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Last two chapters were rushed, Xiao Ran cultivation had risen from the fifth level of the heaven sealing realm to the tenth level of the Emperor realm at 1514 then at 1515 reached 10 level Myth realm.
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intesting story.the writer’s idea is remarkable.. everything is in details..please update more chapter..
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no....just no------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's a novel with a good start and potential, however, as chapter passed by the writing quality began to plumment. There are a lot of mistakes to the point that some doesn't make sense. The author don't put much effort on writing. Even the Mc level is on chaos.
i didn't like its end when they left only 3 woman of his out of 7 left with him. shui ling and rou they were just mortals so i dont think much could be left behind and ling qing'er and first princess xiao stayed as well?? even his beasts followed.
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If you just want to read a power fantasy nonsense for a second then here you are but if you are looking for a quality novel go elsewhere it isnt here.
Wanna lose some brain cells? Read then Cultivation level name kept changing. MC's gender kept changing like its having an identity crisis. Translation? More like MTL.
the author could have at least elaborate the spiritual/warrior levels at the starting chapters, how are we suppose to estimate how strong the mc is?
to sum up this novel, the MC is a guy who solves all the problems of the kingdom in which he finds everything remains hidden, no one knows... it's a little annoying
It's a well written book but the author ended the story forcibly in the last chapter.
another kinda good Chinese novel that ends up being butchered at the end... rushed endings like this one makes the quality of the novel go down by a lot
This webnovel was a great binge read, eventually evolving into a daily ritual. Sad it’s over but it ended well. Thank you to the author and the translator for a marvelously entertaining respite from the real world and ostensibly real work.
Lovely book that follows the male lead through his growth. The ML is a decisive character and doesn’ fear anyone. Though I found the finale too speedy everything was wrapped up! Great book and sorry to see it end. I really enjoyed and looked forward to the daily releases. Thank you Xiaobai.
Mc has no emotion at all no happiness or anger nothing at all, I've red till chapter 170+ and he shows no emotion even though he is bothered by the "aunt" every day by entering his home without permission or destroying his staff ( the bathtub) even though it bothers him but he does not say anything to her or gets angry at all. It would have ok if he was a Japanese dude that reincarnated but it's a chinese guy and that's strange especially in a cultivation novel.
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Translation quality drops to MTL standards after a hundred chapters without any interesting plot to make it worth struggling to read a MTL
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This starts out great but then it changes writing styles and it is so bad about switching words out. A example that is common is the genders are all switched. he is she his is hers you is them. It is really frustrating. This seems like a Google translate error
okay this is my last review for this novel i try and give it a go but it didnt get any better and it become MTL and your fking charging money with this kind of translation? so i will just point it out a bit so Zi Luan is looking for saint fruit to cure her but the old dude told her that his whole sect betray him and ruin him telling her not to trust elder Bai and leave asap but the Zi Luan the idiot still want the fruit and they even put poison in the fruit and she still want to eat the fruit? why not test it first to see if the fruit is safe to eat? and this is one of the stupid char in the novel and there are a lot more.. so im just saving you sometime dont read this trash or waste your time because it not worth it, I'm done with this novel also.
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Story is quite good. System where the ML gets rewards after every kill or after he imprisoned someone. Translation is horrible. MTL might be better.
if only you guys didn't make the mc overpowered from the beginning then this would have been an amazing novel. Now I don't want to read this
Last two chapters were rushed, Xiao Ran cultivation had risen from the fifth level of the heaven sealing realm to the tenth level of the Emperor realm at 1514 then at 1515 reached 10 level Myth realm.
Spoiler de révélation intesting story.the writer’s idea is remarkable.. everything is in details..please update more chapter..
Spoiler de révélation no....just no------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's a novel with a good start and potential, however, as chapter passed by the writing quality began to plumment. There are a lot of mistakes to the point that some doesn't make sense. The author don't put much effort on writing. Even the Mc level is on chaos.
i didn't like its end when they left only 3 woman of his out of 7 left with him. shui ling and rou they were just mortals so i dont think much could be left behind and ling qing'er and first princess xiao stayed as well?? even his beasts followed.
Spoiler de révélation If you just want to read a power fantasy nonsense for a second then here you are but if you are looking for a quality novel go elsewhere it isnt here.
Wanna lose some brain cells? Read then Cultivation level name kept changing. MC's gender kept changing like its having an identity crisis. Translation? More like MTL.
the author could have at least elaborate the spiritual/warrior levels at the starting chapters, how are we suppose to estimate how strong the mc is?
to sum up this novel, the MC is a guy who solves all the problems of the kingdom in which he finds everything remains hidden, no one knows... it's a little annoying
It's a well written book but the author ended the story forcibly in the last chapter.
another kinda good Chinese novel that ends up being butchered at the end... rushed endings like this one makes the quality of the novel go down by a lot
This webnovel was a great binge read, eventually evolving into a daily ritual. Sad it’s over but it ended well. Thank you to the author and the translator for a marvelously entertaining respite from the real world and ostensibly real work.
Lovely book that follows the male lead through his growth. The ML is a decisive character and doesn’ fear anyone. Though I found the finale too speedy everything was wrapped up! Great book and sorry to see it end. I really enjoyed and looked forward to the daily releases. Thank you Xiaobai.
Mc has no emotion at all no happiness or anger nothing at all, I've red till chapter 170+ and he shows no emotion even though he is bothered by the "aunt" every day by entering his home without permission or destroying his staff ( the bathtub) even though it bothers him but he does not say anything to her or gets angry at all. It would have ok if he was a Japanese dude that reincarnated but it's a chinese guy and that's strange especially in a cultivation novel.
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Translation quality drops to MTL standards after a hundred chapters without any interesting plot to make it worth struggling to read a MTL
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This starts out great but then it changes writing styles and it is so bad about switching words out. A example that is common is the genders are all switched. he is she his is hers you is them. It is really frustrating. This seems like a Google translate error
okay this is my last review for this novel i try and give it a go but it didnt get any better and it become MTL and your fking charging money with this kind of translation? so i will just point it out a bit so Zi Luan is looking for saint fruit to cure her but the old dude told her that his whole sect betray him and ruin him telling her not to trust elder Bai and leave asap but the Zi Luan the idiot still want the fruit and they even put poison in the fruit and she still want to eat the fruit? why not test it first to see if the fruit is safe to eat? and this is one of the stupid char in the novel and there are a lot more.. so im just saving you sometime dont read this trash or waste your time because it not worth it, I'm done with this novel also.
Spoiler de révélation Story is quite good. System where the ML gets rewards after every kill or after he imprisoned someone. Translation is horrible. MTL might be better.
if only you guys didn't make the mc overpowered from the beginning then this would have been an amazing novel. Now I don't want to read this