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I found RWTSS around 2 months ago, read it in a month and ive currently done the same with Heaven’s Gate. This ending made me go for a walk to cool off. I needed to shake it off cause i looked like a madman being this giddy. Now i plan on reading the 2 others, but im not sure if i should read one at a time or both at the same time
Amazing amazing amazing. one of the best novels i've read. made me connect with the charactars so much. i actually laughed in certain situations in the plot and was on edge on others. amazing! the only thing that felt a bit of and maybe its just me, but the ending seemed a bit rushed and underwhelming. idk i just thought so much of the story that i kinda accpected a diff ending. but it's really good overall and worth your time.
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Me gustó la historia, seguiré con Elyon hasta el final.. aunque me está costando un dineral. gracias
I’ll be honest I love the novels this author does but I get a bitter taste finishing his novels because we never get to see them at the peak for long and it leaves me sad since I want to enjoy the main characters a bit more. Not sure if I can make it through another
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Question to Eylon, Are you working on any other novel? And I know now we buy your books 📕 from Amazon [img=strong]which I am happy about. But can you confirm if you are going to collaborate with all the three books that you have written so far I noticed in some of your novel you integrate the character, so I wanted to know if you are going to write a book that has all three major characters that would be amazing just to let you know I am would be happy to buy that book
When istartes this i was looking for my next casual read about powerful Necromancers, little did i knkw i was in for a life stealing rollercoaster frought with ups and downs that hit me harder than most shows on TV. Whats more the community attached to it are a real treat and it was fun to share in and confirm my reactioms with others along the way. To the author i thank you for your work and dedication, my fellow readers i look forward to joining u all on this adventure and welcome to those who join after me. Cheers.
I feel like Elyon with give us a story with all the characters in his story is so far together on an epic journey of magical battles. I can’t wait. I hope I’m right. I’m so saving towards this one. Please let it be so oh my God to have Mr. Lux William and 13 on one team oh my God, their enemy must be real strong, fighting gods for all of them to come together. This is going to be epic.
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4 stars for just the first 4 sentences in the synopsis. ................................................................................................
This was the first novel i read by Elyon, its a great novel until around ch. 950'ish he gives a warning himself to prepare for some tear jerkin moment that would most likely make readers cry or hate on him. Mc's master gets captured and he gather some monsters in one month but cant do anything because he is too weak, less than 100 chapters later his woman and her sister is kidnapped and suddenly he gathers a army big enough to dominate everyone. i find the situation when it did happen distasteful, but thats my opinion. what i dont like about the story is that the system becomes almost a non factor from that point on. soon after, all kinds of situation happens that Mc have pretty much no control over and is just reacting the whole time. and as always is the case with author he creates a lot of drama and makes it seem like all is lost just to find out that it was part of something bigger. i like the way Elyon writes and weave a story, but of the 2 novels i have read, sometimes he shapeshifts into a sadistic author destroying the iq of Mc or someone close to him/her which can kill the mood to keep reading.
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Lazy writing. Author just use time skip for important event. No more specific stat/lvl. Arthur just dump everything to group/rank like those cultivation/martial art rank. Almost every female become simp for mc. Mc more of summoner instead of necromancer. No more proper world building, after mc and kobold finish the dragon dungeon.. basically everything went downhill after the dragon dungeon..
