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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I like the general story idea, but there are way too many grammar mistakes, and it makes reading it a bit of a chore. plus I'm not too keen on zaya as a character already.
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my brother writes good books. the best books. so here is the review you deserve. Anyway, y'all better continue reading that book or else you'll get problems with me.
I really like where this story is going. I’m looking forward to the next chapters and where the future of this story will take us. I really like this book keep up the good work!
I like the general story idea, but there are way too many grammar mistakes, and it makes reading it a bit of a chore. plus I'm not too keen on zaya as a character already.
......................................................,....................,..,...←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←←_←☜ (↼_↼)☜ (↼_↼)☜ (↼_↼)☜ (↼_↼)
my brother writes good books. the best books. so here is the review you deserve. Anyway, y'all better continue reading that book or else you'll get problems with me.
I really like where this story is going. I’m looking forward to the next chapters and where the future of this story will take us. I really like this book keep up the good work!