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Selena Marie Cabello's father has a hidden identity. Apart from being the best father to Selena, He is one of the most powerful Mafia families in the city. What happens when Selena finds her father's secret and witnesses his dark side? As the only daughter, Will she follow in her father's footsteps, or will she chooses a life of her own?
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Worth the read..this kind of novel is just my taste and gonna add it to my shelf. I urge the writer to post the chapter soon. can't wait...found this type of level after a long time.
To Author: Okay, I'm not that much interested in a normal romance. But I can say with guarantee that your novel or I could say both the novels have the potential to reach rankings. So keep it up, Author, you just need good stability of updates and a little bit of patience. To Readers: This novel is filled with romance and wholesome. Even though it is at its early stages, one can say with sure that the author has given life to the character. With a little bit more background description, it is a gem hidden inside webnovel. (Fun fact: I'm hooked on this book and waiting for the next chapter)
Okay, I'm not going to lie, I quite enjoyed this story. I love Jason's character to be precise, he's so funny 😅😅😅😅, Really need more updates from the author🙏, the story got me hooked😩.
The beginning of the story got me hooked, cant lie about the author’s writing skills, its worth the read, i highly recommend it.🌺❤️..love our fl and ml
welp. This one book that would i not let off to miss on my free time. The way it depict is nice and drawn you to it. The writing quality is really what you could expected from our author here. I won't say much, afraid to spoil it out on this great novel. Just. this is recomended.
Grammar mistakes are too numerous to count but once the writer fixes it you'll have a dynamite read on your hands. Just want to point out that the writer does a good job of creating a romantic mood and setting. The words sizzle off the page with the intense chemistry between the partners. Throw in a little mystery & danger, to keep us turning those pages. What's not to like about this novel, don't wait, give it a try today!
Upon reading the novel, I'll drop by an honest review of what I notice in the author's execution and writing. First, the synopsis isn't really catchy. Yes, some authors tend to place questions to pique the interest of the readers at first read, but remember, synopsis is the THIRD thing readers will see. First is the cover, and second is the title. If those three correlates with each other, then you'll be able to attract the readers on your first chapter. Second, the first chapter is too quick. Make sure you have spaces in between the words. Don't crowd them in one paragraph. Make sure to take down unnecessary linking words, such as was, were, is and are. To make your writing smooth, you need to reduce those words to limit. The punctuation is an issue here, too. E.g. "Thanks," said Ashton. [Make sure you place comma before the end quotation mark] Third, the chapters felt really long but short on the site because there are so many linking words that rubbed off the sense of a sentence. When writing, make sure to reduce all kinds of link. Redundancy, mostly, is the result of this. Also, make sure to be consistent upon showing than telling. Describe the actions, not telling the actions. Fourth, maybe one of the few common reminders in Webnovel, changing the title. The first thing that comes to mind of the readers whenever they read the title was... "How interesting it is and compelling than other works?" Make sure you're not vague. I'm not saying the title isn't that catchy, but let me tell you this: the market of Webnovel isn't going to grow with the indefinite titles. You have to make sure to expound and in a few words, explain what the story is about. I hope this review will help you! Best of luck on future endeavors!
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Awesome characters, great storyline, this book is sure to keep you wanting more, I'm not done with the book but from where I've read I can say this book is absolutely worth the time
An honest review. The premise is good. I am curious about the fire that happened. The author has done a great job with this story and this is sure to be a page turner. The only issue I see is with the pacing and some grammar here and there. Apart from that, a good one all in all!
I really enjoyed reading this book and looking forward to more. I like Jason and can say it's worthwhile to read the book. The story development and character development is good. As per writing, the writer did a very good job and keep up the good work author
Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life. The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter. Good job and keep up the good work.
I usually stay away from first person narrative but this one hooked me up. Curse you author, why didn't you release more chapters? You made me fall in love with Selena and all the other side characters within a few chapters. Enough of my tantrum, guys and gals, if you love reading something awesome with romance and intrigue, you have to check this out. And make this novel a famous one because it deserves it.... love love love author
I love the sassyness between the two main characters. They fight like Tome and Jerry. I am very curious to how this story will unfold. I will be waiting for new chapters! Keep on writing author!
This is a really nice romance novel! The plot is very good! The only thing that the author should work on is his/her writing skills. Overall, this was a very enjoyable read. I urge everyone interested in the romance genre, to read this book!
A good start to the story, it is quite early in the story to be giving a a full review but I will say from the first 4 chapters It's pretty good! I'm quite invested in what will happen next and I can't wait to see what the author does in the future chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This review is in the book's early stages but after reading this book,I have no doubt that it's going to be massive. pure awesomeness. the characters are well thought of and world background is just superb. this book is definitely a hit in progress.
Amazing story this is a work of art and honestly I’m obsessed like literally obsessed❤️❤️❤️ this is a hundred from me[img=recommend][img=recommend] Umm ray it’s been quite long I was searching for your previous novels but they were all gone……..🥺🥺🥺I hope you remember me though ❤️
The startup is very very good. I got so curious and wondered who Jason might be and if Selena is truly dead. Am really hooked right now author💗💗💗
Excellent writing. Rich in nuances of language. At 6 chapters per month. That's 1.5 chapters per week. Likes the appropriation of the environment. From a family setting to a shared room. With common spaces: with interventions typical of two great friends. One is passionate, jovial, helpful, while long-suffering, amorous, playful. The other is serious. Scheduled. Deliberate bias in your shared space. Simulate good coexistence. Respect for women.
Volume 1
- 1 Prologue 2 years ago
- 2 6 Years Later 2 years ago
- 3 The bad dream 2 years ago
- 4 Jerk 2 years ago
- 5 Ridiculous 2 years ago
- 6 Making Friends 2 years ago
- 7 Eavesdropping 2 years ago
- 8 Lunch! 2 years ago
- 9 First Kiss 2 years ago
- 10 Please don't go! 2 years ago
- 11 First day of college 2 years ago
- 12 Drunken, Jason Again! 2 years ago
- 13 The Apology 2 years ago
- 14 Can't Get You Out Of My Mind 2 years ago
- 15 He's Gone 2 years ago
- 16 The pick up 2 years ago
- 17 Sex 2 years ago
- 18 Be My Girlfriend 2 years ago
Writing Quality: The writing is good paragpraphing wise and punctuation. Story Development: The pacing seems a bit fast but sometimes that can hold onto the readers attention more and helps with progression. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out especially Jason and they don't feel bland. Although some more background is needed to say for sure and we will probably get that later. World Background: I will say the background description and the way you portray the atmosphere can be detrimental to the story so maybe some more detail would be appreciated. Overall the story feels very interesting and draws me in even though this is not particularly my cup of tea. Enjoy this great read!💙