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What is admirable is the planned structure for the delivery of the novel in only three volumes, it gives us: 20 chapters per volume. And the synopsis to unite two opposite characters: the worst with the best. The intervention of the teacher stands out, who assumes this challenge for the benefit of the class. Readers enjoy the pleasant way of writing. successes!
Hello everyone! Another announcement from Senpai himself, hehhehe. Once again, I just want to thank everyone for completing this novel, and thank you for a million views >///< Also, I just wanna say, that the officially last chapter of this novel is coming out soon! I apologize for not publishing it sooner. After all, the side story function just got activated yesterday for my novel. So please look forward to it! It's bound to happen within the week! Have a great read >///<
This is awsome! The intro, the middle and especially the end were all spectacular! It's clear that a lot of thought has been put into this novel, and I enyojed reading this very much.
This is definitely a keeper. Had me crying out of happiness, sadness and even anger.
I really loved this book from beginning to end, it left a good taste and I'm glad I didn't over look it
What a good book. Although some characters are poorly designed, everything else is perfecct!
Dear readers, DaisukiDayoSenpai here! So I've finished this novel for quite some time now, and I just noticed that I actually got a contract for this novel. I don't know how, but I remembered applying for a contract back when this novel was halfway done. And now that It was already complete, that's when I got the contract hahhaha, There were a couple of things that I'd change in this novel but I really liked the ending. I might publish a side story soon, but I don't know how I'd fit everything in one chapter. Once again, I would like to thank all of you for supporting me until the end. This is my very first romcom and I'm glad that it's got so many positive reviews and comments. I'll strive to become a better writer so I could write more novels like this one. And this may probably be my last announcement via the review section, so I'd just like to mention that I might lock a couple of chapters, just so I could finally go premium. It won't be too much though, since I quite enjoy this novel as free. That's it for my announcement, this is DaisukiDayoSenpai signing off >///<
All I can say is that I'm loving this story so much. The giving of emotions and the twist and turns, how I could actually relate to it is amazing. Hands up to you authornim 🙌 [img=recommend]
I really liked this novel. It was a very nice break from the usual stuff I read.
A new idea, and a fresh start, this novel was one that I read in my breaks and find myself feeling refreshed, I am stacking up these chapters...
Is it me or is there a great lack of comments on chapters? Were these paid chapters or something? Anyways, I love this book a lot, though I haven’t completed it. Kudos to you, author! I must say, however, the flashbacks made sense, but the way you described it does make it feel a bit repetitive. A minor inconvenience nevertheless!
The book was well written, and the story was well relayed! Thanks a lot for this masterpiece.
I found this novel by accident, found the synopsis interesting, and decided to read it. My overall preference in novels is usually fantasy works, but I somehow wanted to give this a shot and I am glad I did. This novel had me feeling all sorts of emotions. I was sad, angry, amused and o much more. The difficulties and pain Hajime experienced pushed me to tears at times. There are so many themes in this novel that I think many of us will find relatable. I hope you give this a shot and maybe gain some encouragement for yourself to keep fighting; that just like Hajime, it's not over till it's over, and after the cold of winter, spring will always come. Thank you for an amazing story, author.
Loving the story and the characters, i cant seem to put it down for a moment. I do have only 1 small critique if i may, the words him, her, himself, herself tend to get switched around quite often ive noticed which causes my brain to stop for a moment and reread the sentence. For example in ch68 very first paragraph last sentence. Aside from that its very well written and thought put and i just cant stop
This has introduced a new world to me. Normally, I read novels geared toward magic. I saw this and said well let me try. First of all, this is a story a lot of people will relate to. It's realistic in the sense of experience. The Mc is portrayed well. His character is just wonderful. To explain it well, I'll use some anime reference. Imagine the mc from toradora where he isn't exactly a delinquent but is seen as one. But in this novel rather than the mc being seen as one just because of his looks, it's more of his situation. The way the story progresses casually and the character get to know each other is sweet. also this novel is sad to a good extent. I won't give any more review that would spoil the whole book. But give it a try and it might just be the next genre you will like to read.
