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Author here! This is my first work and I intend to use this Fanfic to practice my writing so If there's any mistakes, please comment and I will fix it right away!^•^ This Fanfic is a comedy novel so please don't hope about some lemon and 18+ scene here. Of course there will be some action, this is One Piece fan fic after all, it won't feel complete without some fighting scene right? Since this is my first work, of course I have to take pride in it and rate it 5 stars my self he he he, so what if I'm shameless? Can I eat it? XD Well, please comment and rate this Fan fic, I will accept all kind of critics, advice and others with big heart. I even welcome Stones much more you know*grin* That's all, Enjoy reading!^•^
Author here! This is my first work and I intend to use this Fanfic to practice my writing so If there's any mistakes, please comment and I will fix it right away!^•^ This Fanfic is a comedy novel so please don't hope about some lemon and 18+ scene here. Of course there will be some action, this is One Piece fan fic after all, it won't feel complete without some fighting scene right? Since this is my first work, of course I have to take pride in it and rate it 5 stars my self he he he, so what if I'm shameless? Can I eat it? XD Well, please comment and rate this Fan fic, I will accept all kind of critics, advice and others with big heart. I even welcome Stones much more you know*grin* That's all, Enjoy reading!^•^