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Hello guys this is my first novel. Well, even though not much I hope you like it.
This is a story about a young man. Who suddenly reborn in another world familiar yet unfamiliar to him. His name is Van, 19 years old, the teenager in his college. Welcome to the world of the dungeon.
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really fast paced with very little detail on whats going on more like a pokemon waifu story with minimal interaction lots of time skip and status sheet spam fighting has little to no detail visited worlds are rushed and mainly last 2 to 3 chapters to catch the waifu b4 moving on...all together a novel idea but poorly executed from a story standpoint but if ur itno pokemon waifu collection yay for u
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The translation was very one of the best ones and the stability and the design were also really good, however in my opinion there are too many times kids but other than that, it's pretty good. P.S Don't drop it
I can't understand why stories like this have such great ratings. The spelling and grammar are so atrocious, that I actually got a headache from trying to read this mess...
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Very nice 💯 👍i love this novel ..... i love this novel ..... i love this novel ..... i love this novel ..... i love this novel ..... i love this novel .....
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first of all the story is great and interesting but there are so many typos. and where can I read the next chapter? where's the raw?
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idk fam like first ch and I kinda got lost.i have to search up names just to understand the story.if want to write a original novel write.but if it's it's fanfic than it suppose to be a fanfic.i don't like I foogle some names it don't come up like.that is what I said Idk.the whole thing I whole is just good.is not great not the best.is just good.could have been better.and keep on with just saying and do some reachearch of the thing u wanna fanfic don't keep putting things in it when there aren't in in it.and your writing needs a little bit of work.but keep on going.and second I ain't good at writing a story and I know how hard it is.so get it.and I'm not like being a Karen I'm just saying how I felt reading it.
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Super duper legal mesmo continua a si😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Takes you 40 chapters to start? Almost made me drop fr don’t do that fam. Other then that not bad, 8/10 .…………………………………….
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Interesting story, please don't drop this story. I hope this story can be finished. Translation Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Overall Rate 5.0