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While the relationship between him and his sister/cousin is sweet, almost everyone else emotionally abuses him. Be advised. I stopped reading once his aunt took advantage of him after a massage. In any event, the synopsis needs to be updated and more tags added.
Marvelous story telling and writing.. Hope you can write more chapters and maintain the writing and story quality [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is captivating the the chapters always better than the last. [img=update] coz I got caught up in one night [img=faceslap] hit me one more time
the best ever[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pleasantly surprised. Went into this with no expectations but enjoyed volume one. Hope this continues and curious to see where the author takes Ed.
A must-read, worth every page turned.💯 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Great... Great... Great... Great... Great... 💖💖💖💖💖💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💖💖💖💗💓💓💖💓💖💘💘💝💓💘💗💌💓💌💓💓I love this book... 💖💖💗💝💗💗💗💓💓
the author has described the scenes in very detailed manner ...💗which is really appreciated.😘 writing quality & story development is outstanding 🥳🥰
A sweet, charming and a little innocent story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
MY GOD!!!!!! How come there is such an incredible story so nobody told me ???? ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love reading novels and comics alike please update more chapters often
Love reading and writing wish to read more satisfying stories in the future and more updates everyday 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
Didn't expect this when I read the title. Great job on the book so far though. I think this book will grow a lot the more you publish chapters. 100% loved it!
What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I like it!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
While the relationship between him and his sister/cousin is sweet, almost everyone else emotionally abuses him. Be advised. I stopped reading once his aunt took advantage of him after a massage. In any event, the synopsis needs to be updated and more tags added.
Marvelous story telling and writing.. Hope you can write more chapters and maintain the writing and story quality [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is captivating the the chapters always better than the last. [img=update] coz I got caught up in one night [img=faceslap] hit me one more time
the best ever[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pleasantly surprised. Went into this with no expectations but enjoyed volume one. Hope this continues and curious to see where the author takes Ed.
A must-read, worth every page turned.💯 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Great... Great... Great... Great... Great... 💖💖💖💖💖💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💖💖💖💗💓💓💖💓💖💘💘💝💓💘💗💌💓💌💓💓I love this book... 💖💖💗💝💗💗💗💓💓
the author has described the scenes in very detailed manner ...💗which is really appreciated.😘 writing quality & story development is outstanding 🥳🥰
A sweet, charming and a little innocent story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
MY GOD!!!!!! How come there is such an incredible story so nobody told me ???? ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love reading novels and comics alike please update more chapters often
Love reading and writing wish to read more satisfying stories in the future and more updates everyday 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
Didn't expect this when I read the title. Great job on the book so far though. I think this book will grow a lot the more you publish chapters. 100% loved it!
What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I like it!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love this story and hope that it will come back.