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You need some rearrangement. Put the first vol in the auxiliary section and start the prologue from vol 1. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Ok, I think there are some important things to mention... Basically, everything is a combination of structure and new concepts about the world in which everything takes place, and that you have to understand to enjoy the story more, although it is still possible learn them as the plot progresses. You should give it a try and give your opinion if these types of stories are to your liking.
Shameless Review! Got the World built... that was fun! Have a semi-plotted storyline in my head. No preplaned chapters. They just spew out my head like a Water fountain. I really hope you'll enjoy stepping into the sea of stars I've created. (I also really suck at math so don't expect any of that sci-fi number accuracy stuff lol)
You need some rearrangement. Put the first vol in the auxiliary section and start the prologue from vol 1. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Ok, I think there are some important things to mention... Basically, everything is a combination of structure and new concepts about the world in which everything takes place, and that you have to understand to enjoy the story more, although it is still possible learn them as the plot progresses. You should give it a try and give your opinion if these types of stories are to your liking.
Shameless Review! Got the World built... that was fun! Have a semi-plotted storyline in my head. No preplaned chapters. They just spew out my head like a Water fountain. I really hope you'll enjoy stepping into the sea of stars I've created. (I also really suck at math so don't expect any of that sci-fi number accuracy stuff lol)