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This is such a relatable beginning. The worry about paying bills and having so much debt. You can really feel for her and I can really relate to it. Well done! I'm excited to see what happens next!
Such a great story! From the very beginning I was already hooked by the main characters. I can't wait to read more from this author. I hope more chapters drop soon!
I love the relatability of the beginning! The anxiety of losing a job or worrying about money is a premise I always love seeing characters deal with and overcome! Really excited to see how this story turns out! It's already exciting!
Bahaha! I'm only laughing because it's so funny how true and great and relatable this story is!! I can't wait to see more from you!!!!!! [img=update]
This is such a relatable beginning. The worry about paying bills and having so much debt. You can really feel for her and I can really relate to it. Well done! I'm excited to see what happens next!
Such a great story! From the very beginning I was already hooked by the main characters. I can't wait to read more from this author. I hope more chapters drop soon!
I love the relatability of the beginning! The anxiety of losing a job or worrying about money is a premise I always love seeing characters deal with and overcome! Really excited to see how this story turns out! It's already exciting!
Bahaha! I'm only laughing because it's so funny how true and great and relatable this story is!! I can't wait to see more from you!!!!!! [img=update]