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Novel is probably a 3.5 overall but the author is inconsistent and will put the novel on a break for months followed by coming back for a few chapters then months more on a break so I’m giving it a 1 star
welp I'm done, this Chinese obsession with being a cuckold beta simp is disgusting
hey author , everything that happens how does the side characters also see it when they died and all that and it should be notification that to mc and side characters also sees that . do something about it .All everything is good and all but excessive side character blabbering is not, it's annoying .
To author your story line is great but please don't repeat same scenes (he know about hidden quest then he went there and kill all enemy and got experience) This is all in this novel until now, Plz add some scenes of protagonist personal life his history and situations in real life he always play games 24 hrs with same plot repeatedly didn't do anything else And that girl flowing him blindly without asking anything, come on it is believable at some point but, she is following this long
like it very much and hope that more chapters are about to be released in the very near future
is this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week now
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This book is one of my favorites and one of the best I've read so far.i like the story and the world so far. I can't wait to see what the next familiar will be I love dragons will it be another dragon or something else?
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Average to decent. A good time waster. The overall plot is good, the story is good, the world background is good. There is not a lot of info dumps, but when they occur it is short. This novel suffers tremendously from typical CH peanut gallery commentary. Expect anywhere from 1/4 to 1/2 of a chapter with action to be made up of "noise" from the peanut gallery. If the author cut this down to a few lines and filled the rest of their word count with character development between the MC and him companions it would drastically increase the value of the novel. Now the MC is not very well fleshed out, the author has "alluded" to him having thoughts and a personality. However without his unspoken thoughts, the mc at ch 70 is just a mindless guy rushing to get all the benefits his future knowledge will allow. At this point this is just a moderately more interesting novel on this site. Hopefully the author can "breathe life" into the character interaction and the personality of the MC so the novel will not flop.
The story feels as though there's only MC, the others characters are not introduced properly and that su muxue girl barely have some 20 lines despite being with MC most of the time
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Thanks for the update of this novel I hope 🤞 someone can share the Chinese name of this novel
The story was interesting but if you want to skip I recommend you to do a small summary so we can understand. Like I lost you before level 15 anoumment, when is the guild made, what is the minimum number of members and how did he get a lot of enemies? Another way if you don't want to explain too much you can use '## days has past after enter the town....' like this some detail to connect the story. Also author you might want to check the chapter update from chapter 61 it go back to well chapter 51 again.
Not sure why everyone keeps writing about playing video games. Like, you realize we could just play video games ourself if we wanted that kind of experience.
interesting twist on gamer type stories. good character and world development .not hyper or over explanations to everything at least in these 40 chapters
My thoughts about all the females character in the novel: .... ..... ..... ...... ....... ...... ....... ....... ........ .......... .......
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story was good but guy's do you know what the Raw name is? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Overall it is a nice story, that has lots of potential with the consepts in it and it isn't too rushed but still keeps at a pace that dosn't make you bored.
Can someone share the Chinese name of this novel ?? In Chinese characters or romanization Raws !!! We will appreciate your help 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -
The idea that women are objects to be owned, possessed, or collected is rather abhorrent to me. No matter how nice the idea is packaged in a story I still find it rather disgusting.
Over 2 years without an update means webnovel has dropped this which isn’t surprising I just wish they would change the novel to dropped instead of that fake hiatus
Novel is probably a 3.5 overall but the author is inconsistent and will put the novel on a break for months followed by coming back for a few chapters then months more on a break so I’m giving it a 1 star
welp I'm done, this Chinese obsession with being a cuckold beta simp is disgusting
hey author , everything that happens how does the side characters also see it when they died and all that and it should be notification that to mc and side characters also sees that . do something about it .All everything is good and all but excessive side character blabbering is not, it's annoying .
To author your story line is great but please don't repeat same scenes (he know about hidden quest then he went there and kill all enemy and got experience) This is all in this novel until now, Plz add some scenes of protagonist personal life his history and situations in real life he always play games 24 hrs with same plot repeatedly didn't do anything else And that girl flowing him blindly without asking anything, come on it is believable at some point but, she is following this long
like it very much and hope that more chapters are about to be released in the very near future
is this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week now
Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash
..... .. .. ...................... .. ................................... ................. ................................................
raw? MTL? anyone ? ******************#############£######££"£_______#@@@@@@@@@@@@@!!!!!???(()))//%%%%%<<%¥¥€¢¢®©™™™™✓✓✓✓}{[]\∆¶π√•|`~~~~***
This book is one of my favorites and one of the best I've read so far.i like the story and the world so far. I can't wait to see what the next familiar will be I love dragons will it be another dragon or something else?
raw link pleaaaaaaase .........😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆😝😆😝😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆😊😊😊😆😝😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆☺😆😝😆😝
Average to decent. A good time waster. The overall plot is good, the story is good, the world background is good. There is not a lot of info dumps, but when they occur it is short. This novel suffers tremendously from typical CH peanut gallery commentary. Expect anywhere from 1/4 to 1/2 of a chapter with action to be made up of "noise" from the peanut gallery. If the author cut this down to a few lines and filled the rest of their word count with character development between the MC and him companions it would drastically increase the value of the novel. Now the MC is not very well fleshed out, the author has "alluded" to him having thoughts and a personality. However without his unspoken thoughts, the mc at ch 70 is just a mindless guy rushing to get all the benefits his future knowledge will allow. At this point this is just a moderately more interesting novel on this site. Hopefully the author can "breathe life" into the character interaction and the personality of the MC so the novel will not flop.
The story feels as though there's only MC, the others characters are not introduced properly and that su muxue girl barely have some 20 lines despite being with MC most of the time
very good book 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
Thanks for the update of this novel I hope 🤞 someone can share the Chinese name of this novel
The story was interesting but if you want to skip I recommend you to do a small summary so we can understand. Like I lost you before level 15 anoumment, when is the guild made, what is the minimum number of members and how did he get a lot of enemies? Another way if you don't want to explain too much you can use '## days has past after enter the town....' like this some detail to connect the story. Also author you might want to check the chapter update from chapter 61 it go back to well chapter 51 again.
Not sure why everyone keeps writing about playing video games. Like, you realize we could just play video games ourself if we wanted that kind of experience.
interesting twist on gamer type stories. good character and world development .not hyper or over explanations to everything at least in these 40 chapters
My thoughts about all the females character in the novel: .... ..... ..... ...... ....... ...... ....... ....... ........ .......... .......
pls update[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
All weep asdfhjkutyjjgukkjhhhhhggh jjjjhhhhhhhyfhitfjiugnihnhfgjugbjthjhggjhgfhbghtdfhhgyhyggggggujjguhghdthdyhfybtujthgryhggydthethgfthfryj
story was good but guy's do you know what the Raw name is? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
start releasing new chapters😁 )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Overall it is a nice story, that has lots of potential with the consepts in it and it isn't too rushed but still keeps at a pace that dosn't make you bored.
Can someone share the Chinese name of this novel ?? In Chinese characters or romanization Raws !!! We will appreciate your help 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -Raws -
The idea that women are objects to be owned, possessed, or collected is rather abhorrent to me. No matter how nice the idea is packaged in a story I still find it rather disgusting.
Over 2 years without an update means webnovel has dropped this which isn’t surprising I just wish they would change the novel to dropped instead of that fake hiatus