Bitter sweet happiness laughter love determination never giving up after dark moments I love this novel
it was good. It had a great plot and was fun, and I had a great laugh while reading it
Okay, so this is my first time reading this author's work, and here is my take after reading the first 100 chapters. Let's start with the good points. Firstly, for quality, the style is great. I am not going to lie. From the writing, you can tell the author has experience, and this isn't their first book. Next, descriptors and world building are done expertly. Their world is original, and they are able to paint a picture with their words- if you know what I mean (not choppy and also not word soup). Because this novel is a system themed novel, the system is concrete and well thought out. From levels, leveling, skills, classes, and rarity, they are well defined and leave little room for the reader to say "I don't understand, how is this supposedly lesser item/skill/class better than it's higher counterpart." Everything is defined and leaves very little holes or grey areas. However, I will now explain why I stopped reading after 100 chapters. Despite having good bones, the story has several problems. Firstly, the MC is indeed "overpowered," but it isn't just the class, it is everything they have and acquire. Practically, any skill they get immediately gets maxed out. No training needed. Second, the MC is a reincarnated person, yet doesn’t really have the mindset of one. If you ommit that element from the story and just say "mc is strongly favored by the gods" nothing would change. Third, even though MC is OP, he still gripes over NPCs of being "broken". Like, isn't he even more OP than them? Fourth, and I realized this is a harem, but every female that's introduced is attracted to him in a 1 dimensional way. There really isn't a development or depth to it, it just happens. Also, the heroines, to me, seem flat. They are just walking stereotypes. They have no originality. Fifthly, the story has no challenge to the MC. If I had to describe it, MC isn't even in easy mode, he's really just cruising through on Minecraft Creative Mode. Not even a walk in the park. Lastly, as a reader, I feel the author has missed out on some really creative liberties and instead went with common isekai tropes. One really good example sticks out. Recently, nearing chapter 100, mc got a familiar (which is still a broken one) but rather than sticking with mythical/legendary theme like the character who helped him hatch it had, the author went with overpowered common creature. Thematically, it would have been cool to see MC with a familiar that aligned with the necromancer class or his elven blood. Examples: Jormengandur, Thunderbird, hydra, Leshen, a fae of some sort, etc. It could have even been played off as a mythical pretending to be common, but the author went with trope. Granted, my gripes with this novel comes from the first 100 chapters and the author could have fixed things in later chapters (it is well over 1000 chapters) I do believe the first chapters of novel tend to foreshadow what is expected to come. Objectively, this novel is still a good read. The author wasn't lying about OP MC and the system and world is well thought out. The writing style, grammar and how the author defines and describes are all done at the quality of an experienced writer. But, it doesn't seem like the character faces true challenges. To save the world, it seems like he is strolling through a field barefoot and occasionally steps on a pebble. The author also has a tendency to follow main tropes and miss out on some really creative opportunities, which is truly disappointing. Things might have changed in later chapters, but for the first 100, this novel is how I describe. So, if these elements are what you are looking for for a long read novel, then look no further. I might have my opinions, but everyone has their own as well. So what I might not like about this novel could, in fact, be your jam. All I can say is that this novel is written by an experienced writer.
HEY, do you guys know a novel where the mc have a subordinate or summon like Diablo??? but the author did not forgot about him and he can keep up with the mc? like his reliable? like Zoro with Luffy???
"Your fiction is a masterclass in storytelling. You have an incredible gift for crafting characters that resonate deeply and plots that keep me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what you create next!"
I havnt stopped reading this in 2 weeks. It’s been an absolute joy to read I’m off to devour more!!!
With Every next chapter/story that He is telling us. He is improving. Would be best if you start reading from his oldet novel 1st so you wont get spoilers (Reincarneted with the strongest system). Beware you may want to Hit the author
i am in ch 400+ and I am confused is author forget about that lux have different power up system because I remember i read it during leaf village arc that lux level up by consuming beast core and other by killing monsters. i think author is confused ?
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This is a really good novel there are some amazing moments in it but if you are looking for a ruthless mc from the start it's not your cup of tea then. The development of mc starts on from the second arc around 170 chaps mc does become ruthless in the future to his enemies but he is still a softie for the innocent. My favourite part is the necromancer abilities I absolutely love the use of corpse explosions and the harem my fav would be ires, aurelia and aurora My least favourite part sometimes the refrences can be a bit too much I like the eiko and remaru comparison but when they introduced All Mite I wasn't really into it maybe it's just cuz of my mood at that time. Overall 8.7
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I read reincarnated with the strongest system couple months ago and I only know it's a great novel. I even forgot who's the author. But after reading this novel and reading that last name "Ainsworth" made me look up who's the author and lo and behold it's the same author of one of my favorite novel. I completely fall in love when they are in the same universe and grandpa James just always popping up being the priest when someone is getting married. Keep up the great work and thank you Elyon for your wonderful world you bring us!
amazing start to finish and the rollercoaster of emotions I can't wait to read the 3rd book in this growing multiverse
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2nd boom that I have from this author. if you have the previous completed book, be prepared. he is a true masochist, and expect a love hate relationship from you. the book truly a gem in its own right. please give it a try. you won't be disappointed.
Ah the feeling of a well grown world where the characters are as alive, if not more so then the people we see every day. the characters that you hate to love and love to hate. The creatures you once saw as just monsters soon become beloved pets and ones you once would have turned away from, you now wish to embrace. The struggle from being as weak as a single grain of sand to becoming the very core of a world that without you would be just a bloody mess. A truly grand read.
I would like to invite all of you to take part in this brand new adventure. I'm not going to tell any of you on how good this novel is because I believe that all of you will be able to tell if its good, or not after you read it. So, come and open the pages that will become your new reading addiction.
