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A PROPOSTA da fanfic é boa. SOMENTE. No demais, é uma confusão de encrencas igual aquelas obras chinesas de cultivo, onde aparece um inimigo sem explicação a cada espirro. Chato e deprimente.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it's a great story and one of the First witcher ff that i read... I just want to know if you will continue with this story or not...ok you want to make a better start with the other one but will you drop this?
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The story is mostly dark and bland, character isn't really relatable or creates a big impression. Has memories of the past of the wars of humans, elf's and other races. So he starts despising people viewing them at the same level as monsters. But you can see he also has the same characteristics that he 'despises' like greet,hate, disgust, and making decisions based of those emotions. so nothing truly interesting in his personality just seems more like a hypocrite. the world background is alright nothing ground breaking but does give good background into the Witcher world for people who haven't read,played, or watched the Witcher series. There's also a bit of plot holes that leave me wondering like at the end of the battle at the castle there was suppose to be 40 kids when it was last talked about after the death of a few kids but then it dropped to 30 when they went back to the castle. Also I might have missed it but what happened to the wolf cubs?
A good witcher story probably the best on webnovel just a bit dark as a setting but nothing extreme. All in all i recommend the fiction even if you watched only the series or played the games.
Annoyingly decent is a great way to describe this book. The constant contradictions in character and overall logic absolutely ruin the atmosphere of the Witcher universe and this book as a whole(He almost loses in a sword fight to some arrogant prince because, in the authors eyes, "nobodies perfect" while trying to make him more human. Which sure, i agree no ones perfect, but he is a WITCHER not a human, he will hear and smell the guard behind him(in full metal plate might i add, very loud btw) before he goes to attack him. Dialogue and personality of the MC is mundane and forced (robotic) so theres not much going for character development. Some issues with grammar here and there but its still very good, especially when it's not the authors first language which i was impressed with. Author also can't take criticism to save his life, making commenting trying to help with absolutely stupid decisions or dialogue tiring ,when you are an invested reader trying to help them improve.
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i enjoyed ur novel thanks, by the way i still think lol princess would have been the best choice for the romance, but i won't be able to see it either way so thanks for the novel
I don't really know nothing about the Witcher, so I'm asking this, what's the storyline here ? It's start from the Witcher 1 or 2 or 3 ? I'm asking this cuz there is a channel on YouTube(Game Movie Land) where they make movies from a game. So if you guide me, I'm going to see it first on YouTube and then read the fanfic. Giving 5 stars, this is new on this site. Don't make it harem please, we are tired of that ****, it's everywhere …
Excellent work, I think the advantages here clearly outweigh everything else. The only negative is only for readers from Russian-speaking countries (Russia and so on), we have all the monsters named after themselves, because initially they were copied from our chronicles, so often we have to check the names to see what kind of monster I see now...
I have read almost all Witcher books on this app and this is the best one I have read. It has everything I was looking for in a Witcher book. If you are looking for not only a good Witcher book but also a really good book you will not be unhappy with choosing this one.
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We don't get to see many Witcher fanfics, but I am positively relishing this, keep up the outstanding work author and please don't drop this work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an incredibly frustrating read. I can see the authors ideas and the way he wants to shape the story but the writing is just not good enough. The conversations feel awkward, there are a lot of errors in grammar and the overall feel of the characters is just that bit "off". It always teeters on the edge of being a good read but never actually quite manages to get there. I commend you for trying to make the mc an actual child but I think you bit of more than you can chew. Its like you have all the right building blocks for a child mc but you fail at putting them together in a way thats realistic or at the very least presentable.
I'm really enjoying this fanfic keep up the good work, The story has a good progression so far and I like how the character is being portrayed.
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Author Review Time. What I can say about the story so far (Chapter 16) I like my story, and I try to write it to the best of my abilities. I try to develop my character and show the traits of others. I have been writing this with a lot of research done, but don’t expect a very accurate timeline, since I combine books and games it has some confusion between those. I try to explain everything about events in detail, so people that want to read a story, but didn’t read a book or played a game don’t feel abandoned or lost. I will try to avoid writing about serious romance for the time being since this is a story about adventure, struggles and goals that mc achieves before any kind of relationship. There will be plenty of OC characters and those that were in the books and games. I hope people reading the novel enjoy it as I do. And have a pleasant time.
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Plz no harem... I mean Geralt didn't get it so why MC? ....................................................................................................................................................
loving it so far, I've been looking for a decent witcher fanfic for over a year. since "alan: tale of orgin blood was dropped. you're doing really well so far, the story is smooth and the character design is great. I would love to see in depth writing about alchemy and magic arts, maybe meditation/cultivation. would love for more oc's eventually and I can't wait for the mc to interact with dandelion. I do have a question if you have a possible love interest in mind all ready like triss or a completely new character. I really love the book so far, keep up the great work author. can't wait for more. I wish you health.
I have been waiting for a Witcher fanfic, and this is pretty good just keep the regular updates and the good work Ciri for me
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3-3-3-3-4 The writing had some spelling and grammatical errors. Story is a bit bland, there's barely any monster hunting, yeah humans are monsters too but ykwim. The MC is indifferent then overly attached.It just doesn't make sense since his trial should desensitize him of human nature.
