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I will give it a 4 for now but if the story keeps the way it's going and gets over 50 chapters, it's an easy 5 stars. please keep releasing chapters
I only remember this story making me cringe really hard. Something something, Sasuke with double chakra scalpels, sharingan super regeneration... lol imagine a pre-teen giving you a list of all the abilities and powers of their made up super hero. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Tout simplement magnifique cette histoire le déroulement des évènements et les personnages sont bien écrit et naturel svp continue à l'écrire 🙏.
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sorry if this is a low tier review but here goes nothing the author knows what he's doing despite the words sometimes being smashed together it's readable the chapters are decently long and the update times make sense if the slow pace and detailed description are your thing definitely give it a read
Loved your other fic sooo 5 stars for this one - A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A Aa A A A Aa A A A A A A A Aa A A A A A A A A A
I will give it a 4 for now but if the story keeps the way it's going and gets over 50 chapters, it's an easy 5 stars. please keep releasing chapters
I only remember this story making me cringe really hard. Something something, Sasuke with double chakra scalpels, sharingan super regeneration... lol imagine a pre-teen giving you a list of all the abilities and powers of their made up super hero. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Tout simplement magnifique cette histoire le déroulement des évènements et les personnages sont bien écrit et naturel svp continue à l'écrire 🙏.
Spoiler de révélation sorry if this is a low tier review but here goes nothing the author knows what he's doing despite the words sometimes being smashed together it's readable the chapters are decently long and the update times make sense if the slow pace and detailed description are your thing definitely give it a read
Loved your other fic sooo 5 stars for this one - A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A Aa A A A Aa A A A A A A A Aa A A A A A A A A A
very good fic i love it ane of the gems among self inserts in sasuke