb is catchy too, I'm already curious about the cultivators Great work author, I'm rooting for you.🙌🙌
One of best novel in here.The novel deserves much more praise and attention than it is getting.From world building to Character design, story telling to writing quantity everything is done beautifully.Even I have already read same kind of novels ,this one is the most interesting.
The opening is very intriguing, good word building, well thought plot, characters are well immersed in the storyline, I recommend this novel, good work author, waiting for more chapters.
A wonderful novel,i love the concept of the cultivation You all should try this novel,it’s a rare gem Got me hooked on the first chapter Good job author
A unique book i see. A different twist and style to the cultivation world. Solid MC, Solid power system, great plots. Just a little editing and i see a top book in the making. Good one author. 👌🏼
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Great book So far i have enjoyed the character devolopment and the plot mixed with the pleasant dark humor. i cant wait to read more hopefully soon.
Indian mythology; consider me in. Even I would like to know how Vishnu ends up being the God of ailmentation. One of the most worshiped and revered god.
If you want a ruthless and murderous MC, this book is for you. I was quite interested by the name Vishnu because I knew that was the name of the Hindu God. I wonder if that had relevance to the story later on. The writing quality have some grammar mistakes, but the word usage itself is alright. Only some problems with punctuations and some sentences could have been divided into two or three. As for the character development, I'm looking forward to how Vishnu will change after he encounters more hardships. He loves to torture people but it was out of justice, though how he enact that justice may seem to be too much for some. It gives him andinteresting moral compass. Overall, go try to read the book if you like crazy MC like this!
Very interesting start. Love MCs that aren't afraid to get their hands dirty and Vishnu certainly fits that ticket. I've only read the first few chapters, but so far the grammar is decent and it's easy to read, the small mistakes are few and far between, mostly consisting of miscapitalizations that in no way effect the reading experience. I'd be interested in finding out if their is any going back and forth between worlds. I look forward to reading more.
I am loving what I am reading so far. The cultivation aspect of it is predictable but I can live with it. I like our main character Vishnu. He is full of emotion and I feel he is a tsundere type seeing his interaction with Arthur. Keep releasing.
What a unique twist to the classic tale of cultivation! The protagonist has a few screws loose, but this makes his journey all the more interesting.
What can I say?... I found the book so interesting and easy to read!! The world-building is okay, same with the plot. The characters are okay too and the writing quality isn't bad.
The author has done a good work in trying to add mystery and I look forward to how the story turns out! Please keep writing 😐............ The synopsis is also really nice ✨✨✨
the author did great in the first chaps, loved the writing style qnd alsi the characters they have depth in them. the fact that i real all the thqt pro e how much the story is captivating and page turner.. it is the beginning of something big and i am so excited to continue reading
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Worth a read. The characters are well written and the story seems to be progressing in a good direction. It is in early to comment too much but the story seems promising and as the title suggests there is a universe to explore so will be reading it and will comment further down the line again. … Now webnovel won’t let me comment it cause 140 words. So I’m typing some random s**t here so no need to worry. Guy 1- Why aren’t koalas actual bears? Guy 2- Cause they don’t meet the koalafication. … Guy 1-you’re American when you go into the bathroom and out of the bathroom but what are you when you’re IN the bathroom? Guy 2- what? Guy1- Europeein. … It takes guts to be an organ donor. (read again I know you didn’t get it). … If math is mathematical and quizzes are quizzical then what are tests?
Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right? surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not. ... Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them. As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem) ... Take care guys and be safe. peace;
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An mc with some dark humour. If you wanna see some... interesting ways of getting back at people, would recommend. Dude is rather unhinged...