Martial Peak: Fracture

LV 5

EphemeralKaos

This is fantastic! Now I am a very critical person so if I think something is bad I’ll say it’s bad if I think something is stupid I’ll say it’s stupid and I don’t really ever give well a review in general but if I do it’s most definitely not a good one, but man let me tell you this is fantastic

LV 4

Paragen

The shameless author is here to review his own work because yes. Writing Quality: I feel that I do have a good basis and my vocabulary is capable enough to create a nice and relaxing reading environment for you guys. Story Development: I am nothing but a newbie author, so I don't expect myself to create the biggest plots. But I do have the confidence that I am able to give you guys something decently good. Character Design: google images go brrr. World Background: I tend to give way too many details on the scenery, but I'm taking advice to heart to try to only pinpoint the most important characteristics of the place the characters are. Too much detail makes it tedious and boring, so I'll try my best to not waste so many words on one thing. Stability of Updates: Why is this the last? Well, I am still having trouble with my update schedule. I usually like to release a chapter one day and then write on the other, thus maintaining this type of schedule until the weekend. But I have college to worry about as well, so my main priority is not centered on this fanfic. Anyway, I guess that's it! I hope you enjoy this fanfic as much as I am having a good time writing it. bo-bye!

LV 13

Evillangal389

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LV 2

ArslanII

Writing Quality: The author's grammar is very good, but there's the occasional mistake here and there, there are some sentences that are more convoluted than they need to be, but overall it's very good. Stability of Updates: Seven chapters have been updated during twenty days, so I'd say the stability of updates is pretty good also. Story Development: So far the story has been pretty engaging and interesting, it isn't the best I've ever read, but since this is the author's first work it has a lot of potential. Character Design: We haven't been given an in-depth review of the MC at the time of this review, besides him hating his name and him losing his emotions during the beginning chapters, and to be honest I'm not sure if I even interpreted that part right either since it does seem like he feels some emotion on the latest chapter, so don't quote me on that. World Background: This is fanfic, unless the author completely butchers the Martial Peak setting this is always going to be a five-star. Thoughts: I got to say this has the potential to be the best Martial Peak fanfic I've read, and to be fair Martial Peak has just been introduced during the last chapter, so I may be jumping the gun here, but the story has been so engaging that I can't help and be optimistic.

LV 13

NAMI_SWAAAAAN

Wow. Thats all i can say after reading the prologue. I found little to no grammar mistake and from the looks of it, i’m sure we can expect more with the same quality. Although i haven’t read Martial peak and the novel you’ve mentioned, I’m excited to read more. So thanks and hope you don’t drop this work in the future.

LV 13

ArzeusT

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LV 2

BrasileiroPutasso

Just because it's a Martial Peak fic it deserves 5 stars, but I'll control myself. Muito top gostei bastante, não só por ser de Martial peak, mas e bem top, não e a melhor mas também não e a pior, recomendo muito.

LV 1

Traumer

In all honesty, this is amazing! I've never seen such quality content in a fanfic before, this is a first! I can already expect this story to be great, looking forward to more!