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Why's this masterpiece stopped??? Author don't do me like that😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
I am looking forward to new chapters... hopefully the author didn't drop this ... there rarely are any good lord of mysteries nowadays, ............
MC is 21 but acts like a 13 year old who hasn't seen a girl before. and Ms Justice (Audrey) is very different in this fanfic. there are also some issues such as 1. dark emperor card is a bookmark, you also need a password to turn normal bookmark into card of blasphemy 2. I can't believe Hall family would agree marriage with a family that's going down. (before MC took over body of that guy) I know this is a fanfic and I don't expect it to be one the level novel. but at least keep characters as they are...
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Muy buena historia e interesante de da un tocó entretenimiento al libro, además ya espero ver cómo desarrollas la relación a Audrey hasta ahora han Sido muy buenas sus interacciones, lastima que se actualice tan poco
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Great story. Great interactions between the characters. great writing quality. Overall I highly recommend this if you like Lotm, …….. ……… ………………
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Not a fan of the cheat. The cheat takes away most of his opportunities to use his beyonder powers to have a creative and cool fight like we see in Cannon, but this is only based on what's happened so far. His cheat gives him power at the level of an outer god(?) for a certain amount of time per day when used. So far he's taken over the body of a nobleman, and has close ties (probably romance) with Audrey. Which is a nice surprised considering the half a dozen other LOTM fanfictions with literally 0 romance in it. His current stance is to do things behind the scenes while building up an organization of some sort. Thanks for the novel, there's not a lot of decent LOTM FF that's not MTL
Was looking for a Lord Of The Mysteries fan-fiction. Thanx a lot author. Made my day. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Honestly, at first I didn't like the mc's golden finger, very op, but after a few chapters I really liked the idea. The world has nothing to say, it is the world of the Lord of Mysteries. As for writing, I have nothing to say, I'm not very strict about it, as long as it's legit enough to read. The strong point of this fanfic is the romance, the mc and the female protagonist are quite adequate in my humble opinion. The two together are something quite interesting to read. What makes me sad is the lack of chapters... sometimes I want to kidnap the author and leave him in a basement just to write more. All in all, it's an excellent fanfic and fun to read.
Excellent fanfic of the lord of mysteries has a fairly good level of writing and a plot with great potential [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
one of true history of lord of mysteries thanks of is. ...................................................................................................
I think the golden fingers are too strong, but I know that this novel needs a safety device. I hope that it is not too abused. The Black Emperor is my favorite pathway. keep my finger's crossed
I was really missing fanfic about the Lord of ministries, good work I hope it continues like this congratulations MORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chapters
for an author trying to stand out in a font so insignificant.................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why's this masterpiece stopped??? Author don't do me like that😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
I am looking forward to new chapters... hopefully the author didn't drop this ... there rarely are any good lord of mysteries nowadays, ............
MC is 21 but acts like a 13 year old who hasn't seen a girl before. and Ms Justice (Audrey) is very different in this fanfic. there are also some issues such as 1. dark emperor card is a bookmark, you also need a password to turn normal bookmark into card of blasphemy 2. I can't believe Hall family would agree marriage with a family that's going down. (before MC took over body of that guy) I know this is a fanfic and I don't expect it to be one the level novel. but at least keep characters as they are...
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Muy buena historia e interesante de da un tocó entretenimiento al libro, además ya espero ver cómo desarrollas la relación a Audrey hasta ahora han Sido muy buenas sus interacciones, lastima que se actualice tan poco
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Great story. Great interactions between the characters. great writing quality. Overall I highly recommend this if you like Lotm, …….. ……… ………………
NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!! NICE!!!
Not a fan of the cheat. The cheat takes away most of his opportunities to use his beyonder powers to have a creative and cool fight like we see in Cannon, but this is only based on what's happened so far. His cheat gives him power at the level of an outer god(?) for a certain amount of time per day when used. So far he's taken over the body of a nobleman, and has close ties (probably romance) with Audrey. Which is a nice surprised considering the half a dozen other LOTM fanfictions with literally 0 romance in it. His current stance is to do things behind the scenes while building up an organization of some sort. Thanks for the novel, there's not a lot of decent LOTM FF that's not MTL
Was looking for a Lord Of The Mysteries fan-fiction. Thanx a lot author. Made my day. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Honestly, at first I didn't like the mc's golden finger, very op, but after a few chapters I really liked the idea. The world has nothing to say, it is the world of the Lord of Mysteries. As for writing, I have nothing to say, I'm not very strict about it, as long as it's legit enough to read. The strong point of this fanfic is the romance, the mc and the female protagonist are quite adequate in my humble opinion. The two together are something quite interesting to read. What makes me sad is the lack of chapters... sometimes I want to kidnap the author and leave him in a basement just to write more. All in all, it's an excellent fanfic and fun to read.
Excellent fanfic of the lord of mysteries has a fairly good level of writing and a plot with great potential [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
one of true history of lord of mysteries thanks of is. ...................................................................................................
I think the golden fingers are too strong, but I know that this novel needs a safety device. I hope that it is not too abused. The Black Emperor is my favorite pathway. keep my finger's crossed
I was really missing fanfic about the Lord of ministries, good work I hope it continues like this congratulations MORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chaptersMORE chapters
for an author trying to stand out in a font so insignificant.................................................................................................................................................................................................