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I just started. Quality writing, good pacing, and a great story line. The world building so far left oks great and you can tell the author has a plan due to foreshadowed elements. Keep up the good work. Already looking for the next chapters!
Amazing book so far, really interesting premise and setting. Haven't noticed any issues regarding grammar. Cannot wait for more to be posted!!
So around 20 chapter is released and i like the concept of having all 7 different sources in the novel . because mc is still child till 19 chapters not much abilities is shown but still it was enjoying to read till now and in future chapters i hope as mc has lived many lives he wont be ignorant type and handles thing ahead maturely.... Let see how the story goes .. And i want people who are reading this comment to upto latest chapter or atleast 30 chapters before deciding to read further or not.
I just started. Quality writing, good pacing, and a great story line. The world building so far left oks great and you can tell the author has a plan due to foreshadowed elements. Keep up the good work. Already looking for the next chapters!
Amazing book so far, really interesting premise and setting. Haven't noticed any issues regarding grammar. Cannot wait for more to be posted!!
So around 20 chapter is released and i like the concept of having all 7 different sources in the novel . because mc is still child till 19 chapters not much abilities is shown but still it was enjoying to read till now and in future chapters i hope as mc has lived many lives he wont be ignorant type and handles thing ahead maturely.... Let see how the story goes .. And i want people who are reading this comment to upto latest chapter or atleast 30 chapters before deciding to read further or not.