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I remember reading this before. Brings back good memories, I'm going to reread it. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
it says completed but the last chap doesnt look like a final chap name, dropped?
Author's been bugging me for quite some time now for a review so here goes. It's good. There's action, there's haŕem and there's weird powers. Some stuff are quite basic and some scenes are dramatic for no reason. But overall, not bad. In fact, dare I say it's good. Ya Happy now, Yet?
Writing Quality: Good Stability of Updates: Ongoing Story Development: Average Character Design: Bad World Background: Good iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
well i have been reading it for some time but Gradually begin to loose interest , i don't know the exact reason just that the story has become a little less engaging , maybe you can try to polish the revenge element more , try some more lemons or just some better character development
It's a fresh start! The wait was worth it!! Thank you author for listening to reviews and starting from the scratch. It's always hard to rewrite anything with new ideas but you mad lad did. This time the character looks like having some essence, a desire for revenge, to fulfill his dreams. Doesn't looks like a Beta mc, has a cat as per, is on the dark side and we got lemons hehe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), what's more than that you want?? Yes it's only been 7 chaps but that enough has made a statement that we could expect more from the author.
Just based on the fact that author listened to us readers and re-wrote the whole thing from the get go (which was like 20-25 chps), is enough to give this a 5 star review. Author has experience in writing so you can dive right in, no problem. Also, maybe I'll do a proper review in the future when some more chapters gets released. Heads up & thank you, author.
Comenzar aver está novela me llamo el título autor dale más amor y mucho Sexo jjjajaja bueno comenzaré averla se ve interesante mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Hi. HOW's it hanging? Good? Good. Anyway, this'll be a bit different from the typical reincarnation H@rem stuff you'd read about. Why? Because the mc isn't a reincarnation nor an isekaed dude. He's actually- oh wait, that's a spoiler. Moving on, yes, this has 18 stuff and yes this has H@rem in it. However the plot is clearly focused on world domi- ahem- (Oh wait, the title already spoiled that... better pretend like I know nothing...) Feel free to ask me anything you wanna know.
Writing quality is quite good. The stability of updates is good too and just to make sure, I checked the profile of author and it seems they have written quite a lot previous to this novel so if you're a new reader, just know this is the real deal. The story has good pacing. It's not perfect (this is obviously dependant on each reader so others might think it has the best pacing this world has ever seen and some might think otherwise, I'm just giving my opinion). Characters are described well and are given roles so they do not feel one dimensional. The only con I would say is the world background which I would right now rate a 2-3 star BUT the author said they are editing the novel so I will choose to believe in them. So if possible author, just add more details to the background to give a more vivid atmosphere. That was the only complaint that I had but everything else was good and I would definitely recommend to others.
I remember reading this before. Brings back good memories, I'm going to reread it. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
it says completed but the last chap doesnt look like a final chap name, dropped?
Author's been bugging me for quite some time now for a review so here goes. It's good. There's action, there's haŕem and there's weird powers. Some stuff are quite basic and some scenes are dramatic for no reason. But overall, not bad. In fact, dare I say it's good. Ya Happy now, Yet?
Writing Quality: Good Stability of Updates: Ongoing Story Development: Average Character Design: Bad World Background: Good iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
well i have been reading it for some time but Gradually begin to loose interest , i don't know the exact reason just that the story has become a little less engaging , maybe you can try to polish the revenge element more , try some more lemons or just some better character development
It's a fresh start! The wait was worth it!! Thank you author for listening to reviews and starting from the scratch. It's always hard to rewrite anything with new ideas but you mad lad did. This time the character looks like having some essence, a desire for revenge, to fulfill his dreams. Doesn't looks like a Beta mc, has a cat as per, is on the dark side and we got lemons hehe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), what's more than that you want?? Yes it's only been 7 chaps but that enough has made a statement that we could expect more from the author.
Just based on the fact that author listened to us readers and re-wrote the whole thing from the get go (which was like 20-25 chps), is enough to give this a 5 star review. Author has experience in writing so you can dive right in, no problem. Also, maybe I'll do a proper review in the future when some more chapters gets released. Heads up & thank you, author.
Comenzar aver está novela me llamo el título autor dale más amor y mucho Sexo jjjajaja bueno comenzaré averla se ve interesante mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Hi. HOW's it hanging? Good? Good. Anyway, this'll be a bit different from the typical reincarnation H@rem stuff you'd read about. Why? Because the mc isn't a reincarnation nor an isekaed dude. He's actually- oh wait, that's a spoiler. Moving on, yes, this has 18 stuff and yes this has H@rem in it. However the plot is clearly focused on world domi- ahem- (Oh wait, the title already spoiled that... better pretend like I know nothing...) Feel free to ask me anything you wanna know.
Writing quality is quite good. The stability of updates is good too and just to make sure, I checked the profile of author and it seems they have written quite a lot previous to this novel so if you're a new reader, just know this is the real deal. The story has good pacing. It's not perfect (this is obviously dependant on each reader so others might think it has the best pacing this world has ever seen and some might think otherwise, I'm just giving my opinion). Characters are described well and are given roles so they do not feel one dimensional. The only con I would say is the world background which I would right now rate a 2-3 star BUT the author said they are editing the novel so I will choose to believe in them. So if possible author, just add more details to the background to give a more vivid atmosphere. That was the only complaint that I had but everything else was good and I would definitely recommend to others.
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