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- Développement de l’histoire
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hello this is a good story so far when are you going to release more of it any day would be great i want to keep reading as much as possible.
Overall a very good story. I love how you were able to transform your dreams into such entrancing short stories. Some grammatical and punctuation mistakes but they were small and didn't affect the quality of your writing. Please keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you do with your next chapters.
Ill admit its not the best tool in the shack but itll definitely knock your socks off trust me youll be satisfied with this if not tell me what you think needs work and ill check it out
The story is nice and the character design is good. The author has good insight[img=fp]. The story is thrilling and it brings out different emotions
I felt some vibes when I was reading this but ultimately it is a short story. Would have liked to know more about the character and why he was alone in a desert. Though all in all I kinda liked the read
The story is well written. I really like the way you can feel the character's emotions. All in all, it's a great novel to the current chapter. I'm expecting more author.
hello this is a good story so far when are you going to release more of it any day would be great i want to keep reading as much as possible.
Overall a very good story. I love how you were able to transform your dreams into such entrancing short stories. Some grammatical and punctuation mistakes but they were small and didn't affect the quality of your writing. Please keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you do with your next chapters.
Ill admit its not the best tool in the shack but itll definitely knock your socks off trust me youll be satisfied with this if not tell me what you think needs work and ill check it out
The story is nice and the character design is good. The author has good insight[img=fp]. The story is thrilling and it brings out different emotions
I felt some vibes when I was reading this but ultimately it is a short story. Would have liked to know more about the character and why he was alone in a desert. Though all in all I kinda liked the read
The story is well written. I really like the way you can feel the character's emotions. All in all, it's a great novel to the current chapter. I'm expecting more author.