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Author here, I'm gonna clear somethings 1. This Novel is not mine. I am just translating it from the Chinese Raws. 2. It was posted on Webnovel before but was MTL translation so it couldn't be understood mostly. 3. I have given links for Raws in the Synopsis please read it before posting a review or comments. Thanks.
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Congratulations on the translation.... the idea is good, but the main character's personality is shit, he's right to put his family first, but he treats everyone as inferior... he simply decided not to go help the Hulk face the abomination because he didn't have any property there
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So first off its very annoying with Chinese MC's always being Homicidal maniacs killing anyone who disagrees with them its very overboard. Also his complete lack of empathy for anything other than Hela is annoying he makes a bit of money and turns into a salted fish that eats, showers, fucks, and sleeps nothing else his life turns reactionary and he is never proactive unless he is the slightest bit offended then turns into a murder god killing those who offend him unless they crawl on there belly and lick his shoes becoming his lackey's its basically a cultivation novel tuned into a fan fiction with comic book powers instead...
This is a great Marvel AU fanfic. Although the translation leaves much to be desired, it is still readable. The plot was good, not many plot holes but there are some. Also sometimes the plot felt very forced and cliche, but it is still tolerable. Anyway, I reach chapter 107 before I stopped reading, not because it got bad or anything, it just felt like there is no point in reading anymore. The MC didn't really have a reason to live or a goal to strive for, he just want to leave a lazy life and be happily with his wife at home. Honestly I can understand him and I don't have any problem with that, it's just not really all that interesting to read. Anyway I gave this fanfic five-star review in everything except for it's translation.
This book is an interesting dynamic between wanting a peaceful life and a ruthless MC. And I love it.
hmm... mc really went brain dead after a while for the sake of plot. okay read if you turn your brain off. oh and idk if I should say but author has alot of baggage and stereotype. honestly if you don't got anything better to read. it does it.
a translated Chinese novel, even the name is hard to change, ye bai? I don't think it's even worth to read if the name of mc is still Chinese, pathetic
I started the novel and after finishing each chapter I started to hate mc more. I have no prejudice against anti heros but in every chapter he make us feel that he is Chinese, "if it were Chinese people I would save them ". I don't know why was he reborn in US then.
i have to agree with a lot of people here, that typical chinese young master behaviour just gets annoying, since there is also no character development (read until chapter 40)
This fanfic is genuinely 'Courting Death'! Taking the MCU and giving it a cultivator-like perspective. Mind you, the MC doesn't actually cultivate. Oddly enough this created an entertaining hybrid story. The action is what it is. The romance may appear a little lacking to some readers. They may want to eat more dog food. The comedy can hit the mark and get a chuckle. Although it is written with the perspective and speech pattern of a cultivator, it does not go over the top. I think it's worth checking out even if you are put off by Eastern Fantasy writing at times.
Es muy aburrida y es una historia muy similar a otras con la misma trama Yo eh visto muchas historias así La gente se auto inserta en el personaje donde todo le sale bien y no tiene fallos
Great translation quality, no complaints with the translator. For the actual content of the story, most of the interesting moments between the protag and Hela are only in the beginning. Most of the conflicts follow the same pattern of someone accidentally offending the protagonist, there is buildup to a fight, he kills them. It does get repetitive after a while. For the positive aspects, the story is deeply related to different aspects of the dc/marvel universe and you can tell that the author really is a fan of these characters.
The novel's story was actually fine even the Chinese Young Master Act was still tolerable but when it added Religion into the Mix it started to get Confusing, I can make a lists of reasons why One The Part about God and Christianity being Part of Marvel just do not make any sense to begin with they do not appear in Marvel but in DC, Two Heven of Marvel aka Tenth Realm's Leader is a Queen not a King, Three Marvel's Angels do not have Superpowers of any sort and aside from their Strong Physique and Wings they don't have anything else going for them, Four I'm pretty sure this is the AUTHOR being Biased towards Christianity like the heck, not even Thinking That the Concept of having Good Morality Only Exists because of Christianity(Ten Commandments) and Whatever Bad that comes from the Church is because of the Bad Humans that Govern the Church and not because of God who made a Promise or Oath or Covenant to not interfere with Humanity anymore due to FREE WILL... There is also the fact that if you Look Properly into the Bible you will understand why Flooded the Earth and Burned Sodom and Gamorah(Rape, Murder, Slavery, Debauchery, Child Abuse, Child Labor, and Many Many More Horrifying Evil that would not be out place from Mythologies like Lovecraftian Mythos and Greek Myth and the Like ) ... I mean if you want to be Biased against Christianity atleast Check your Facts Properly
very entertaining story and since I have nothing more to say poss, xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd
Legalzin, teve algumas partes que não gostei mas no geral eu acho bom, recomendo................................. ....................................................
Good read but every chapter is so winding. No need to emphasize that it is like this and this is like that every freaking chapter almost all the chapters is like that so much explanation for every single thought
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It is a good read! Can you also translate "My wife is Scarlet Witch" that was a good one. [img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka MC op.. Ya setiap orang pasti berbeda beda dalam menikmati fanfic tertentu.. Pokoknya saya dukung fanfic ini dan tetap semangat author
this is a good fanfic and i like the storyline.. keep the spirit of the author and i will support your work.. I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
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HELP ME FIND A FIC Mc goes to tamar kaj, finds a way through dimensions, even a darkness one that he briefly uses to use shadow power finds the dimension where Hela is chained and he starts talking to her before making her fall for him.
I usually can't read books written by again people because I don't understand how they use the English language, but, I am loving this book!
