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Honestly with your concept of this story in the kuroinu verse i wonder what celestine would react to subarus life. if someone can make any rezero x kuroinu then please make them also please use greed or wrath if’s subaru
Author did great in writing a quality fic. I have very little to complain about. This was a great reading experience. I hope you don’t drop this.
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Its's a great story! The characters feel alive, the world actually feels real, and has history. The only problem is the update schedule, but I guess that's to be expected when writing in this quality.
it's really good, Archer does not exactly changes but he becomes gentler slowly to those he makes connections with. it does not feel unnatural because he often shows his reluctance in a justifiable and not annoying way like many other fanfics that try something similar.
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One of the best archer emiya stories I have ever read keep it up author and I am looking forward to your others fanfics and don't let people's criticism get you down
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5 звёзд. Мне очень нравится. Пожалуй, единственный минус истории - её мало. MMO-O-O-Or-rr!!! Сразу Скажу, что я не имею понятия что такое Kuroinu, поэтому каждый раз гуглю персонажей. Мне без разницы какая история в оригинальном произведении, я просто наслаждаюсь чтивом и радуюсь, что нашёл его. Всегда приятно читать про то, как отморозки получают заслуженное. Арчер хорош. (Боже кто вообще может создавать вселенные по типу Kuroinu? Тут уже не просто броне-купальники, здесь уже какие-то эро-стринги! Ужас!)
i like the story the only thing that I have problem with is your updates are unstable but considering the amount of fanfics the author is writing it's understandable keep it up
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the beginning of the story is pretty good. but the story starts to feel less pleasant when the archer changes, who was originally an ignorant archer turns into a very annoying hero. i just don't like mc character developer.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
When I learned the world was Kuroinu, I was expecting something lewd and unholy with bad quality. That couldn't be farther from the truth. This book, its a masterpiece. From how well Archer is represented in the canon personaşty to all the tiny things like small flashbacks of Archer showing his loathe for his past. I have nothing else I can say, perfect.
The story is well constructed and the charecters all well developed, leaving even space to develope them even more. Honestly, there are few webnovels that I consider 'worthy' to review and this is definitively one of them.
Je suis en train d'écrire un roman je suis débutant dans dans le domaine mais savoir écrire un combat surtout m'ont personnage doit être pros de art martiaux si vous pouvez mes donner des base (je parle français)
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10/10 The best Archer story I have read, I enjoy how his character is portrayed and his development. Exelent work, hope it doesn't get dropped
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I am a reader of the author's crossover fanfiction between Oregairu and DxD, which kind of a rare fic to be made and somehow get to run for quite a long time until now. Anyway, definitely a recommended fanfiction by me on this one cause it is a Fate x Kuroinu crossover, which is quite rare around this sites, and even in some others. Story progression is quite fair with some cuts makes me awaiting to read more. Although you could pay for the Patreon ticket to get an extra or 2 advance chapters from the official one. And this one is atleast better than a certain author who kept keeping too many of their chapters behind a paywall.
you are perhaps the first person that has ever written a good Kuronui fanfiction in my opinion. Well besides that bloodborne version. Please keep up that good work- I am so invested in your story
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Tengo que decir que me está gustando la historia hasta el capítulo en el momento que se escribe esto, espero que se mantenga o supere la calidad actual.
Esta historia es muy buena, la mejor que hay en torno a Kuroinu, espero que siga así ya que cada vez es mejor
Honestly with your concept of this story in the kuroinu verse i wonder what celestine would react to subarus life. if someone can make any rezero x kuroinu then please make them also please use greed or wrath if’s subaru
Author did great in writing a quality fic. I have very little to complain about. This was a great reading experience. I hope you don’t drop this.
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Its's a great story! The characters feel alive, the world actually feels real, and has history. The only problem is the update schedule, but I guess that's to be expected when writing in this quality.
it's really good, Archer does not exactly changes but he becomes gentler slowly to those he makes connections with. it does not feel unnatural because he often shows his reluctance in a justifiable and not annoying way like many other fanfics that try something similar.
continue the chapter!!! KjhbgjghhhhhgghbkkkqkakkKzmslzmzmszmzmzmzmmsmssmsmsmmsmxmzmzmsmzmzmzksmsmsmsmmsmsmzmssmsmmzmsmssmskskzmmxmzmsmsamsmsmMMMsksksmdkskdksksjdjsksjdkkdmdmdkdmdmdksmdndjkdkdkdkddk
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One of the best archer emiya stories I have ever read keep it up author and I am looking forward to your others fanfics and don't let people's criticism get you down
This is the only kuroinu fan fic that is interesting that I have seen[img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap]
5 звёзд. Мне очень нравится. Пожалуй, единственный минус истории - её мало. MMO-O-O-Or-rr!!! Сразу Скажу, что я не имею понятия что такое Kuroinu, поэтому каждый раз гуглю персонажей. Мне без разницы какая история в оригинальном произведении, я просто наслаждаюсь чтивом и радуюсь, что нашёл его. Всегда приятно читать про то, как отморозки получают заслуженное. Арчер хорош. (Боже кто вообще может создавать вселенные по типу Kuroinu? Тут уже не просто броне-купальники, здесь уже какие-то эро-стринги! Ужас!)
i like the story the only thing that I have problem with is your updates are unstable but considering the amount of fanfics the author is writing it's understandable keep it up
Definitely worth the read ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the beginning of the story is pretty good. but the story starts to feel less pleasant when the archer changes, who was originally an ignorant archer turns into a very annoying hero. i just don't like mc character developer.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
When I learned the world was Kuroinu, I was expecting something lewd and unholy with bad quality. That couldn't be farther from the truth. This book, its a masterpiece. From how well Archer is represented in the canon personaşty to all the tiny things like small flashbacks of Archer showing his loathe for his past. I have nothing else I can say, perfect.
The story is well constructed and the charecters all well developed, leaving even space to develope them even more. Honestly, there are few webnovels that I consider 'worthy' to review and this is definitively one of them.
Je suis en train d'écrire un roman je suis débutant dans dans le domaine mais savoir écrire un combat surtout m'ont personnage doit être pros de art martiaux si vous pouvez mes donner des base (je parle français)
the best kuroinu fanfiction on this site....................................................................................................
10/10 The best Archer story I have read, I enjoy how his character is portrayed and his development. Exelent work, hope it doesn't get dropped
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I am a reader of the author's crossover fanfiction between Oregairu and DxD, which kind of a rare fic to be made and somehow get to run for quite a long time until now. Anyway, definitely a recommended fanfiction by me on this one cause it is a Fate x Kuroinu crossover, which is quite rare around this sites, and even in some others. Story progression is quite fair with some cuts makes me awaiting to read more. Although you could pay for the Patreon ticket to get an extra or 2 advance chapters from the official one. And this one is atleast better than a certain author who kept keeping too many of their chapters behind a paywall.
you are perhaps the first person that has ever written a good Kuronui fanfiction in my opinion. Well besides that bloodborne version. Please keep up that good work- I am so invested in your story
Good..,...,......,......,...,..,.,,,.............,...,......,......,...,..,.,,,.............,...,......,......,...,..,.,,,.............,...,......,......,...,..,.,,,...........
excellent ............................mm ................................................................................................................
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Tengo que decir que me está gustando la historia hasta el capítulo en el momento que se escribe esto, espero que se mantenga o supere la calidad actual.
Esta historia es muy buena, la mejor que hay en torno a Kuroinu, espero que siga así ya que cada vez es mejor