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This has potential. Always curious to see what the MC would introduce to the world next. Really hope this novel would get chosen. (Anyone know where I can find the raws?)
Anyone found the raw? 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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This novel is just so incredibly boring. The MC just sits in his little factory and talks about smartphones. That's all he's done for the ENTIRE novel. Tell me about the magic, tell me about the setting, tell me about the MC, just STOP TALKING ABOUT SMARTPHONES 24/7!
it just trash ,so many times u would feel why f is this happening or something not happening illogically .
The main character is all shaft and no balls. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter through through the system. He lets his subordinates Do whatever they want and never Even make them respect him. It's just constantly him getting something from the system, He hands it to them, They don't think it's real and test him, They realize it's real and then they just listen to everything he says.
A worse version of Bringing Culture into another world instead of this novel just pick up Bringing Culture into another world a gene seriously...
i wanted to finish the trial read before writing a review but I could not wait any longer, the idea is good, beinh the head of an organisation gives a special starting point, but It seems mc is just solving all the problems, the mc made a statement about being a programmer but no input of any thing programming related( mage programmer I mean) the device was not actually made by him, the organization feels like they are having some reduced intelligence. the planning and marketing there is just skimmed over, it made mention of it being a dangerous or not friendly world and espionage was not considered?., security was not pointed out. so it needs more development.
SCAM!!!! ...................................................................................................................................
Raw pls 🥺 (〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)
Don't be fooled by the synopsis.. It's a system that hands down everything to the MC. fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake
raw................................................................................................,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
this one actually pretty good, you guys need to read the novel first don't mind some of the bad review. Hopefully this one get picked.......
It's just bringing culture into another world just like 10 times worse. It'll be pretty sad if this gets translated and culture into another world never comes back.
So boring. They just jump into a boardroom meeting and the MC already has his cheat and is blasting other people for their lack of creativity. We have no context and no reason to root for the MC other than the fact that he has a "system"
I'm really looking forward for this, because the MC's going to invent a phone in an another world.😁 I hope this gets a comic after a few chapters released.
I've read some comments. People are crazy, worrying about a character destroying a culture by bringing ours to them. People this is just a story, FICTION! It's meant for entertainment, to get your imagination juices flowing, stop overanalyzing. Imagine this was real, poof, your in a different world. This world is not technologically developed like ours. You really want me to believe you wouldn't try and use knowledge from our world to make a place for yourself in this new world just to preserve their innocence?! Yeah, right, ok, uh-huh, I believe you, NOT! 😂
This has potential. Always curious to see what the MC would introduce to the world next. Really hope this novel would get chosen. (Anyone know where I can find the raws?)
Anyone found the raw? 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
nice one. xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
This novel is just so incredibly boring. The MC just sits in his little factory and talks about smartphones. That's all he's done for the ENTIRE novel. Tell me about the magic, tell me about the setting, tell me about the MC, just STOP TALKING ABOUT SMARTPHONES 24/7!
it just trash ,so many times u would feel why f is this happening or something not happening illogically .
The main character is all shaft and no balls. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter through through the system. He lets his subordinates Do whatever they want and never Even make them respect him. It's just constantly him getting something from the system, He hands it to them, They don't think it's real and test him, They realize it's real and then they just listen to everything he says.
A worse version of Bringing Culture into another world instead of this novel just pick up Bringing Culture into another world a gene seriously...
i wanted to finish the trial read before writing a review but I could not wait any longer, the idea is good, beinh the head of an organisation gives a special starting point, but It seems mc is just solving all the problems, the mc made a statement about being a programmer but no input of any thing programming related( mage programmer I mean) the device was not actually made by him, the organization feels like they are having some reduced intelligence. the planning and marketing there is just skimmed over, it made mention of it being a dangerous or not friendly world and espionage was not considered?., security was not pointed out. so it needs more development.
SCAM!!!! ...................................................................................................................................
Raw pls 🥺 (〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)
Don't be fooled by the synopsis.. It's a system that hands down everything to the MC. fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake fake
raw................................................................................................,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
this one actually pretty good, you guys need to read the novel first don't mind some of the bad review. Hopefully this one get picked.......
It's just bringing culture into another world just like 10 times worse. It'll be pretty sad if this gets translated and culture into another world never comes back.
So boring. They just jump into a boardroom meeting and the MC already has his cheat and is blasting other people for their lack of creativity. We have no context and no reason to root for the MC other than the fact that he has a "system"
I'm really looking forward for this, because the MC's going to invent a phone in an another world.😁 I hope this gets a comic after a few chapters released.
I've read some comments. People are crazy, worrying about a character destroying a culture by bringing ours to them. People this is just a story, FICTION! It's meant for entertainment, to get your imagination juices flowing, stop overanalyzing. Imagine this was real, poof, your in a different world. This world is not technologically developed like ours. You really want me to believe you wouldn't try and use knowledge from our world to make a place for yourself in this new world just to preserve their innocence?! Yeah, right, ok, uh-huh, I believe you, NOT! 😂