I found RWTSS around 2 months ago, read it in a month and ive currently done the same with Heaven’s Gate. This ending made me go for a walk to cool off. I needed to shake it off cause i looked like a madman being this giddy. Now i plan on reading the 2 others, but im not sure if i should read one at a time or both at the same time
Amazing amazing amazing. one of the best novels i've read. made me connect with the charactars so much. i actually laughed in certain situations in the plot and was on edge on others. amazing! the only thing that felt a bit of and maybe its just me, but the ending seemed a bit rushed and underwhelming. idk i just thought so much of the story that i kinda accpected a diff ending. but it's really good overall and worth your time.
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Me gustó la historia, seguiré con Elyon hasta el final.. aunque me está costando un dineral. gracias
I’ll be honest I love the novels this author does but I get a bitter taste finishing his novels because we never get to see them at the peak for long and it leaves me sad since I want to enjoy the main characters a bit more. Not sure if I can make it through another
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Question to Eylon, Are you working on any other novel? And I know now we buy your books 📕 from Amazon [img=strong]which I am happy about. But can you confirm if you are going to collaborate with all the three books that you have written so far I noticed in some of your novel you integrate the character, so I wanted to know if you are going to write a book that has all three major characters that would be amazing just to let you know I am would be happy to buy that book
When istartes this i was looking for my next casual read about powerful Necromancers, little did i knkw i was in for a life stealing rollercoaster frought with ups and downs that hit me harder than most shows on TV. Whats more the community attached to it are a real treat and it was fun to share in and confirm my reactioms with others along the way. To the author i thank you for your work and dedication, my fellow readers i look forward to joining u all on this adventure and welcome to those who join after me. Cheers.
I feel like Elyon with give us a story with all the characters in his story is so far together on an epic journey of magical battles. I can’t wait. I hope I’m right. I’m so saving towards this one. Please let it be so oh my God to have Mr. Lux William and 13 on one team oh my God, their enemy must be real strong, fighting gods for all of them to come together. This is going to be epic.
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4 stars for just the first 4 sentences in the synopsis. ................................................................................................
This was the first novel i read by Elyon, its a great novel until around ch. 950'ish he gives a warning himself to prepare for some tear jerkin moment that would most likely make readers cry or hate on him. Mc's master gets captured and he gather some monsters in one month but cant do anything because he is too weak, less than 100 chapters later his woman and her sister is kidnapped and suddenly he gathers a army big enough to dominate everyone. i find the situation when it did happen distasteful, but thats my opinion. what i dont like about the story is that the system becomes almost a non factor from that point on. soon after, all kinds of situation happens that Mc have pretty much no control over and is just reacting the whole time. and as always is the case with author he creates a lot of drama and makes it seem like all is lost just to find out that it was part of something bigger. i like the way Elyon writes and weave a story, but of the 2 novels i have read, sometimes he shapeshifts into a sadistic author destroying the iq of Mc or someone close to him/her which can kill the mood to keep reading.
Spoiler de révélation Lazy writing. Author just use time skip for important event. No more specific stat/lvl. Arthur just dump everything to group/rank like those cultivation/martial art rank. Almost every female become simp for mc. Mc more of summoner instead of necromancer. No more proper world building, after mc and kobold finish the dragon dungeon.. basically everything went downhill after the dragon dungeon..