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Author here, I'm gonna clear somethings 1. This Novel is not mine. I am just translating it from the Chinese Raws. 2. It was posted on Webnovel before but was MTL translation so it couldn't be understood mostly. 3. I have given links for Raws in the Synopsis please read it before posting a review or comments. Thanks.
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Congratulations on the translation.... the idea is good, but the main character's personality is shit, he's right to put his family first, but he treats everyone as inferior... he simply decided not to go help the Hulk face the abomination because he didn't have any property there
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So first off its very annoying with Chinese MC's always being Homicidal maniacs killing anyone who disagrees with them its very overboard. Also his complete lack of empathy for anything other than Hela is annoying he makes a bit of money and turns into a salted fish that eats, showers, fucks, and sleeps nothing else his life turns reactionary and he is never proactive unless he is the slightest bit offended then turns into a murder god killing those who offend him unless they crawl on there belly and lick his shoes becoming his lackey's its basically a cultivation novel tuned into a fan fiction with comic book powers instead...
This is a great Marvel AU fanfic. Although the translation leaves much to be desired, it is still readable. The plot was good, not many plot holes but there are some. Also sometimes the plot felt very forced and cliche, but it is still tolerable. Anyway, I reach chapter 107 before I stopped reading, not because it got bad or anything, it just felt like there is no point in reading anymore. The MC didn't really have a reason to live or a goal to strive for, he just want to leave a lazy life and be happily with his wife at home. Honestly I can understand him and I don't have any problem with that, it's just not really all that interesting to read. Anyway I gave this fanfic five-star review in everything except for it's translation.
This book is an interesting dynamic between wanting a peaceful life and a ruthless MC. And I love it.
hmm... mc really went brain dead after a while for the sake of plot. okay read if you turn your brain off. oh and idk if I should say but author has alot of baggage and stereotype. honestly if you don't got anything better to read. it does it.
a translated Chinese novel, even the name is hard to change, ye bai? I don't think it's even worth to read if the name of mc is still Chinese, pathetic
I started the novel and after finishing each chapter I started to hate mc more. I have no prejudice against anti heros but in every chapter he make us feel that he is Chinese, "if it were Chinese people I would save them ". I don't know why was he reborn in US then.
i have to agree with a lot of people here, that typical chinese young master behaviour just gets annoying, since there is also no character development (read until chapter 40)
This fanfic is genuinely 'Courting Death'! Taking the MCU and giving it a cultivator-like perspective. Mind you, the MC doesn't actually cultivate. Oddly enough this created an entertaining hybrid story. The action is what it is. The romance may appear a little lacking to some readers. They may want to eat more dog food. The comedy can hit the mark and get a chuckle. Although it is written with the perspective and speech pattern of a cultivator, it does not go over the top. I think it's worth checking out even if you are put off by Eastern Fantasy writing at times.
Es muy aburrida y es una historia muy similar a otras con la misma trama Yo eh visto muchas historias así La gente se auto inserta en el personaje donde todo le sale bien y no tiene fallos
Great translation quality, no complaints with the translator. For the actual content of the story, most of the interesting moments between the protag and Hela are only in the beginning. Most of the conflicts follow the same pattern of someone accidentally offending the protagonist, there is buildup to a fight, he kills them. It does get repetitive after a while. For the positive aspects, the story is deeply related to different aspects of the dc/marvel universe and you can tell that the author really is a fan of these characters.
The novel's story was actually fine even the Chinese Young Master Act was still tolerable but when it added Religion into the Mix it started to get Confusing, I can make a lists of reasons why One The Part about God and Christianity being Part of Marvel just do not make any sense to begin with they do not appear in Marvel but in DC, Two Heven of Marvel aka Tenth Realm's Leader is a Queen not a King, Three Marvel's Angels do not have Superpowers of any sort and aside from their Strong Physique and Wings they don't have anything else going for them, Four I'm pretty sure this is the AUTHOR being Biased towards Christianity like the heck, not even Thinking That the Concept of having Good Morality Only Exists because of Christianity(Ten Commandments) and Whatever Bad that comes from the Church is because of the Bad Humans that Govern the Church and not because of God who made a Promise or Oath or Covenant to not interfere with Humanity anymore due to FREE WILL... There is also the fact that if you Look Properly into the Bible you will understand why Flooded the Earth and Burned Sodom and Gamorah(Rape, Murder, Slavery, Debauchery, Child Abuse, Child Labor, and Many Many More Horrifying Evil that would not be out place from Mythologies like Lovecraftian Mythos and Greek Myth and the Like ) ... I mean if you want to be Biased against Christianity atleast Check your Facts Properly
very entertaining story and since I have nothing more to say poss, xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd
Legalzin, teve algumas partes que não gostei mas no geral eu acho bom, recomendo................................. ....................................................
Good read but every chapter is so winding. No need to emphasize that it is like this and this is like that every freaking chapter almost all the chapters is like that so much explanation for every single thought
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It is a good read! Can you also translate "My wife is Scarlet Witch" that was a good one. [img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka MC op.. Ya setiap orang pasti berbeda beda dalam menikmati fanfic tertentu.. Pokoknya saya dukung fanfic ini dan tetap semangat author
this is a good fanfic and i like the storyline.. keep the spirit of the author and i will support your work.. I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
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HELP ME FIND A FIC Mc goes to tamar kaj, finds a way through dimensions, even a darkness one that he briefly uses to use shadow power finds the dimension where Hela is chained and he starts talking to her before making her fall for him.
I usually can't read books written by again people because I don't understand how they use the English language, but, I am loving this book!
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