A PROPOSTA da fanfic é boa. SOMENTE. No demais, é uma confusão de encrencas igual aquelas obras chinesas de cultivo, onde aparece um inimigo sem explicação a cada espirro. Chato e deprimente.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it's a great story and one of the First witcher ff that i read... I just want to know if you will continue with this story or not...ok you want to make a better start with the other one but will you drop this?
Good Novel of the witcher___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The story is mostly dark and bland, character isn't really relatable or creates a big impression. Has memories of the past of the wars of humans, elf's and other races. So he starts despising people viewing them at the same level as monsters. But you can see he also has the same characteristics that he 'despises' like greet,hate, disgust, and making decisions based of those emotions. so nothing truly interesting in his personality just seems more like a hypocrite. the world background is alright nothing ground breaking but does give good background into the Witcher world for people who haven't read,played, or watched the Witcher series. There's also a bit of plot holes that leave me wondering like at the end of the battle at the castle there was suppose to be 40 kids when it was last talked about after the death of a few kids but then it dropped to 30 when they went back to the castle. Also I might have missed it but what happened to the wolf cubs?
A good witcher story probably the best on webnovel just a bit dark as a setting but nothing extreme. All in all i recommend the fiction even if you watched only the series or played the games.
Annoyingly decent is a great way to describe this book. The constant contradictions in character and overall logic absolutely ruin the atmosphere of the Witcher universe and this book as a whole(He almost loses in a sword fight to some arrogant prince because, in the authors eyes, "nobodies perfect" while trying to make him more human. Which sure, i agree no ones perfect, but he is a WITCHER not a human, he will hear and smell the guard behind him(in full metal plate might i add, very loud btw) before he goes to attack him. Dialogue and personality of the MC is mundane and forced (robotic) so theres not much going for character development. Some issues with grammar here and there but its still very good, especially when it's not the authors first language which i was impressed with. Author also can't take criticism to save his life, making commenting trying to help with absolutely stupid decisions or dialogue tiring ,when you are an invested reader trying to help them improve.
It's good ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... Now read it!
i enjoyed ur novel thanks, by the way i still think lol princess would have been the best choice for the romance, but i won't be able to see it either way so thanks for the novel
I don't really know nothing about the Witcher, so I'm asking this, what's the storyline here ? It's start from the Witcher 1 or 2 or 3 ? I'm asking this cuz there is a channel on YouTube(Game Movie Land) where they make movies from a game. So if you guide me, I'm going to see it first on YouTube and then read the fanfic. Giving 5 stars, this is new on this site. Don't make it harem please, we are tired of that ****, it's everywhere …
Excellent work, I think the advantages here clearly outweigh everything else. The only negative is only for readers from Russian-speaking countries (Russia and so on), we have all the monsters named after themselves, because initially they were copied from our chronicles, so often we have to check the names to see what kind of monster I see now...
I have read almost all Witcher books on this app and this is the best one I have read. It has everything I was looking for in a Witcher book. If you are looking for not only a good Witcher book but also a really good book you will not be unhappy with choosing this one.
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We don't get to see many Witcher fanfics, but I am positively relishing this, keep up the outstanding work author and please don't drop this work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an incredibly frustrating read. I can see the authors ideas and the way he wants to shape the story but the writing is just not good enough. The conversations feel awkward, there are a lot of errors in grammar and the overall feel of the characters is just that bit "off". It always teeters on the edge of being a good read but never actually quite manages to get there. I commend you for trying to make the mc an actual child but I think you bit of more than you can chew. Its like you have all the right building blocks for a child mc but you fail at putting them together in a way thats realistic or at the very least presentable.
I'm really enjoying this fanfic keep up the good work, The story has a good progression so far and I like how the character is being portrayed.
amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing
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Author Review Time. What I can say about the story so far (Chapter 16) I like my story, and I try to write it to the best of my abilities. I try to develop my character and show the traits of others. I have been writing this with a lot of research done, but don’t expect a very accurate timeline, since I combine books and games it has some confusion between those. I try to explain everything about events in detail, so people that want to read a story, but didn’t read a book or played a game don’t feel abandoned or lost. I will try to avoid writing about serious romance for the time being since this is a story about adventure, struggles and goals that mc achieves before any kind of relationship. There will be plenty of OC characters and those that were in the books and games. I hope people reading the novel enjoy it as I do. And have a pleasant time.
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Plz no harem... I mean Geralt didn't get it so why MC? ....................................................................................................................................................
loving it so far, I've been looking for a decent witcher fanfic for over a year. since "alan: tale of orgin blood was dropped. you're doing really well so far, the story is smooth and the character design is great. I would love to see in depth writing about alchemy and magic arts, maybe meditation/cultivation. would love for more oc's eventually and I can't wait for the mc to interact with dandelion. I do have a question if you have a possible love interest in mind all ready like triss or a completely new character. I really love the book so far, keep up the great work author. can't wait for more. I wish you health.
I have been waiting for a Witcher fanfic, and this is pretty good just keep the regular updates and the good work Ciri for me
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3-3-3-3-4 The writing had some spelling and grammatical errors. Story is a bit bland, there's barely any monster hunting, yeah humans are monsters too but ykwim. The MC is indifferent then overly attached.It just doesn't make sense since his trial should desensitize him of human nature.