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the story is good so far👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 p.s Robin is best girl
hey if one punch man universe is mixed and one punch man is there then is there a need to save the world i don't think there is any one in the multiverse except zeno who can defeat him
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it's not the worst thing in the world and kept me entertained for a bit. I just got annoyed by the women being head over heels and the unreasonable power level upgrades to both the MC and the monsters. i mean if you were gonna do that you might as well let him experience the grind of getting stronger against strong monsters.
It's a good fanfiction novel, the beginning was terrible with a MC typical japanese SIMP shonen BETA who thinks too sentimentally and has no sense of danger, fortunately he got better with time and begins to have a personality of an MC that we want to see ( he becomes responsible and becomes strong and changes his personality for the best ). As far as the romance is concerned, we can say that it is a Harem and begins to grow over time with all the women of the other animes who are very beautiful and with incredible scenes hot +18. ( he takes care of his women and makes them strong which is a + ) However, Stability of Updates is very low ( 2 chs / week ). Overall, It's a good fanfiction that deserves to be read by us Anime Lovers.
I really like this story, unlike many other ones(generally the h*ntai ones). The most I found likable was the character development at start. Generally in stories like this the MC would go with the flow so easily that i would sometimes think they had their mind tampered with. I also liked how you seamlessly (almost) integrated various anime background. I am waiting for the next chapters to come. Keep up the good work.
the beginning was pretty bad. it seemed that the mc was a typical japanese shonen beta mc...silly with no sense of danger etc... but he got better with time so give him a chance only the first 3 chapters leave you wanting to read more since he had a sensitive and sentimental start, but after that for more than 13 chapters a lot of people complain about how dumb the mc becomes... but then it improves the character growth a lot with that etc. traducion de goolge XD
you could put your story on some other platform of novels to be able to read it the truth I quite like your story but with the closure of the website we could not read it
Keep it up 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😜😜😜😜😜😜😜💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 Why do these post have to be so long
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so far the story is going well there are some things missing, but I hope that over time the author improves. For now I will give it 4 stars. I look forward to the future
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Sorry the FF was really good but chapter 94 really disappointed me. do you look hot You can do anything with the MC. Just break into his house and pretend it's yours. sorry, this really disappoints me. anyone but a hot woman would have had consequences.
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THE ONLY PROBLEM FOR ME TO THIS NOVEL IS THAT I NEED MORE CHAPTERS HUHU, love this fan fiction pls dont drop this author or else i will curse you hahaha jk
i am definitely not here because of the cover...i am here for just research purposes .... definitely a guy with pure heart and love for science.....wow look at that*ahem.....i mean story looks totally intresting
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will stay 5* if you give the sauce for the novel cover. . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . ... . .. . . . . .. . .
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So good, this is amazing, i love it, Although it is a bit bland at first, in the following chapters it is fixed, the world is well built in my opinion, and it is interesting to read it
très agréable a lire merci beaucoup. mais je voudrais en lire tellement plus ,donc merci pour le travail et grand hâte de lire la suite
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the story is good so far👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 p.s Robin is best girl
hey if one punch man universe is mixed and one punch man is there then is there a need to save the world i don't think there is any one in the multiverse except zeno who can defeat him
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it's not the worst thing in the world and kept me entertained for a bit. I just got annoyed by the women being head over heels and the unreasonable power level upgrades to both the MC and the monsters. i mean if you were gonna do that you might as well let him experience the grind of getting stronger against strong monsters.
It's a good fanfiction novel, the beginning was terrible with a MC typical japanese SIMP shonen BETA who thinks too sentimentally and has no sense of danger, fortunately he got better with time and begins to have a personality of an MC that we want to see ( he becomes responsible and becomes strong and changes his personality for the best ). As far as the romance is concerned, we can say that it is a Harem and begins to grow over time with all the women of the other animes who are very beautiful and with incredible scenes hot +18. ( he takes care of his women and makes them strong which is a + ) However, Stability of Updates is very low ( 2 chs / week ). Overall, It's a good fanfiction that deserves to be read by us Anime Lovers.
I really like this story, unlike many other ones(generally the h*ntai ones). The most I found likable was the character development at start. Generally in stories like this the MC would go with the flow so easily that i would sometimes think they had their mind tampered with. I also liked how you seamlessly (almost) integrated various anime background. I am waiting for the next chapters to come. Keep up the good work.
the beginning was pretty bad. it seemed that the mc was a typical japanese shonen beta mc...silly with no sense of danger etc... but he got better with time so give him a chance only the first 3 chapters leave you wanting to read more since he had a sensitive and sentimental start, but after that for more than 13 chapters a lot of people complain about how dumb the mc becomes... but then it improves the character growth a lot with that etc. traducion de goolge XD
you could put your story on some other platform of novels to be able to read it the truth I quite like your story but with the closure of the website we could not read it
Keep it up 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😜😜😜😜😜😜😜💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 Why do these post have to be so long
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so far the story is going well there are some things missing, but I hope that over time the author improves. For now I will give it 4 stars. I look forward to the future
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Sorry the FF was really good but chapter 94 really disappointed me. do you look hot You can do anything with the MC. Just break into his house and pretend it's yours. sorry, this really disappoints me. anyone but a hot woman would have had consequences.
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THE ONLY PROBLEM FOR ME TO THIS NOVEL IS THAT I NEED MORE CHAPTERS HUHU, love this fan fiction pls dont drop this author or else i will curse you hahaha jk
i am definitely not here because of the cover...i am here for just research purposes .... definitely a guy with pure heart and love for science.....wow look at that*ahem.....i mean story looks totally intresting
Spoiler de révélation will stay 5* if you give the sauce for the novel cover. . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . ... . .. . . . . .. . .
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So good, this is amazing, i love it, Although it is a bit bland at first, in the following chapters it is fixed, the world is well built in my opinion, and it is interesting to read it
très agréable a lire merci beaucoup. mais je voudrais en lire tellement plus ,donc merci pour le travail et grand hâte de lire la suite
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