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So much for the stupid training the stupid Mc got From the stupid Garp! This stupid Mc is soooo stupid that he gets everything he wants until he left Marineford for water 7 and loses his money to Franks’s family even though he has obs and arm haki! This stupid ff is a waste of time!
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The mc is a narcissistic person who tru start promblem with everyone for no reason and get for people fight him for it. The mc to aggront for no reason
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So much for the stupid training the stupid Mc got From the stupid Garp! This stupid Mc is soooo stupid that he gets everything he wants until he left Marineford for water 7 and loses his money to Franks’s family even though he has obs and arm haki! This stupid ff is a waste of time!
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The mc is a narcissistic person who tru start promblem with everyone for no reason and get for people fight him for it. The mc to aggront for no reason