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I have personally loved how naruto has developed and cant wait to see more.
I am curious why the Hokage and Kakashi are not keeping an eye on him. After all Anbu did that in the canon. Also he is to important of a weapon for them to not keep an eye on.
As of right now, I'm leaving this review without much said, as there have only been 12 chapters. I'll update it when/if more chapters come out.
i like this story very much it is refreshing keep up the good work .............. . ...... ..... thank you[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
cap seen until 11, the story is good, this part of the gates is interesting but I don't know how it will be in the future so I won't comment now, I like to see naruto using clones to improve his training I always thought naruto had the potential to be a perfect ninja, with the clones he could train everything because he has a lot of "time".
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A great start so far with realistic characters even if they are slightly AU compared to canon. The interpersonal relations aren't being rushed and are being slowly built which is great. The fact that Naruto in this actually has a brain makes it easier to read compared to other Naruto fics. Grammar and writing style are good and easy to read.
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Hey! I am cross uploading from fanfic.net onto here as well. The story is slow-paced while adding a lot of additional detail for readers who are less familiar with the Naruto franchise! I hope you enjoy, and leave a review/send a message of any ideas or suggestions you might have!
I have personally loved how naruto has developed and cant wait to see more.
I am curious why the Hokage and Kakashi are not keeping an eye on him. After all Anbu did that in the canon. Also he is to important of a weapon for them to not keep an eye on.
As of right now, I'm leaving this review without much said, as there have only been 12 chapters. I'll update it when/if more chapters come out.
i like this story very much it is refreshing keep up the good work .............. . ...... ..... thank you[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
cap seen until 11, the story is good, this part of the gates is interesting but I don't know how it will be in the future so I won't comment now, I like to see naruto using clones to improve his training I always thought naruto had the potential to be a perfect ninja, with the clones he could train everything because he has a lot of "time".
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A great start so far with realistic characters even if they are slightly AU compared to canon. The interpersonal relations aren't being rushed and are being slowly built which is great. The fact that Naruto in this actually has a brain makes it easier to read compared to other Naruto fics. Grammar and writing style are good and easy to read.
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Hey! I am cross uploading from fanfic.net onto here as well. The story is slow-paced while adding a lot of additional detail for readers who are less familiar with the Naruto franchise! I hope you enjoy, and leave a review/send a message of any ideas or suggestions you might have!
Good story. Realistic plot, and believable characters .