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The concept is good this might've been a good fic if not for the reason that I cant understand it most of the time the only thing that's good about this is the update stability if the grammar or the translation was better this would've had at least 4 stars in my opinion
this is not reincarnation/transmigration or isekai, mc is oc(original character) matou shinji but get future knowledge and experience of sword mastery... and mc is lo licon...
Where can i read raw? 🌟🌟🌟👍👍👍👍👍👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👍👍👍👍👍😂👍👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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The concept is good this might've been a good fic if not for the reason that I cant understand it most of the time the only thing that's good about this is the update stability if the grammar or the translation was better this would've had at least 4 stars in my opinion
this is not reincarnation/transmigration or isekai, mc is oc(original character) matou shinji but get future knowledge and experience of sword mastery... and mc is lo licon...
Where can i read raw? 🌟🌟🌟👍👍👍👍👍👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👍👍👍👍👍😂👍👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍👍🌟👍👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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