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This is the second work by this author that I have read, and I absolutely love it .Great characters, well written with lots of personality and development. They really feel alive.
good story overall, the only thing i don't like are the rush ending, such a cliffhanger.
A fine example of Space Opera, and dirty space at that. Well written with very few spelling and grammar issues. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next issue.
honestley it was a great story but I really hated the ending, but that might just be me though. i did really enjoyed this story and would recommend it but it has got to be one of the least satisfying endings that I have read.
I am not going to lie the novel was good for the first half but after the main empire the mc was a part of fail I thought the main character would either go into Galaxy Conquest or bring back the empire to become the new emperor but it feels like the main character became something like a merchant if anyone can respond and tell me how is the novel going
hey I absolutely love the story, but the ending, please let me know you're not gonna leave it at that. make a sequel or something come on. don't just have them do a time reset back to the beginning of the book!!! I need more info
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Read it through. Riveting battle sequences. Interesting characters. Plot gets different at a certain point but I enjoyed it. Then it gets violent again an enjoyed that I don’t like the ending. Thematically makes sense but would have liked it be more drawn out? Felt rushed.
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Best book i ever read, really. It should be printed. Story is amazing, battles are so well written that you can just see them with your imagination and loose yourself in plot. Conversation are natural and mc's are soo cool. I just can't emphasize how good it is, and you don't see many good written mecha, especially that good❤️
This book was epic the end was just a little rushed it felt like but still good
Amazing book. Where next book? It’s almost the end of September. 3 months left to release it before 2025 starts.
The book is well written with a good story line and well developed characters. The only minor issue is some of the characters names are swapped out by mistake sometimes.
This Author is amazing. The characters are wonderful and vivid. The organization of his writing and language is fantastic, you flow through chapter after chapter wanting to see where the story goes next.
Worth the read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
im at chapter 500 right now. and i have to say that the First 250 chapters are great. then the Story Takes a complete turn into Something Like a slow life Story. -the Charakters geht super OP, making every fight completely onesided. -the Fights get shorter and shorter, while (in my Option) boring Storyelements get longer and longer in short, this is sadly Not what the author promises in the description of this book and i feel Lied to. why Change a nice and wellworking Storyarc? at least dont generate false hopes and write a propper description! to my dismay i was so Happy about a good Story, that i bought Out the book when i was at CH 160 ..... will propably continue Reading this and might Change my review If anything Changes. what a c*cktease :(
The ending!!! Omg. I actually didn’t see that coming. I was waiting for loose threads to all be tied up. But NOPE. HOLY MOLY. I want part 2 asap!!!
Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System Another novel with a cheesy long title, but it’s a top ranker on Webnovel’s charts and others tales by Aoki Aku are also highly praised. After a lot of fantasy, I’m in for some science-fiction for a change, so why not ? The setting is not hard SF, more like a space opera, although more grounded than Star Wars. While it draws heavy inspirations from top SF universes (Warhammer 40K, Mass Effect or Alien/Predator, among others), it really feels unique and original. It also includes plenty of well-coordinated elements of strategy, politics, economy, diplomacy, social, technology … that give consistency to the whole and make it feel alive. It truly is one of the highlights of the book. The other is the characters, especially the two protagonists. Yes, because there are two, the power couple Keres Max and Nico Tarith, one can’t go without the other. One is a more classic hero down-to-earth with amazing tactical and psychological insights, the other is a battle-maniac with a gift for technology and massacre, both are intelligent, strong, funny and made for one another. The secondary characters are also well-made, not as detailed but good enough for the screentime they get. Of note are Nico’s mother Mary and the group of Envoy from the Alliance. The only downside is the final antagonist who, while understandably mysterious, doesn’t get enough attention. The power system is really well-thought. For one, it is not exclusive to the protagonists, in fact, this nanobots-based power is the trademark of the empire where they are born, they just have the highest level of compatibility possible with it. This system gives special powers specific to each person as they pass thresholds in their physical abilities while raising their physical peak to superhuman levels. Max tends to get, beside his initial mind-reading power, more combat-oriented abilities, whereas Nico gets more engineering/hacking perks. You could also consider the memories they get from their previous lives as part of their power, but since there are related to mostly unrecorded ancient times, they are a boon but not always relevant. The story is very good, with a fine progression of the stakes from the small and local (on a galactic scale) to the universe shaking, with a great variety of subjects, involving matter of war, politics, discovery, romance (amazingly told, that’s rare), a lot like Babylon 5, but more light-hearted. The problem here is the