Bitter sweet happiness laughter love determination never giving up after dark moments I love this novel
it was good. It had a great plot and was fun, and I had a great laugh while reading it
Okay, so this is my first time reading this author's work, and here is my take after reading the first 100 chapters. Let's start with the good points. Firstly, for quality, the style is great. I am not going to lie. From the writing, you can tell the author has experience, and this isn't their first book. Next, descriptors and world building are done expertly. Their world is original, and they are able to paint a picture with their words- if you know what I mean (not choppy and also not word soup). Because this novel is a system themed novel, the system is concrete and well thought out. From levels, leveling, skills, classes, and rarity, they are well defined and leave little room for the reader to say "I don't understand, how is this supposedly lesser item/skill/class better than it's higher counterpart." Everything is defined and leaves very little holes or grey areas. However, I will now explain why I stopped reading after 100 chapters. Despite having good bones, the story has several problems. Firstly, the MC is indeed "overpowered," but it isn't just the class, it is everything they have and acquire. Practically, any skill they get immediately gets maxed out. No training needed. Second, the MC is a reincarnated person, yet doesn’t really have the mindset of one. If you ommit that element from the story and just say "mc is strongly favored by the gods" nothing would change. Third, even though MC is OP, he still gripes over NPCs of being "broken". Like, isn't he even more OP than them? Fourth, and I realized this is a harem, but every female that's introduced is attracted to him in a 1 dimensional way. There really isn't a development or depth to it, it just happens. Also, the heroines, to me, seem flat. They are just walking stereotypes. They have no originality. Fifthly, the story has no challenge to the MC. If I had to describe it, MC isn't even in easy mode, he's really just cruising through on Minecraft Creative Mode. Not even a walk in the park. Lastly, as a reader, I feel the author has missed out on some really creative liberties and instead went with common isekai tropes. One really good example sticks out. Recently, nearing chapter 100, mc got a familiar (which is still a broken one) but rather than sticking with mythical/legendary theme like the character who helped him hatch it had, the author went with overpowered common creature. Thematically, it would have been cool to see MC with a familiar that aligned with the necromancer class or his elven blood. Examples: Jormengandur, Thunderbird, hydra, Leshen, a fae of some sort, etc. It could have even been played off as a mythical pretending to be common, but the author went with trope. Granted, my gripes with this novel comes from the first 100 chapters and the author could have fixed things in later chapters (it is well over 1000 chapters) I do believe the first chapters of novel tend to foreshadow what is expected to come. Objectively, this novel is still a good read. The author wasn't lying about OP MC and the system and world is well thought out. The writing style, grammar and how the author defines and describes are all done at the quality of an experienced writer. But, it doesn't seem like the character faces true challenges. To save the world, it seems like he is strolling through a field barefoot and occasionally steps on a pebble. The author also has a tendency to follow main tropes and miss out on some really creative opportunities, which is truly disappointing. Things might have changed in later chapters, but for the first 100, this novel is how I describe. So, if these elements are what you are looking for for a long read novel, then look no further. I might have my opinions, but everyone has their own as well. So what I might not like about this novel could, in fact, be your jam. All I can say is that this novel is written by an experienced writer.
HEY, do you guys know a novel where the mc have a subordinate or summon like Diablo??? but the author did not forgot about him and he can keep up with the mc? like his reliable? like Zoro with Luffy???
"Your fiction is a masterclass in storytelling. You have an incredible gift for crafting characters that resonate deeply and plots that keep me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what you create next!"
I havnt stopped reading this in 2 weeks. It’s been an absolute joy to read I’m off to devour more!!!
With Every next chapter/story that He is telling us. He is improving. Would be best if you start reading from his oldet novel 1st so you wont get spoilers (Reincarneted with the strongest system). Beware you may want to Hit the author
i am in ch 400+ and I am confused is author forget about that lux have different power up system because I remember i read it during leaf village arc that lux level up by consuming beast core and other by killing monsters. i think author is confused ?
Spoiler de révélation This is a really good novel there are some amazing moments in it but if you are looking for a ruthless mc from the start it's not your cup of tea then. The development of mc starts on from the second arc around 170 chaps mc does become ruthless in the future to his enemies but he is still a softie for the innocent. My favourite part is the necromancer abilities I absolutely love the use of corpse explosions and the harem my fav would be ires, aurelia and aurora My least favourite part sometimes the refrences can be a bit too much I like the eiko and remaru comparison but when they introduced All Mite I wasn't really into it maybe it's just cuz of my mood at that time. Overall 8.7
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I read reincarnated with the strongest system couple months ago and I only know it's a great novel. I even forgot who's the author. But after reading this novel and reading that last name "Ainsworth" made me look up who's the author and lo and behold it's the same author of one of my favorite novel. I completely fall in love when they are in the same universe and grandpa James just always popping up being the priest when someone is getting married. Keep up the great work and thank you Elyon for your wonderful world you bring us!
amazing start to finish and the rollercoaster of emotions I can't wait to read the 3rd book in this growing multiverse
Spoiler de révélation 2nd boom that I have from this author. if you have the previous completed book, be prepared. he is a true masochist, and expect a love hate relationship from you. the book truly a gem in its own right. please give it a try. you won't be disappointed.
Ah the feeling of a well grown world where the characters are as alive, if not more so then the people we see every day. the characters that you hate to love and love to hate. The creatures you once saw as just monsters soon become beloved pets and ones you once would have turned away from, you now wish to embrace. The struggle from being as weak as a single grain of sand to becoming the very core of a world that without you would be just a bloody mess. A truly grand read.
I would like to invite all of you to take part in this brand new adventure. I'm not going to tell any of you on how good this novel is because I believe that all of you will be able to tell if its good, or not after you read it. So, come and open the pages that will become your new reading addiction.