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Here's my own review for this novel. I don't like reading my novel. I feel nothing so-- 3 stars The updates? I update 2 chapters or 3 chapters mostly. Every day Story Development? Do you enjoy reading your own story? No, right? So I will rate 3 stars. Character Design? I like manipulative main character if he/she isn't too dark. And I won't make the Mc like that. 4 STARs World Background? It's DxD! 5 stars.
It's good and readable but there is still room for improvement. One of the many normal books on webnovel which you can read to pass time. This is what is currently think.
Gimme reviews! I really wanted to know how do you think of my novel. And no, don't just review and add 5 stars or lower if you don't have explanation or else I will delete it. For now I won't delete every review you guys do except, low rating with no explanation. I really need reviews!
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The first 1-4 chapters are might be bad... But don't worry I think in 5 chapters are okay now?
I should make chapters longer... What about 1k to 1.5k words each chapter from now on?
Here's my own review for this novel. I don't like reading my novel. I feel nothing so-- 3 stars The updates? I update 2 chapters or 3 chapters mostly. Every day Story Development? Do you enjoy reading your own story? No, right? So I will rate 3 stars. Character Design? I like manipulative main character if he/she isn't too dark. And I won't make the Mc like that. 4 STARs World Background? It's DxD! 5 stars.
It's good and readable but there is still room for improvement. One of the many normal books on webnovel which you can read to pass time. This is what is currently think.
Gimme reviews! I really wanted to know how do you think of my novel. And no, don't just review and add 5 stars or lower if you don't have explanation or else I will delete it. For now I won't delete every review you guys do except, low rating with no explanation. I really need reviews!
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
The first 1-4 chapters are might be bad... But don't worry I think in 5 chapters are okay now?
I should make chapters longer... What about 1k to 1.5k words each chapter from now on?