ending, which is rushed and a bit frustrating, although the author makes it clear this novel is only the first part of an epic tale. The writing is very good, the action gives sensations like fine anime mecha/power-armor combat scenes, the intrigue parts are also greatly described and the exchanges between the two MCs are a real treat. What prevents the writer from being qualitied as “excellent” are the various typos, grammar and homophones mistakes (few but a bit cringy for a tale that well-told) and the pacing, especially toward the last fifth of the novel. I understand that Aoki Aku intended to write a multiple parts story, and it relieved me to know this end is but a pause, but there should have been a better way to prepare the reader for this. Still, even with its bad sides, Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System is a very good SF novel, borderline excellent. Great characters (one of the best power couple of protagonists I’ve read about), fine system, excellent setting, a very good story served by a writing of equal level, my final verdict is a high 8 out 10 (and it could have been 9 with a better ending/transition to part 2). Aoki Aku deserves his spot as one of Webnovel’s best original author, I will be reading the next part of Max and Nico’s tale when it will be out and likely read another story by him in the meantime. Kergonan out
Eh bien que dire un roman féministe?, le MC n'en n'est pas un, les personnage secondaires n'ont aucune emotion ni caractère Les a avantage du sois disant MC n'en sont pas et la période à academique et inutile, grâce au nano heureusement sa passe vite Avantage ? Bonne question [img=faceslap]
I just finished the book, and it's been a curve ball of a story. but were part 2 of the book. I'm dying to read it.
This is one of the books I would give a standing Ovation 👏 for, from how to story developments to the plot to the character development and world building, it’s amazing
Ehrlich gesagt bin ich mir nicht sicher wie die aktualisierungsstabilität war da das Buch bereits abgeschlossen war als ich zu lesen begann
I really enjoyed this story. I wonder recommend it to anyone that likes science fiction.
Love the light novel. The author have done a well character development story. The involvement of other section of the galaxy. The mecha evolution also well done.
Disappointed with the ending, author seems to be abandoned it rather than finishing.
Outstanding work, great and lovable characters that are certainly unforgettable. The story, world and characters keep you entertained and coming back for more.
This is the second work by this author that I have read, and I absolutely love it .Great characters, well written with lots of personality and development. They really feel alive.
good story overall, the only thing i don't like are the rush ending, such a cliffhanger.
A fine example of Space Opera, and dirty space at that. Well written with very few spelling and grammar issues. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next issue.
honestley it was a great story but I really hated the ending, but that might just be me though. i did really enjoyed this story and would recommend it but it has got to be one of the least satisfying endings that I have read.
I am not going to lie the novel was good for the first half but after the main empire the mc was a part of fail I thought the main character would either go into Galaxy Conquest or bring back the empire to become the new emperor but it feels like the main character became something like a merchant if anyone can respond and tell me how is the novel going
hey I absolutely love the story, but the ending, please let me know you're not gonna leave it at that. make a sequel or something come on. don't just have them do a time reset back to the beginning of the book!!! I need more info
Spoiler de révélation Read it through. Riveting battle sequences. Interesting characters. Plot gets different at a certain point but I enjoyed it. Then it gets violent again an enjoyed that I don’t like the ending. Thematically makes sense but would have liked it be more drawn out? Felt rushed.
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Best book i ever read, really. It should be printed. Story is amazing, battles are so well written that you can just see them with your imagination and loose yourself in plot. Conversation are natural and mc's are soo cool. I just can't emphasize how good it is, and you don't see many good written mecha, especially that good❤️
This book was epic the end was just a little rushed it felt like but still good
Amazing book. Where next book? It’s almost the end of September. 3 months left to release it before 2025 starts.
The book is well written with a good story line and well developed characters. The only minor issue is some of the characters names are swapped out by mistake sometimes.
This Author is amazing. The characters are wonderful and vivid. The organization of his writing and language is fantastic, you flow through chapter after chapter wanting to see where the story goes next.
Worth the read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
im at chapter 500 right now. and i have to say that the First 250 chapters are great. then the Story Takes a complete turn into Something Like a slow life Story. -the Charakters geht super OP, making every fight completely onesided. -the Fights get shorter and shorter, while (in my Option) boring Storyelements get longer and longer in short, this is sadly Not what the author promises in the description of this book and i feel Lied to. why Change a nice and wellworking Storyarc? at least dont generate false hopes and write a propper description! to my dismay i was so Happy about a good Story, that i bought Out the book when i was at CH 160 ..... will propably continue Reading this and might Change my review If anything Changes. what a c*cktease :(
The ending!!! Omg. I actually didn’t see that coming. I was waiting for loose threads to all be tied up. But NOPE. HOLY MOLY. I want part 2 asap!!!
Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System Another novel with a cheesy long title, but it’s a top ranker on Webnovel’s charts and others tales by Aoki Aku are also highly praised. After a lot of fantasy, I’m in for some science-fiction for a change, so why not ? The setting is not hard SF, more like a space opera, although more grounded than Star Wars. While it draws heavy inspirations from top SF universes (Warhammer 40K, Mass Effect or Alien/Predator, among others), it really feels unique and original. It also includes plenty of well-coordinated elements of strategy, politics, economy, diplomacy, social, technology … that give consistency to the whole and make it feel alive. It truly is one of the highlights of the book. The other is the characters, especially the two protagonists. Yes, because there are two, the power couple Keres Max and Nico Tarith, one can’t go without the other. One is a more classic hero down-to-earth with amazing tactical and psychological insights, the other is a battle-maniac with a gift for technology and massacre, both are intelligent, strong, funny and made for one another. The secondary characters are also well-made, not as detailed but good enough for the screentime they get. Of note are Nico’s mother Mary and the group of Envoy from the Alliance. The only downside is the final antagonist who, while understandably mysterious, doesn’t get enough attention. The power system is really well-thought. For one, it is not exclusive to the protagonists, in fact, this nanobots-based power is the trademark of the empire where they are born, they just have the highest level of compatibility possible with it. This system gives special powers specific to each person as they pass thresholds in their physical abilities while raising their physical peak to superhuman levels. Max tends to get, beside his initial mind-reading power, more combat-oriented abilities, whereas Nico gets more engineering/hacking perks. You could also consider the memories they get from their previous lives as part of their power, but since there are related to mostly unrecorded ancient times, they are a boon but not always relevant. The story is very good, with a fine progression of the stakes from the small and local (on a galactic scale) to the universe shaking, with a great variety of subjects, involving matter of war, politics, discovery, romance (amazingly told, that’s rare), a lot like Babylon 5, but more light-hearted. The problem here is the ending, which is rushed and a bit frustrating, although the author makes it clear this novel is only the first part of an epic tale. The writing is very good, the action gives sensations like fine anime mecha/power-armor combat scenes, the intrigue parts are also greatly described and the exchanges between the two MCs are a real treat. What prevents the writer from being qualitied as “excellent” are the various typos, grammar and homophones mistakes (few but a bit cringy for a tale that well-told) and the pacing, especially toward the last fifth of the novel. I understand that Aoki Aku intended to write a multiple parts story, and it relieved me to know this end is but a pause, but there should have been a better way to prepare the reader for this. Still, even with its bad sides, Humanity’s Greatest Mecha Warrior System is a very good SF novel, borderline excellent. Great characters (one of the best power couple of protagonists I’ve read about), fine system, excellent setting, a very good story served by a writing of equal level, my final verdict is a high 8 out 10 (and it could have been 9 with a better ending/transition to part 2). Aoki Aku deserves his spot as one of Webnovel’s best original author, I will be reading the next part of Max and Nico’s tale when it will be out and likely read another story by him in the meantime. Kergonan out
Eh bien que dire un roman féministe?, le MC n'en n'est pas un, les personnage secondaires n'ont aucune emotion ni caractère Les a avantage du sois disant MC n'en sont pas et la période à academique et inutile, grâce au nano heureusement sa passe vite Avantage ? Bonne question [img=faceslap]
I just finished the book, and it's been a curve ball of a story. but were part 2 of the book. I'm dying to read it.
This is one of the books I would give a standing Ovation 👏 for, from how to story developments to the plot to the character development and world building, it’s amazing
Ehrlich gesagt bin ich mir nicht sicher wie die aktualisierungsstabilität war da das Buch bereits abgeschlossen war als ich zu lesen begann
I really enjoyed this story. I wonder recommend it to anyone that likes science fiction.
Love the light novel. The author have done a well character development story. The involvement of other section of the galaxy. The mecha evolution also well done.
Disappointed with the ending, author seems to be abandoned it rather than finishing.
Outstanding work, great and lovable characters that are certainly unforgettable. The story, world and characters keep you entertained and coming back for more.