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Faced with two loves and choosing the best one can put a woman in a dilemma. Like Luna had to choose between a past love and a new love. But love never wrong.
ONE WORD FOR THIS STORY ROMANTIC ACTION.. FULL OF LOVE AND SACRIFICE.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Memorable story and I really like it. The character of the role is very strong and the language is easy to understand. Especially in the mastery of the soul is very touching.😍😍😍
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It is very challenging to read a story that has a very strong character. Two complicated choices to get love in the past. Just excited for Alvaro as the main character.
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Past love is full of memories... Just a shadow... That's what I saw from this story... Alvaro's love is full of sacrifices... I hope the story gets more interesting...
The language of the story is very simple, but I'm trying to understand. The story and plot are interesting, not boring and touching. thanks Author
Woaahh... good! good! The story is interesting and full of action. Two very strong characters, between Luna and Alvaro there is still love [img=update]
A new story that I think is very tense and full of secrets. Hopefully the next chapter will be better and meet my expectations. I'm waiting for the next chapter....
Hei... Happy reading... This time I have a story about a police officer who will uncover the death of his lover and openly fight a mafia he has been after for a long time. Will he be able to catch the mafia? And what if the lover from his past returns when he feels lonely? You can find out by reading this story....
HIDDEN LOVE IS SAD [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation Faced with two loves and choosing the best one can put a woman in a dilemma. Like Luna had to choose between a past love and a new love. But love never wrong.
ONE WORD FOR THIS STORY ROMANTIC ACTION.. FULL OF LOVE AND SACRIFICE.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Memorable story and I really like it. The character of the role is very strong and the language is easy to understand. Especially in the mastery of the soul is very touching.😍😍😍
Spoiler de révélation Waiting for the update author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is very challenging to read a story that has a very strong character. Two complicated choices to get love in the past. Just excited for Alvaro as the main character.
Spoiler de révélation Past love is full of memories... Just a shadow... That's what I saw from this story... Alvaro's love is full of sacrifices... I hope the story gets more interesting...
The language of the story is very simple, but I'm trying to understand. The story and plot are interesting, not boring and touching. thanks Author
Woaahh... good! good! The story is interesting and full of action. Two very strong characters, between Luna and Alvaro there is still love [img=update]
A new story that I think is very tense and full of secrets. Hopefully the next chapter will be better and meet my expectations. I'm waiting for the next chapter....
Hei... Happy reading... This time I have a story about a police officer who will uncover the death of his lover and openly fight a mafia he has been after for a long time. Will he be able to catch the mafia? And what if the lover from his past returns when he feels lonely? You can find out by reading this story....
HIDDEN LOVE IS SAD [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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