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early chapter is pretty monotonous but still fun however it gradually fill with plot and all.the romcom is medicore overall 7/10 . Obviously it gradually be better
I rarely give a review to novels I'd read, but this work is so good. It's refreshing to read a story without inconsistent logic or plot. My only concern is the loan shark group, I have a hunch that it will be the 'hole' in the plot. The reason is that the 'logic' here is somewhat bend as a protection for the MC. With them targeting the MC, how come they don't ransack his house, sell his property, or even his body. That's the rational thing to do instead of just wasting time on him asking for money for a year. The novel is good. If the above-mentioned thing does not become a plot hole, I'm considering to support this novel, wholeheartedly. For the meanwhile I continue appreciating this work, best of luck author. Thanks for your hardwork!
I liked the plot very much. The story is surely captivating. Also, the characters are interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I am looking forward to read more chapters.
Really? Right in front of my pancit canton? I've been following the author's works for quite some time now and I can say that this is his most interesting novel yet. I've known him to write science fiction all the time but now he's diving into romcom drama? This should be a good read right in front of my pancit canton.
When I first started reading, I was immediately pulled into the story and wanted to know more about the mc. I love the way the author carries the other characters along easily and makes them likable and lovable. This is certainly a good read.
I read first few chapters and I already like it. The story and characters are both very interesting. I am looking forward to read more chapters. 😊
Just getting a glance of your title makes me curious to know more about the plot. Good imagination and felt quite peaceful reading it. Thank you for such an amazing work. Keep it up. Brst of luck.
There's no way around loving a relatable character, and besides the writing technique is obviously masterful. Every event description feels like I'm living through it, from day-to-day activities to extreme fight scenes, I have gotta say I love it all.
What is admirable is the planned structure for the delivery of the novel in only three volumes, it gives us: 20 chapters per volume. And the synopsis to unite two opposite characters: the worst with the best. The intervention of the teacher stands out, who assumes this challenge for the benefit of the class. Readers enjoy the pleasant way of writing. successes!
Hello everyone! Another announcement from Senpai himself, hehhehe. Once again, I just want to thank everyone for completing this novel, and thank you for a million views >///< Also, I just wanna say, that the officially last chapter of this novel is coming out soon! I apologize for not publishing it sooner. After all, the side story function just got activated yesterday for my novel. So please look forward to it! It's bound to happen within the week! Have a great read >///<
This is awsome! The intro, the middle and especially the end were all spectacular! It's clear that a lot of thought has been put into this novel, and I enyojed reading this very much.
This is definitely a keeper. Had me crying out of happiness, sadness and even anger.
I really loved this book from beginning to end, it left a good taste and I'm glad I didn't over look it
What a good book. Although some characters are poorly designed, everything else is perfecct!
Dear readers, DaisukiDayoSenpai here! So I've finished this novel for quite some time now, and I just noticed that I actually got a contract for this novel. I don't know how, but I remembered applying for a contract back when this novel was halfway done. And now that It was already complete, that's when I got the contract hahhaha, There were a couple of things that I'd change in this novel but I really liked the ending. I might publish a side story soon, but I don't know how I'd fit everything in one chapter. Once again, I would like to thank all of you for supporting me until the end. This is my very first romcom and I'm glad that it's got so many positive reviews and comments. I'll strive to become a better writer so I could write more novels like this one. And this may probably be my last announcement via the review section, so I'd just like to mention that I might lock a couple of chapters, just so I could finally go premium. It won't be too much though, since I quite enjoy this novel as free. That's it for my announcement, this is DaisukiDayoSenpai signing off >///<
All I can say is that I'm loving this story so much. The giving of emotions and the twist and turns, how I could actually relate to it is amazing. Hands up to you authornim 🙌 [img=recommend]
I really liked this novel. It was a very nice break from the usual stuff I read.
