27Critiques
4.15
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
It’s been so long since I read a book that’s this well written 😭the quality here is amazing . Thank you so much for this writing :)
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A little rough around the edges but a great story overall. Definitely recommended. A mature SI, no romance shenanigans, does Naruto characters justice and complete! You can also see the authors writing improving over the chapters.
a very enjoyable story. good flow and didn't feel like a narrative. a bit short but it's perfect as it didn't unnecessarily prolong the story for the current book.
I was surprised at the number of one star reviews on this great fanfiction. I'm giving my 5 star review as I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfics ever.
.....................................................................................................................................................
One of the best Naruto Shippuden story I've read. Extremely recommended. ................................................................
Great..................................................... .... .............................................................................
at first when I see it have just few chapters and already completed, I have some disappointments but when I read first chapter it give me a long chapter and all chapter is long. Good story
There's already a comment that say everything I wanted to say just wanted to add my Five stars too. "For me this feels like best Naruto fanfic . Naruto seems more realistic and normal compared to original. He may even reach full potential where the original Naruto never could."
Good More (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q)
Top quality fanfiction. Your work is realy realy good the story is interesting. Good work mate [img=recommend] Make sure to continue writing maybe one day you would make a best seller ;)
Read this on FF and it was pretty good. The way the plot moves along is also why I kept reading. Usually naruto SI fanfics take time or get bogged down in the day-to-day, or authors just burn out. Overall good story and execution, also can't wait for the continuation.
Spoiler de révélation
Мне нравиться этот роман, но было бы лучше добавить точки зрения других персонажей тоже)[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
For me this feels like best Naruto fanfic . Naruto seems more realistic and normal compared to original. He may even reach full potential where the original Naruto never could.
I am surprised seeing the fic here. I loved it in the Fanfiction site, waiting for update. Hope you will write more fanfic here as well. Thanks for the fanfic 👍
Great story! I liked the peaceful resolution at the end, as well as a possible Naruhina romance! It's a shame that other nations didn't get involved, I would have liked to see this Naruto as Hokage at the 5 Kage Summit.
It’s been so long since I read a book that’s this well written 😭the quality here is amazing . Thank you so much for this writing :)
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A little rough around the edges but a great story overall. Definitely recommended. A mature SI, no romance shenanigans, does Naruto characters justice and complete! You can also see the authors writing improving over the chapters.
a very enjoyable story. good flow and didn't feel like a narrative. a bit short but it's perfect as it didn't unnecessarily prolong the story for the current book.
I was surprised at the number of one star reviews on this great fanfiction. I'm giving my 5 star review as I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfics ever.
.....................................................................................................................................................
One of the best Naruto Shippuden story I've read. Extremely recommended. ................................................................
Great..................................................... .... .............................................................................
at first when I see it have just few chapters and already completed, I have some disappointments but when I read first chapter it give me a long chapter and all chapter is long. Good story
There's already a comment that say everything I wanted to say just wanted to add my Five stars too. "For me this feels like best Naruto fanfic . Naruto seems more realistic and normal compared to original. He may even reach full potential where the original Naruto never could."
Good More (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q) (Q__Q)
Top quality fanfiction. Your work is realy realy good the story is interesting. Good work mate [img=recommend] Make sure to continue writing maybe one day you would make a best seller ;)
Read this on FF and it was pretty good. The way the plot moves along is also why I kept reading. Usually naruto SI fanfics take time or get bogged down in the day-to-day, or authors just burn out. Overall good story and execution, also can't wait for the continuation.
Spoiler de révélation Мне нравиться этот роман, но было бы лучше добавить точки зрения других персонажей тоже)[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
For me this feels like best Naruto fanfic . Naruto seems more realistic and normal compared to original. He may even reach full potential where the original Naruto never could.
I am surprised seeing the fic here. I loved it in the Fanfiction site, waiting for update. Hope you will write more fanfic here as well. Thanks for the fanfic 👍
Great story! I liked the peaceful resolution at the end, as well as a possible Naruhina romance! It's a shame that other nations didn't get involved, I would have liked to see this Naruto as Hokage at the 5 Kage Summit.