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the story or plot is good but the dialogue or how it was written is confusing .......................... maybe a little bit of editing would do
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as long as it's about rebirth or reborn, just bring it on to me .I'll read them wholeheartedly. repair the past , how I want to have that ability
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I feel like the synopsis was the whole story but shorten. All it needed in the end was (And they live happily ever after. The End.)
the story or plot is good but the dialogue or how it was written is confusing .......................... maybe a little bit of editing would do
raws pls....................................................................................................................................
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as long as it's about rebirth or reborn, just bring it on to me .I'll read them wholeheartedly. repair the past , how I want to have that ability
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]sypnosis is good. Waiting for the updates. Can't wait to read it.
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗wow! 😯😯😯😯😯😯😯nice thanks for the next chapter 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰more more chapter to read💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😱💰💰💰💰😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
I feel like the synopsis was the whole story but shorten. All it needed in the end was (And they live happily ever after. The End.)