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I have to say it's one of the best books I've ever read, just couldn't put it down the english may not be perfect but with such an amazing book I didin't care. I love your imagination, keep it up dear Author!
This is a great story with a tentative moral of being a good person and what that actually means. There is also the belief of true love and finding your soulmate. I enjoyed it as a light read and sweet simple story. The feedback I have for is that the last 50 chapters got pretty rushed grammatically, some sudden character appearance without explanation and while nice ending not fully satisfying. We are never really introduced to the world I get a feeling it’s about India loosely from the names, but that’s it. It’s glossed over which is fine, this would though draw in the audience. The complication is slightly repetitive but does not a big deal as it’s a short story. I do feel cheated as there was suppose to be let’s say x amount of worlds and we only get 60% of the worlds while the outcome is justified I still feel cheated. I don’t feel that the story takes full advantage of the ML growing skill set. We also do get to see them really in action. Some serious face slapping situations would of been fun. The ideas were great and felt original or presented in an original way I’d say. I feel with some more world building, fuller characters development and challenges we could of easily had another 100 chapters without changing anything. Having said that I really enjoyed it. It unfortunately felt at the end a summary than an chapter. I wanted to give a lower score for the miss opportunities but the actual story deserves a 4+. Happy reading highly recommended.
I’m the type of reader that love the easy lovey dovey reading. This is just my type 😊
a must read, the story is really good, there is a slight scope to improve the grammar here and there but overall it is a blockbuster.
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Nice book it is mainly for those who want to read a story without the usual cliches of step mom , sister it neither has getting oP in minutes ..... however be warned there are a lot of grammar mistakes sometimes there is no problem others u need to have auto correct in ur brain. Also another negative point the story is not really phased out meaning umm it is not detailed much...like she came she did this , she lived she transmigated so if u like details not the book for u. Overall for me it was a wholesome book. Side note: I am also Indian so the food made me like more than usual the home cooked mom food. so thank u author for this wonderful book.
if anyone get this by chance and not giving it a try thay are missing a gem .a beautiful transmigration story .where there is no super cliche drama .
this book is really good .this transmigration is really good because she have to save future villian in there baby age and babies are always cute .so there is going to be to many babies and too much fun .🤍❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤
I have to say it's one of the best books I've ever read, just couldn't put it down the english may not be perfect but with such an amazing book I didin't care. I love your imagination, keep it up dear Author!
This is a great story with a tentative moral of being a good person and what that actually means. There is also the belief of true love and finding your soulmate. I enjoyed it as a light read and sweet simple story. The feedback I have for is that the last 50 chapters got pretty rushed grammatically, some sudden character appearance without explanation and while nice ending not fully satisfying. We are never really introduced to the world I get a feeling it’s about India loosely from the names, but that’s it. It’s glossed over which is fine, this would though draw in the audience. The complication is slightly repetitive but does not a big deal as it’s a short story. I do feel cheated as there was suppose to be let’s say x amount of worlds and we only get 60% of the worlds while the outcome is justified I still feel cheated. I don’t feel that the story takes full advantage of the ML growing skill set. We also do get to see them really in action. Some serious face slapping situations would of been fun. The ideas were great and felt original or presented in an original way I’d say. I feel with some more world building, fuller characters development and challenges we could of easily had another 100 chapters without changing anything. Having said that I really enjoyed it. It unfortunately felt at the end a summary than an chapter. I wanted to give a lower score for the miss opportunities but the actual story deserves a 4+. Happy reading highly recommended.
I’m the type of reader that love the easy lovey dovey reading. This is just my type 😊
a must read, the story is really good, there is a slight scope to improve the grammar here and there but overall it is a blockbuster.
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Nice book it is mainly for those who want to read a story without the usual cliches of step mom , sister it neither has getting oP in minutes ..... however be warned there are a lot of grammar mistakes sometimes there is no problem others u need to have auto correct in ur brain. Also another negative point the story is not really phased out meaning umm it is not detailed much...like she came she did this , she lived she transmigated so if u like details not the book for u. Overall for me it was a wholesome book. Side note: I am also Indian so the food made me like more than usual the home cooked mom food. so thank u author for this wonderful book.
if anyone get this by chance and not giving it a try thay are missing a gem .a beautiful transmigration story .where there is no super cliche drama .
this book is really good .this transmigration is really good because she have to save future villian in there baby age and babies are always cute .so there is going to be to many babies and too much fun .🤍❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤
The grammar was so bad I couldn't read most of it.