A new idea, and a fresh start, this novel was one that I read in my breaks and find myself feeling refreshed, I am stacking up these chapters...
Is it me or is there a great lack of comments on chapters? Were these paid chapters or something? Anyways, I love this book a lot, though I haven’t completed it. Kudos to you, author! I must say, however, the flashbacks made sense, but the way you described it does make it feel a bit repetitive. A minor inconvenience nevertheless!
The book was well written, and the story was well relayed! Thanks a lot for this masterpiece.
I found this novel by accident, found the synopsis interesting, and decided to read it. My overall preference in novels is usually fantasy works, but I somehow wanted to give this a shot and I am glad I did. This novel had me feeling all sorts of emotions. I was sad, angry, amused and o much more. The difficulties and pain Hajime experienced pushed me to tears at times. There are so many themes in this novel that I think many of us will find relatable. I hope you give this a shot and maybe gain some encouragement for yourself to keep fighting; that just like Hajime, it's not over till it's over, and after the cold of winter, spring will always come. Thank you for an amazing story, author.
Loving the story and the characters, i cant seem to put it down for a moment. I do have only 1 small critique if i may, the words him, her, himself, herself tend to get switched around quite often ive noticed which causes my brain to stop for a moment and reread the sentence. For example in ch68 very first paragraph last sentence. Aside from that its very well written and thought put and i just cant stop
This has introduced a new world to me. Normally, I read novels geared toward magic. I saw this and said well let me try. First of all, this is a story a lot of people will relate to. It's realistic in the sense of experience. The Mc is portrayed well. His character is just wonderful. To explain it well, I'll use some anime reference. Imagine the mc from toradora where he isn't exactly a delinquent but is seen as one. But in this novel rather than the mc being seen as one just because of his looks, it's more of his situation. The way the story progresses casually and the character get to know each other is sweet. also this novel is sad to a good extent. I won't give any more review that would spoil the whole book. But give it a try and it might just be the next genre you will like to read.
Spoiler de révélation early chapter is pretty monotonous but still fun however it gradually fill with plot and all.the romcom is medicore overall 7/10 . Obviously it gradually be better
I rarely give a review to novels I'd read, but this work is so good. It's refreshing to read a story without inconsistent logic or plot. My only concern is the loan shark group, I have a hunch that it will be the 'hole' in the plot. The reason is that the 'logic' here is somewhat bend as a protection for the MC. With them targeting the MC, how come they don't ransack his house, sell his property, or even his body. That's the rational thing to do instead of just wasting time on him asking for money for a year. The novel is good. If the above-mentioned thing does not become a plot hole, I'm considering to support this novel, wholeheartedly. For the meanwhile I continue appreciating this work, best of luck author. Thanks for your hardwork!
I liked the plot very much. The story is surely captivating. Also, the characters are interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I am looking forward to read more chapters.
Really? Right in front of my pancit canton? I've been following the author's works for quite some time now and I can say that this is his most interesting novel yet. I've known him to write science fiction all the time but now he's diving into romcom drama? This should be a good read right in front of my pancit canton.
When I first started reading, I was immediately pulled into the story and wanted to know more about the mc. I love the way the author carries the other characters along easily and makes them likable and lovable. This is certainly a good read.
I read first few chapters and I already like it. The story and characters are both very interesting. I am looking forward to read more chapters. 😊
Just getting a glance of your title makes me curious to know more about the plot. Good imagination and felt quite peaceful reading it. Thank you for such an amazing work. Keep it up. Brst of luck.
There's no way around loving a relatable character, and besides the writing technique is obviously masterful. Every event description feels like I'm living through it, from day-to-day activities to extreme fight scenes, I have gotta say I love it all.
I love this book so much. I can’t wait for more really good chapters.